Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!!

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Isha

@gilmore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

it was an super part i ope he understand sooon that he loves her ahahhah waitirng for more

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#432

Ooh... We are getting there baby!!!!! Great update as usual 👍🏼

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#433

Evil evil Arnav... This is a turnaround chapter and showcases Arnavs hypocracy and insecurity. He needed this to realize how much Khushi meanz to him and what their relationship is. Really nice. Enjoyed reading it.

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pheonix24

@pheonix24

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Loved it!..Arnav is so evil..hehehe..But yeah...he needed some TLC from his Khushi...😆..Poor Khushi..She must be feeling so guilty...

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Sarina2012

@Sarina2012

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#435

Will have to comment on both of the last chapters. Both just superb

Chap 5:loved the way u described the differences btn Shyam and Anjali's relationship. They have feelings for each other. Shyam loving her yet not telling her. 11 years wow!! Like they not having a decent conversation r they? And now Shyam is realizing something is missing. Will he find out before its too late.

Ohh she is missing her chote who she thinks is dead. And then the musings. Interesting. But she still doesn't know the past. Gosh they really need to talk.

Wow.. U rock girl.. Go for it khushi. It was awesome.. Like seriously those men needed it bad!! Hehehhee cracked me up! Loved the way Arnav felt for her at that time. He really loves her deluding himself that it's coz he is her mentor.

Chap 6: wow!! Loved what khushi did. Okay so Arnav played backhand. But it was about time he got a taste of his own medicine. Mentor my foot. But the flashbacks were awesome. Very touching.

Loved the description of the black dress. How the description changed with the person. As in b4 Arnav knew who was wearing the outfit to when he knew who was wearing.. Lol!!

Poor aman... Loved his insight!! Smart boy.. He wasn't asr's PA for no reason was he? Poor khushi... It was all pretense.. And now she is feeling bad..

I liked the crypted sentence of khushi. How many more successes will they have TOGETHER?

Loving this story.,,

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shilpa

@agshilpa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#436

hello gargee and bingala,

i love ur stories and this particular one has been the jewel of the crown of ur collection.

keep spinning ur tale and keep ur readers amused.

love u both.

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prachi

@Prachi..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#437

awesome

amazing

smart ass arnav.

he is damn possessive.

thanks for the pm

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#438

I read this without getting a pm but thanks for the pm in advance. Wow what a way for Khushi to play a revenge card. Brilliant. Arnav so deserved that after what he had done. Lets hope that Khushi does end up seeing right through him soon and plays more revenge cards on him. I know she relly loves him but he hasn't realised he is also in love with her and doesn't want to aknowledge it. Exceptionally written.

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#439

Gals. Why do you do this.

Give an amazing update and go hide in your shells until we beg for an update?

The same way for this. When I just want more, the update ends. I hate u ladies. Better update soon please!

Ah! Arnav, finally curious to know why he felt stabbed when Kushi was with someone! She is his's yet not his! Nice complication!

Would u please both gimme ur home addresses?? ;)

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#440

This is one of the best stories on this forum. You guys write so beautifully. I mean every time you use the phrase, His Girl, I have a mini dhak dhak, seriously.

Arnav will never be ready to give her away, and he knows it deep down:) And Aman is an intelligent man, he knows a change is coming and I'm glad it has finally got triggered:D

Brilliant update 😃