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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

dat was so sweet update
KR playing n teasing each other
Aww dey are cute
pls update asap


Thanx dear...

Hmm thats my fav part too...

Will update either tomorrow or the next week
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

aww,...cho chweet...they became friends...and kria smiled and happy...the copycat conversation was way too cute...loved it...ab ye kaun villain aa gaye in dono ki story mein...next update jaldi karo...mujhe chote wale kriyansh aur bhi zyada cute lage.,...badewale bhi hain,,,,,,,,,,but kids ki to bat hi alag hai,...pout boy...aww...love u konpal...


Thanks dear but ise mahima ne update kiya hai maine nahi...

Well chote waale kriyaansh ab sirf do - teen updates mein hi rahenge...

Aakhir unhe bada bhi toh karna padega...

I will update either tomorrow or the next week pakka
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...rey is gonna be adopted n kriya is sad 😭...pls make dem grown ups soon n dnt gve many sad parts...pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: shiksha_03

nice update...rey is gonna be adopted n kriya is sad 😭...pls make dem grown ups soon n dnt gve many sad parts...pls continue soon


Will surely try to update soon dear

Yup hes gonna b adopted but inki friendship itni aasaani se nahi tutne waali...😉

Zayada sad parts nahi dungi pakka 😊

And THANX for liking it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Will update today guys 😃
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Hey guys im here with part 3... enjoy reading...

Part 3


*Orphanage*

The sister came towards our little Kriyaansh... she was more happy than anyone to see Kriya smiling but was sad too b'coz this smile was gonna vanish soon...

S - Kriya... Reyaansh... comeon both of u... u know na today some couples are gonna come to adopt some children so fast... get ready...

Rey and Kriya looked towards eachother... they were sad and scared that if anyone of them will b adopted so???? what will happen????

R and K - Ok!!!

They both went and got ready...

*In Mumbai*

1st woman - ma'am everything is ready...
2nd woman - good... we are leaving for that orphanage today only...
1st woman - ma'am whats so special in that girl?

2nd woman smirked...

2nd woman - she is the key to bring my son back..
A man from back - how come shes a key to bring back bhai mom?
2nd woman - oh jeh u dont know...
Jeh - so just tell me na mom? im eager to bring back bhai...
2W - she is the daughter of . . . . . . . .
Jeh - really!!!
2W - ya... she is the key to it...

*Back to orphanage*

S - so u want to adopt him mr. singhania?
M.S. - ya thats why we are here I suppose...
S - alright then... but I wanna tell u 1 thing before that...
M.S - go on...
S - well he is very close to a girl over here and so as she... he wont behave like he behave now after that...
M.S. - we will manage it...
S - ok then... reyaansh beta idhar aao...

Both kriyaansh come to her or u can say rey forced kriya to come with him there...

M.S - hello beta...
R - hello
M.S. - aap hamare saath chaloge?

Rey was now sad...he truely knew what did it mean and so as kriya... He looked at kriya who was then having tears in her eyes... She backed of her hand and went in her room crying... she locked the door from inside... rey too went behind her without giving any answer to them...

R - Kriya... kriya darvaza khol na.. pls...
K - nahi main nahi kholungi... tu jaa...
R - agar jaaunga toh teri bahut yaad aayegi... mujhe nahi jaana...
K - tu jaata hai ya ek kheech ke chata maarun...
R - nahi man tere bina nahi jaaunga...
K - Pout boy jaata hai ya nahi... mujhe kisi se baat nahi karni... sab mujhe chorke chalegaye... tu bhi chala ja...
R - kriya maine kaha na main nahi jaaunga...
K - tujhe jaana padega b'coz they choosed u...
R - toh phir last time toh mil le pls...
K - nahi mujhe akela chod de...
R - nahi khol darvaza...
K - nahi
R - haan...

Finally after a lot of tutu main main Kriya opened the door and rey hugged her with all his force and cried... she too was crying...

R - mujhe nahi jaana...
K - tujhe jaana padega...
R - nahi... main tere saath rehna chahata hun...
K - ruk...

Kriya went and opened her drawer... there she found some cd's and albums... She took one of the cd and an album and gave it to rey...

K - le...
R - ye toh...

Kriya smiled and he again hugged her very tightly..

K - ab jaa...
R - tu bhi chal na pls...
K - jaa bhi unhon ne tujhe chuna hai mujhe nahi...
R - but...

Kriya shot him a glare and he left by saying good bye... now kriya broke down crying...

He left from the orphanage with singhania's...

*Mumbai*

2W - sh*t today only!!!
1W - sorry ma'am
2W - k fyn...

*Orphanage*

Days passed but she didnt felt good in the orphanage... one day seeking the opportunity she ran away from there... she was running when a car hit her... no it didnt actually hit her... she was just 1 inch away from that car when the car stoppend but she was somewhat hurt...

A man and a woman came out of the car and looked horrified... The only word came out of her mouth was "Reyaansh"

They both looked at eachother and then decided to take her to their home... the doctor checked her and told that she fine...

They both came towards kriya and she opened her eyes...

Woman - beta aapka naam kya hai aur aap aise kyun bhaag rahe the?
K - K...kriya...
Man - hmm so aapka naam kriya hai... hello im gautam...
K - he..hello
G - u dont need to be scared from us beta...
K - ok
Woman - hello im smriti...
K - hello aunty...
G - beta ye reyaansh kaun hai?
K - mera one and only friend...
S - ab kahan hai?
K - someone adopted him 😭
G - u r orphan?

Kriya nodded her head as to say yes...

Smriti looked at gautam...

S - gautam kya main tuse kuch baat kar sakti hun?
G - hmm...

They both went out and smriti told that she wants to adopt her as they dont have any daughter and gautam agreed... they both came back...

G - beta will u live with us?
K - bu..t
S - we want to adopt u beta... we want a daughter...

A tear escaped from kriya's eyes and she hugged smriti...

(p.s. - singania's and rai prakash knew each other from a long time back... they share a good bonding...)

A servent came in that room...

Se - ma'am wo log aaye hain...
S - ok tum jao...
G - beta chalo... abse aap humari beti ho...

Kriya smiled at them and hugged gautam too...

They three came down...

Now guess whos there with singhania's?

(main inki story itni bhi complicated nahi banane waali)

K - rey...aansh?
S - reyaansh kahan hai beta?

Kriya pointed towards a boy in Mrs. Singania's arms...

Smriti and Gautam looked at eachother...

S - priya ye ladka kaun hai?
P - I knew it was coming... smriti we adopted him... he is reyaansh... beta hi bolo aunty ko...
R - K..kriya...

He came down frrom Priya's and ran away from there




Huh! Bahut ho gaya guys aaj ke liye... Sorry for any typing errors didnt recheck... So now time for precap...

Precap -

K - sorry na :(
R - nahi main tujhse kabhi bhi baat nahi karunga... jhuti kahinki... tune mujhse waada kiya tha ki tu kabhi nahi. . . . . . .

So guys hows it?
Good?
Better?
Bad?
Nice?

Jaisa bhi hai zaroor batana... waiting for ur comments

Next update after 30 likes atleast itna toh expect kar hi sakti hun main...

Pms on the way
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
res

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awesum update 😊

luvd it 😊

Rey was now sad...he truely knew what did it mean and so as kriya... He looked at kriya who was then having tears in her eyes... She backed of her hand and went in her room crying... she locked the door from inside... rey too went behind her without giving any answer to them...

R - Kriya... kriya darvaza khol na.. pls...
K - nahi main nahi kholungi... tu jaa...
R - agar jaaunga toh teri bahut yaad aayegi... mujhe nahi jaana...
K - tu jaata hai ya ek kheech ke chata maarun...
R - nahi man tere bina nahi jaaunga...
K - Pout boy jaata hai ya nahi... mujhe kisi se baat nahi karni... sab mujhe chorke chalegaye... tu bhi chala ja...
R - kriya maine kaha na main nahi jaaunga...
K - tujhe jaana padega b'coz they choosed u...
R - toh phir last time toh mil le pls...
K - nahi mujhe akela chod de...
R - nahi khol darvaza...
K - nahi
R - haan...

Finally after a lot of tutu main main Kriya opened the door and rey hugged her with all his force and cried... she too was crying...
Awww kriyansh r chooo cuteee


nd wonder who's da grl dey were talkin bout thier key to bring jeh's bhai back
i guess its kriya
woww smriti nd gautham also adopted kriya yipie
precap as usual samaj nayi aaya
as u noe main ek confused aatma hun
bt phir bhi m happy KR mil gaye
waitin fr da nxt
jaldi update karna



Edited by luvcookie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Awesum!!! :D I loved t!!! <3 Wow!!! Ty fr d PM!!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
teri pitayi kru hamesha ase hi bolti hey
i love it u know
main kitni wait karti hoo update ki
and thanks tu always comment karti hey or main res kar ke unres karna bhool jati hoo
but i must say . it's superb
megical update keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
awesome updte...
aww kriyansh r so cutee...
thnx 4 the pm n updte the nxt prt soon

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