Rules Of Attraction#2 Chapter29 Pg125 19/08 - Page 52

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BRILLIANT!

I wish i had words to describe ur update... this was gentle yet so strong. it was deep yet so calm... the way u described khushi n arnav;s feellings is so mindblowing. u kept the words minimum, the feelings and emotions deep and the contact btn the two just soft enough yet strong... it was awesome..

Misty, you do know you are a shining star:D

"And all that remained was the cold, silent void, where love and pain danced, seamlessly together."

Her eyes were glossy, her cheeks wet, and lips glistening with a million tear drops. She looked beautiful but it was her expression that caught him off guard.

Khushi looked defeated. Arnav has never seen her like that before and at that moment he knew that he wanted it to be the first and the last time ever.

She did not look beautiful with that expression, he realized. This was not her. Not his Khushi.

Khushi, Arnav thought fondly, was a fierce and stubborn creature. Not an angel, no. Nor a fairy. But then not quite the devil either.

She was the one and the only one made for him and he wouldn't allow a mere disease to take her away from him."

DAMN! That was F beautiful! *wipes away tear*

He truly knows his Khushi inside out. She is not the one to look defeated and I am so happy he realizes that! I have full faith in Arnav! He will do something! Turn it all around! Dont answer me but just let me hope for now.

"The very man, who believed way too much in what he saw, read, heard, or what he knew was the truth, wanted to notbelieve in the facts for once in his life. He wanted it to be covered by layers of obscurity, so as to not face the brutal reality of the fact that maybe the next moment she wouldn't smile up at him. Or maybe she wouldn't clutch at his shirt like she was, then."

Ah. Excuse me. *doesnt know what to do...comes back to the story*

"She had fallen asleep. One could see Arnav smiling down with relief at her sleeping form.

But that recently familiar voice attacked him again.

She had fallen asleep...tonight. But, the next time?"

STOP IT! All these 'What ifs' are going to just make me go mad! You are an amazing writer, I get it! BUT JUST STOP THESE LITTLE SENTENCES WHICH JUST BREAK MY HEART!

"Seasons were changing, waves were crashing and the stars were falling for them. A flickering flame casted a singular shadow, a forewarning, perhaps."

Well that singlular shadow better mean she comes back. You get it. As usual, dont answer me just let me rant!

"'Are you out of you mind Khushi? Save this sympathy bullshit for someone else. No, don't interrupt me. This thing, the tumor is spreading with every passing second. And you're worried about how I'd treat you?' Arnav pulled her closer to himself, reveling in the warmth she offered to his own trembling body, before he continued. 'I spoke to Ajay. He knows a brilliant oncologist in the States. You are coming with me right away. Okay?'

'Why are you doing this Arnav?' Khushi asked, trying to keep her body from bring wrecked by tears once again.

'Why? Because I don't want to live a single day without you. I want to spend every last breath of my life by your side, not a minute less. Because I'm not letting this stupid excuse of a disease take you away from me. Because I love you Khushi, and I'm never letting you go...never,' he whispered, burying himself deeper into her hair.

'But you have to...Arnav. I won't survi-' Khushi whispered, as he pulled back her face, cupping it in his hands. 'Don't ever say that again. There are millions of cancer survivors in this world. And you'll be one of them, understand?'

Khushi nodded faintly, before placing forward an innocent question, 'Why me Arnav? You could find yourself someone more beautiful, more complete...' He cut her off again.

'I could search every inch of the world, and never find someone like you. I want you Khushi. Only you.'

Arnav gently placed on the bed again, before slowly bringing her lips, her skin to the brink of intoxication. His lips moved over hers, trying to reassure her, transfer the little of his own faltering courage into her hammering heart. Trying to tell her, that he would try to be there with her, always, no matter what."

GO ARNAV! And Khushi, listen to him.

TEAM ArHi all the way!

Loved it, Sona! :)

And sorry for the late comment. I read it earlier but couldnt bring myself to comment...

Anyway, great job! Update super soon. :)

Mind numbingly beautiful! The emotions you've captured with words are just...I'm speechless! 😊

Nice part

I want an update.

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

I want an update.

Please. :)