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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Wow! This is so interesting!

the disclaimers did nothing t deter me - in fact made me more excited to see what you'd written and that was even more amazing

cant wait for the next part!

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haminasto

@haminasto

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

ok im not below 18 though i dislike rock n roll and rest i do pass all disclaimers.
n im quite happy for that though again i shud not be readin but trying to mug up all anatomy as its likely that med skool will ban me this time.
But just cudnt help myself.
a full shot of badass Sheldon and a lurking Godfather(which i never really got the hang of) and after reading the brothel reply knowing instantly that the wife isnt Khushi..(or is she?)i just cant stop myself to look further.
i dont knw wats gonna happen here neither i have any ounce of how the dead living red light area will win all strikes against the aristocrats but as we deal with such cases in our field of work i'll be lukin forward to see it turn fiction.

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

When I got your pm I was like 'Yay she's writing a new FF! '

Then I read your note and 'LOLLed'
No worries for me since I'm as bold as they come, atleast mentally!

Then I read the chapter and my reaction was 'WHAT THE?!'
Khushi the prostitute? Then who the hell is Arnav's wife?!

So now all the suspense u have unleashed on us from the very first chapter will never allow me to stop reading!!!

Continue soon :) I'm dying to read on!

-Pria-

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

awesome start...is very very intriguing

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smittap

@smittap

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

OMG!! OMG!!! Khushi?????🤔

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Samana Dahar

@samana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Nice start. Unique concept.
Thanks for the PM.

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bikerider

@bikerider

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

congo , and commented on the thread

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Just read this!

absolutely fantastic!

what's with the under 18! 14 year old do drugs and have sex!

that explains you have better morals and good conscious than me!

anyway, the story is intriguing and i'll try keeping up with it!

and i'm having the weekend off this week!! i'll go through the PMs you've send me and i haven't pened yet!

P.S. When are going to continue 3YL

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Thanks for the PM. Nice first part. Something new. Like button is not working.

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

okay i was just like whaaa...?? at first but then i read it over like 2 times and then realized how effing amazing this is! it isn't like anything else which makes this story even more awesome. I like how arnav is married, it gives everything a little bit more of a twist. I hope you update soon or else i think i'll be thinking about this wayyy to much. When i'm taking a test i'm going to be like

"What's going to happen next.. what's going on..? and i'll completly bomb my test lolz. anyways i loved it! 😃