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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2

khushi saw arnav near d pool side...
he ws gazing at d stars..
he ws not being himslf lately...
n now he looked...upset..
khushi thought may b cuz of d current events...arnav must b upset wid somethng..

khushi wanted to go out der...near him...talk to him bou his problems..
bt she decided nt to disturb him..
atlst by now she knew how arnav is..
he ll never disclose any of his problems to anyone..
specially her...
he does nt blve her
he does nt like her
he does nt want her to b arnd him al d time

dis is how thngs ve alwayz been ...n alwayz ll b...
she tries to brush off al d thoughts n go back to sleep...

after few mins of struggling...
she just cud nt sleep after watchng arnav in so much pain...

arnav ws staring at d stars...
if it ws true dt whn ppl die dey turn into stars so now is d time he wants to talk to his mom...
nt dt he remembered her every single day of his life...bt 2dy he missed her d most...
his eyes welled up...
maa...
maa...if u r der...
if u r watching me n di...
see wat has happened to us...
maa...only if u were stil...

he cud nt take it anymore..
he covered his face wid his hands...

wat can i do now to set thngs right?
how shud i turn thngs arnd...?
first di gt married to a jerk...
she does nt deserve dis...u knw it...
she ve never done anythng bad to any1...
n i ...i gt myslf into such a mess...

he wiped his tears...
n looked at d sky again...

everythng ws perfect maa...
i never thought i ll b in love...
u knw i never believed in dt before...
n whn i finally ws in love..
my heart ws broken into several pieces...
only cuz i misunderstood...

"arnavji..."

he quickly wiped his eyes...
n turned arnd to see...
y m i nt surprised...
he knew she wud come...

she came near him
she ws searching somethng on his face..
trying to read it...
saw his moist eyes...
dt ached her..
ws arnavji crying???
she den looked at d sky...where he ws staring right before she came...
she needed no xplanation ...

she knew he wont say anythng...wt he ws thnking..y ws he crying...
"ap theek hai arnavji??"
"hmmm...ha..."

she sat down near d pool n took his hand..
n made him sit along wid her..
both were sitting silently...
khushi ws looking at d pool...
nt knowing how to make him talk to her...

arnav ws struggling wid his own feelings...
his every breath ws getting heavier...
he had to let it out..

he placed his head on her shoulder n closed his eyes...
khushi ws relieved whn he did dt...
she turned a little to wrap her hand arnd her...
wid her free hand she wiped his tear

he took her hand...
n came closer to her...
he ws now lying at d crook of her neck...
tears rolling down...

"i m sorry khushi"

THE END

sorry 4 d late update hunz...
hmm...so did u al liked it??
i love reading ur comments guyz so plzzz leave ur comments
n add me if u want pmz..
thnx

PART 3
Edited by BARUN-myladdu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Did I like it ? Oh I loved it :)
Arnav cried...Spoke to the stars !! To his mom ! It was beautiful..
And Kushi, though she thinks he doesn't need her, she's always there for him..
And he knew she'd come ...
It was fantastic !!

And yay I got to comment first 😉
Edited by asrcraze - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: asrcraze

Did I like it ? Oh I loved it :)

Arnav cried...Spoke to the stars !! To his mom ! It was beautiful..
And Kushi, though she thinks he doesn't need her, she's always there for him..
And he knew she'd come ...
It was fantastic !!

And yay I got to comment first 😉


aww realy???
thnx alot hun...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Neel,😭

that was sooo touching ...I loved ur update...Wishing to see something like this happen in the show...awesome job...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soloperson

Neel,😭


that was sooo touching ...I loved ur update...Wishing to see something like this happen in the show...awesome job...


aww..thnx priya..
i too want some hard core emotional scenes whn arnav comes back home...m missing him so much 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimishakumar

it was awesme..!!
i was cryin after reading it..!!!!
i luved it so much...!!!
luved it wen he spoke to his maa..!!
cont soon..!!
n tanx for the pm..!!


awww hun u cried???m so sory..i dnt knw wt to say...THNX 4 LOVING IT SO MUCH 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
nice update...


thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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must say it was a lovely update..😉
awww ASR was crying while resting his head on her shoulder...❤️
dat was so cute...😊...

Edited by aliahassan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Awww come on. Nice big update next time. PLEASE?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
TOO GOOD BEST THING EVER

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