OS-RETURN OF ASR(UPDATE-PAGE 8)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey al...
gt new os 4 u al...
hpe u al ll like it...
as d name suggests...it starts whn asr comes back home...

ARNAV SING RAIZADA ve always been like dis-INEXPRESSIVE...
dis ws nt new for him...
bt dis time...he had to show his emotions to some1
he needed to let his heart out...
he ws dying inside...
d only person he badly wanted to talk to ws his wife...

she layed der...on his bed...sleeping peacefully...
it looked as if she ve nt slept 4 ages whn he 1st saw her whn he returned...
n nw she slept as if al her worries were over...
it surely ws like dt...she ws so worried bou him through out his absence...
she dint ve to tel him dis...
it ws understood
she knew der ws somethng wrng...n so it took sleep away...

it ws weird...hw she cud read his eyes n hw he cud understand everythng tiny lil thng bou her...it ws realy strange hw 2 ppl can connect dis way
no..it ws nt strange or weird...
he knew bou dis since d day he met her...
but he wud never accept it...

n nw...
things ve changed
in a big big way..
he knows d truth
he nw knwz dt she is innocent...
hw can he accept his mistake...
he is ashamed of himslf..
khushi had begged to him to blve wt she said...bt arnav discarded al her attempts...
inspite of his rudeness khushi kept on trying...
n wat happened whn he returned home ws enough to burden him more wid his guilt

FEW HOURS AGO...

d entire raizada family ws tensed whn d learned bou arnavz absence...
he ws nt in london
he dint board d flight
he dint take any of der calls
neither did he call any of dem
WHERE VE ARNAV GONE??

d whole family ve called up every possible person dey knew to knw bou arnav...
d only person least worried or to say happy bou dis situation ws standing right in d middle of d choas n njying every bit of it

finally akash said "di i thnk it bou time...v shud call up police.."
anjali fighting thru her tears "humein bhi yehi theek lagta hai akash..."
nani "par akash bitiwa chotte har saal aisi karat hai...humein lagta hai thoda intezar karlena chahiye..."
khushi ws sitting in d corner n crying like a baby...she dint knw wt to do...al she wanted ws her husband...she wanted him to b safe n back in d house...
she closed her eyes n whispered "devi mayya...humein bas...sniff...arnavji..."

between al d choas...she heard d door open...somebody ws walking in...nobody else seemed to notice dt...
every1 ws busy talking...
she got up silently..
confused...since every1 ws present der...who else cud it be...
she came near d entrance..

she clasped both her hands on her mouth...unable to blve wt she ws witnessing...
she ran towards him...

arnav had js entered...
n saw khushi standing few feet away...her face ws drenched in her own tears...she looked miserable...
before he cud recover n ask her bou her state...she ws running towards him...

she ran n hugged him tight...
if dis ws her dream...she wud nt at any cost let it go...
she came wid such a force dt arnav dropped his suitcase n ws pushed a step back..
she ws crying heavily...
for an instant arnav thought somethng realy bad happened when he ws away...
bt immediately realized...
it ws cuz of him...
she ws crying for him...
only for him...

END OF FLASHBACK

he needed some fresh air...he open d door 2 d pool side n went outside...

khushiz sleep ws disturbed on hearing noises...
she opened her eyes...immediately started looking for her husband...
she ws starting to panic when she saw him

standing near d pool...
looking at d stars
he looked terribly upset...

THE END

hw ws it guyz??
shud i cont or nt??
lemme knw...i wud love 2 gt some feedback...so plz do comment...
n ask 4 pmz if u want...
bye

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc...:) by d way itne dino kaha gayab ho gye they apk os,ff...?? Its a gud cumbak...continue soon...tnx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved the start...it's very apt for the current situation...please do continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's oam.
I love ur prologue.
Plz pm me next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os...


thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey please continue this OS amazing story
totally loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely u...should continue soon...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CutieSanaya

Nyc...:) by d way itne dino kaha gayab ho gye they apk os,ff...?? Its a gud cumbak...continue soon...tnx 4 d pm...



thnx hun...
yaar i kinda gt bzy wid oder stuff...
ll try n cont soon ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soloperson

I loved the start...it's very apt for the current situation...please do continue...



well u gave me d plot hun
chalo gud u like it
thnx...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc OS...i rilly wish somethng like dis happen in the show...dey r js dragging it...n barun's absence is adding to it...Sanaya is the only reason m watching d show rite nw... :(

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