Mere Saathi#3(RN):Note, pg.21(29/12)

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Wow !!! how understanding of my friend...simply didn't observe that there were 3 posts in a row on which i didn't press " like" button before replying to Nivi's doubt...
But its okay...I understand...

If you understand than its ok for me as well.😛

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Congratulation...n celebration...

aage aur bhi yaad nahi aa raha haiii...

khair kya farq padta hai...3rd thread me pahunch gayi...yeh kya koi kamm baat hai...

Mujhe yaad nahi aa raha hai ke koi bhi RN fic 3rd thread par pahunchi ho...aur agar yeh sach hai toh tujhe mujhe THAKS kehna chahiye...

ab yeh matt soch ke Kyoun...arey bhul gayi na...HUH...achhi batain hamesha her inshan bhul jaata hai...

aur wo yeh ki jab tune apna first RN fic likha tha...tab sabse pahle maine teri aarti utari thi...fir bhi tune kal mujhe wo cmnt kiya...huh...

khair 3rd thread ki baat hai isiliye galiyon ka session kisi aur din rakhte hain...main ud par aati hoon...

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

AWESOME...PERFECT...BEAUTYFULLY WRITTEN...👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ka wo scene ek damm sahi tha...jab wo lala ke bare me baat karrta hai...n kahin kahin thoda hara hua bhi laga...kyoun ke jis par usne sabse jyada trust kiya tha usi ne yeh sab kiya tha...uski bebasi saaf jhalak rahi thi...tere uss scene me...aur Naina...waah...kaise sambhala usne raj ko...

jab ki LRL me her baar Naina ko hamesha sambhalna padta tha Raj ko...!!! sach kahu toh raj toh khush tha yun Naina ko dekh kar...par main hairan thi ke Naina me itni samajh aayi kaise...

phir yaad aaya ke fic toh Dimagless doc ka toh wo Naina ko samajhdaar toh banayegi hi...😛

perfect gift tha wo naina ke liye...infact Grihapravesh ka scene bhi tunhe itne achhe se likha hai ke...teri phir se aarti utarne ka mann karr raha hai...🤗😆

RN ka scene bahttt khubshurat tha...upar se tere magical words...uff...

Gadhi hai tu...kisne kaha tujhe itna achha likhne ki...!!! prob yehi hai ke tu achha likhti hai...aur her ek sentiments...her ek emotions ko itna achhe se likhti hai k dil karrta hai ek THAPPAD (pyar se...ofcourse😆😆) toh laga hi dun ki...'Haaiii kyoun itna achha likhti hai yaar...'

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Nivedita Basu

@nivi26

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

thanks u noticed my reply... well u r right i closely follow ur fic coz i like this fic very vry much.. infact mjhe lrl ki koi fic apki fic se jyada achhi kbhi ni lagi.. RN ka romance to mai bhi dekhna chahti thi or achha lgta h ki apne ese bhut achhe se dikhya h...

phle mai apki fic ki silent reader thi n apka 1st thread to sbse jyada achha tha.. use to kai bar starting se pad chuki hu but pichle kuch ud k bad mjhe laga ki mjhe es fic ko comment krna chahiye or apko congrts krna chahiye so maine apko congrts kahungi... and i knw its totally ur story abt LRL but ek bat mai b khna chahungi hum readers esse closely jud chuke hain.. mai apna kahungi mai to daily routine ki tarah apka ud check krti hu.. mere wo doubts to ni the wo mere suggstn the.. aage apki marzi n all d best.. but plz RN k sath2 un 6 gangs ki b story dikhao na plz.. qki wo 5 log humare RN k karibi hain...

n ek or bat mai khna chahungi pooja ne achha kiya jo bta diya. apne raj or pooja ka convo ni dala tha may b aage dikhao but mai imagine krk hi khush ho gyi... n raj etne romantic h ye to sbse phle tb pta chala tha jb unhone huda ko tips di thi naina ko patane k liye lekin kbi khud aisa naina k liye kar payenge ye ni socha tha.. well done!!!😊😊😊

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snigdha suman pradhan

@sumanpradhan777

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

👏Haiii ! I am suman.the story is awesome and i have nothing to tell because you always made me speechless.👍🏼

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

awsome part

superb

Nivi ne to meri dil ki baat puch li, maine tumhara jawab bhi para

yes, i agree, yeh K serial nahin hai, jaha roz koi na koi saazish hota rehta hai.

but Raj ne Navin ki case ko le kar kaam zarur kar raha hai

uska thoda thoda details bhi readers ko milna chayiye.Romantic ke saath agar thoda Mystery yaa thriller element add ho jaaye, phir kya kehna.

aur shaadi chupana itna asan kaam nahin hai, jin logo ko pata nahin hai iss baare main unko shak hona chayiye naa.

romance ke baare main kuch nahin kahungi,isme tum expert ho.

chote chote moments ko tum magical bana dete ho.

another beautiful update

great going.

plz continue soon, waiting eagarly.

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Beautiful Part Mana😊😊

First part was very good where Naina is comforting Raj as he is still not able to accept fully about what had Lala done to him ,Naina and Naveen after all he considered him as his father and his mentor not only Raj if it would be some other person also wont be able to accept this very fact easily but Naina comforted and made him understand that he is not wrong and howed him another pov of this thing👏

Second part also was very lovely how Raj has taken care of Naina during her Karwachauth Vrat although he is denying it but made it very special by giving The Bliss as her surprise for the Vrat however Raj also kept fast with Naina but does not said anything to her their griha pravesh was also very lovely and touchy for them ofcourse 😊😊😉

But it was funny when Raj asked Naina to drink glucose instead of water and their lovely moments were very good in the end😆😆😊

Eagerly waiting for the next part😉

continue soon😊

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 13 years ago

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Congratulations for the new thread...

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

oh teri 😲 new thread 👏👏 dats wonderful 😆😆...congratulations 🥳 badhaiyan patake 😃👏 to hero & heroine 😳😆 & last but not the least writer herself 🤗

lovely UD 👏👏 poor Rajveer 😆😆 dara diya naina ne 😆😆...

aww so now Rajveer knows truth abt Lala ji 😭 ...he must be feeling so bad 😭

hai hai naina 😆😆 hero ka dialogue churaya 😆 i am sure he is not minding 😳😳 by the way...we also beleive in you captain 😳

KC was good1 👏👏... what a ziddi couple 😆😆 perfect match for each other 😆😆😆 & WOW 😳😳 wat a surprise from hero 😳😳...*sigh* 😛😆 hope they have wonderful time 😳😃😃

overall it was lovely part 😍 too dreamy 😳😳

😆

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psrn

@psrn

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Vere are you?/

When will you update??

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