Originally posted by: nivi26
dear mana. though the updt was awesome one thing i must tell u... now the storyline is not like lrl, it gives the feeling of the serial like geet, or ess pyaar ko kya naam du.. i knw these serials are big hits but for us lrl was the bestest.. i mean plz give sm feeling of lrl like the role of other cadets, millitary trng n toughness, strictness n en sbke bitch jb RN ka pyar show hoga to jyda worthwhile hoga.. keval RN ka koi mtlb ni.. qki RN spcl esliye hain qki etni sari odd situations k baad bhi unka innocent or touchy love dil ko chu jata h.. etne sare barriers bhi to hain.. unki shadi bhale chupayi gyi hai but lala ka ntwrk etna bada h use kaise ab tk ni pta chala ye sb or agr pta h to wo q kuch ni kr rha??? ye sb bhi to dikhao.. unki lovestory en sb bato k adhoori h.. plz mere suggstn ko ek bar soch ker dekhna mana, apki story 9/10 se 10/10 feel karayegi... all d best.. n thanks for the update.. i was eargly waiting this.. aj to mere papr b khatm so collg lyf b khatm ho gyi..😭
n tk care...
Dear Nivi...Thank you so much for your comment and Valuable suggestion. Well..about Geet and other serials...I've not seen them..😕 so sorry...i wont be able to judge whether my serial is going that way...
(ya... seen 2/3 epi of Iss pyaar ko...while havng dinner or jus lik that...but i guess very littl to have impact on my story..😕)
And i feel...i am not the one to use things only because they are hits...😊 i incorporate only if i like...
Another thing... Agar Lala ka network bada hai...toh Rajveer bhi doodh peeta bachcha nahi hai na...aur ab toh he knows abt gehlot being the traitor...toh isnt it obvious ki woh apni aur Naina ki shaadi achchese coverup karega? I guess many of readers would have SENSED this thing by the fact that, abhitak Abhi, SHalini, Aalekh n pooja ko chodkar academy mein unke baaki frnds ( Huda,Ali,YUdi,Suriji,Nandini etc etc) inko bhi nahi pata hai...
Aur Rahi baat LALA ki...well...woh pohocha hua politician n traitor hai...naaki ekta ki kisi serial ka ya phir baaki serials you were talking of, ka villian hai jo har dusre minute kuch na kuch saazish karega...
Usmein itna common sense hai ( or atlst main dikhana chahti hu) ki woh iss baar koi kachchi game nahi khelega...Otherwise,his game would be OVER FOREVER...
And this is a RN fic...so...its major focus wil be on RN...
Aur sabse important baat...I AM Writing what I WISHED to see in LRL...
And i wished to see some special RN moments in LRL..n that am fulfilling through MS...
Besides...waha RN romance chalu hone ke pehle hi khatam hogaya tha...There was a barrier in their minds, jo ab nikal chuka hai...toh i guess un dono ka ek dusre ke saath thoda comfortable hona Normal hai...
Thanks for putforthng these doubts...it only shows how closely you follow this fic...thanks for that and I really hope i could clear your doubts...😊
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