SS : Yours Sincerely, Murder Part 18 (Conclusion)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#741

Oh no!!! she was pregnant and lost the baby😭. I'm really glad she's pulling through. Well written Khushi's flashback on the gunshot, being rushed to hospital, being under anesthetic, the surgery, coming to, it amazing how you wrote it. Loved the update

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Kay Dee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#742

OMG! She was pregnant !! :o

SAD>> :(
But glad she's fighting. Awww..

Update sssooon !

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...Penknife...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#743

Well i seriously didn't know when i reached the end and i was like...where the hell is the rest of the story...shocked i must say!!!!!

i want them longer!!!!!!!!

ilove ite i love it i love it i love it i love it some more!!!!!!!!!

update sooon plsplsplspls

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achu_arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#744

RES

AWESOME UPDATE

I WERE READING 12 13 14

AMAZING

LOVED IT

Edited by achu_arshi - 13 years ago

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Amanram

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Posted: 13 years ago

#745

Oh Desi!! so much pain plus losing the baby - oh dear!! Please please let's have some light at the end of the tunnel!!!

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#746

a lovely update... being the strong silent type isn't always good for one's health... liked the way you described arnav's emotional vulnerability when he breaks down thinking of khushi's suffering and pain... a very moving scene especially arnav's complete breakdown at the loss of his baby and his fear for khushi... the news of the baby must have been a shock and the second-most traumatic incident after the near-loss of khushi! scared to imagine what khushi's reaction will be to this news as I don't believe even she knew she was pregnant!

the silent but compassionate doctor touching his shoulder in commiseration was a nice touch... arnav's heartfelt thanks reveals how much khushi means to him

khushi's confusion on slowly regaining consciousness has been beautifully penned... your hospital scenes are very realistic!