SS : Yours Sincerely, Murder Part 18 (Conclusion)

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sarra0

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 8 - awesome so this one was an accident. Aw he have her a ring so sweet.

"Look, I love you, I love your positive thinking, but there is no freaking way I will remain calm about this until they have caught this bas***d..."

"Wow...big surprise there..." she scoffed 🤣

"Khushi, you know me! I won't take anyone threatening you...EVER..."

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Amanram

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Posted: 13 years ago

#462

Ooh scary and creepy - we want more!!! thanks for the pm😉

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#463

sarah, have been waiting desperately for the update and am so glad it is here... always find this sight adorable: Khushi's cheeks went bright pink... Arnav laughed..."After all this time? I can STILL manage to bring out the color in your cheeks...?"

lovely to see that in the midst of her fear, khushi's sense of humor lightens her mood... of course, mr. arnav singh raizada's method of distracting her is an added bonus 😉!

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sarra0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#464

Chapter 9 - fabulous, loved the fight at the beginning and her booming to make up. So murder was there and she doesn't no him interesting interesting. I no I won't guess win it is but I wonder if its someone win works there and has seen her because he was in the building and in ASRs office. nice to c she did not lord her sense of humour even in a situation like that. can't wait 4the next update

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

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just finished reading part 9 so have to comment again... 'Murder' seems almost to be a phantom that he can come in and out of places without being seen... really scary! but knew khushi would be saved... after all, why fear when arnav is there, right? the humor you incorporate is so apt and is never out of place even in the midst of a tense situation: Her faint one-sided grin took him by surprise..."Any excuse to take my clothes off?" From somewhere deep inside him, laughter rumbled out... simply hilarious! that was so realistic, as realistic as was their fight and their need for each other

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Devilways

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Posted: 13 years ago

#466

oh man for one fleeting moment i was too stunned to even scroll down further... ur awesome is an understatement... who is this guy? facial recognition by police a possibility??