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Shay, thank you for the pm... a lovely update... the beginning was calm and soothing before the action picked up... unknown to arnav and khushi, there's already a latent link in that they both yearn for peace... could relate to khushi in the bookstore as she echoes my thoughts and feelings when it comes to books! would be interesting to learn whose photo she saw in the newspaper that distressed her so... hmm, a mystery!
boy, khushi sure knows how to make a grand entrance! the part describing arnav's fascination with khushi was well done... loved khsuhsi trying to salvage the situation with her wit!
eagerly awaiting the next part
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