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Prianka S.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Wow!..I just read all 3 chapters in one go and all I have to say is you have done an amazing job!...you are a terrific writer. Plz plz do update soon!..loved reading it!...and it is quite intriguing...Plz PM me!...thank you!

Sapphire aka Priya

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

omg khushi is hilarious...

very sweet update dear...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm...

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Shay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: devsum
Superb... Very nice written. And the tale is gripping. Must be Shyam's photo that she saw?...

I wasn't even thinking along them lines!! That's such a good idea!!! It's given me a fresh wave of story planning lol. Thank you for that!!! 😃

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--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Awesome update.

Loved it..

Thanks for the PM..

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

that was a cute update... loved that they are so attuned to each other that they realised what the other was up to and didn't ruin everything by flying off the handle! the idea of them sitting companiably, just enjoying a conversation was adorable and realistic... he asking her if she had been upset at the bar and her reply clearly show there is a connection between these two! can't wait for the next update... nice to see their friendhip growing!

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Shay

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Maddy1270
that was a cute update... loved that they are so sttuned to each other that they realised what the other was up to andd didn't ruin everything by flying off the handle! the idea of them sitting companiably, just enjoying a conversation was adorable and realistic... he asking her if she had been upset at the bar and her reply clearly show there is a connection between these two! can't wait for the next update... nice to see their friendhip growing!

Thank you!!
I just love love LOVE the way you always completely understand what I'm trying to portray in my writing!!!
It makes me so unbelievably happy 🤗

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barfi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

love how she helped him out, hope he returns the favour one day

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Mariam Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Dood I love this story it's amazing well done:))

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Shay

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sapphire
Wow!..I just read all 3 chapters in one go and all I have to say is you have done an amazing job!...you are a terrific writer. Plz plz do update soon!..loved reading it!...and it is quite intriguing...Plz PM me!...thank you!

Sapphire aka Priya

I'm so glad you (and everyone else of course) liked it! Hoping to update a bit more often lol 😊