~| Yesterday|~ kriyansh SS.[DISCONTINUED] - Page 10

its just out of the world
the way u wrote reys emotions were fabtabulus
eagerly waiting 4 next 1

hey ya m new to tis forum but m already addictd to ur updates listn pls pls pls update...

amazing update.

next update shayad agle janam me ayega

😭kya yr ab to updat krdo please...😕

waitng 4 da nxt prt

Kriti Shah.. M shockd!!
I neva knew u can write dis way... I shapath !!
Ohki cumin bk to d update.. Brilliantly written!!
N d language used was awsome.. I loved evry bit of it.. Kriya has turnd into a cold n cruel person..
Kriya u think dat rey was firting around but he was interacting coz somewea he recognised u...
N thn I ofcourse lived Krisha's part!!
Strange na.. Sharon feels dat kriya dint ditch rey for all dis.. They wer enemies but still...
Greattt!!
Now cumin to d second part.. Y rey was fightin???
I loved how girls esp kriya came up to hepl rey.. Nice moves yea!!
Evn sharon kicked a guy.. News!!
I really felt bad whn d guy wer beating kriya n she was lukin at rey but rey looked away.. Dis moment was heart wrenching!
I dint get y kriya had become so cold.. Wht so happend???
N when d group came to que hr n d way she answerd bk.. I was lik huh.. She owe dem an apology.. Agree she was trying to proove her lies truth in front of dem bt still..
Ohki I too thot its rey who holded kriya's hand bt to my surprise it was swayam!!
She dint want to tok to swayam lik dis bt still !!
Thnk god swayam suspectd jus as sharon did!!

Kay.. Now cumin to d FE exit scene.. I neva in my wildest dreams hav imagined such kinda scene to hon in FE tht too including kriyaansh..
Rey's anger was justified coz he stl do not knows d truth bt d way kriya reactd.. I dint lik it..
Such anger,intensity,pain.. Omg
Kriya feelin jealous of tani thinkin tht rey neva defended her lik dis eva.. Awww!!
N lik really.. Kriya kicked rey's ass... :0
Y is she bein a bitch.. Darlin jus dun provike rey..
Rey is surely gona get bk to kriya n d situation wud surely go worst.. Hufff!!
This is d first time m readin such storyline on kriyaansh.. Hats off to u for writin it proficiently..
Loved it.. Bt plZ sort all dis out a soon bit coz I really dun wana c ths side of kriyaansh !!


N n classy language used.. (ps- I too dun drink but still if tmhe aur cocktails k names chaiye ho na toh ask me :p)
N mata g.. Jldi update krna !
Waitin :)

its really awesome...the feelings btw rey and kria is just wow...but didnt expect rey in this way... how 2 add in buddy list and also pm me