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Sharon

@viratnmanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Huma0301

<font color="#0099ff">jus read the parts to ur FF n i really lyk the concept
</div>really want u to continue soon plz n plz can u pm me if u can wen u do update - thanx<div>
n even though i dnt kno u bt still wish a very happy married life!!! 😊</font>

Thanks so much I will pm u

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Sharon

@viratnmanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Aenna
vry nice story yr but i just want to
ask dat if virat hv come after 20 years then
ye dono ki age kitni hogi i mean
kya ye dono 10 years ki age se ek dusre se pyar krte hai
or agr han to fir to inki age 30 hogi
plz confusion clear karo...
but d concept is vry gud..

No yaar their now in this ff is around 20s . Manvi is 25 . And virat is 27 . Thank for ur comments

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Sharon

@viratnmanvi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Next morning-----

The whole house is on full swing everybody is busy with something.
Manvi wakes up and hears noises she goes out and sees that everybody is so busy decorating for no reason. Then suddenly realization hit her it was hers and her dis mehndi and Sangeet.( yay)

About an hour later the doorbell rang. No one was opening it so manvi went and when she opened the door she shocked, her mouth went O. 😲
M: di, jiju omg applog Kabul ayi Maine app logo ko kitna miss kits pata hai. She said as hugged them and kissed them.
K: are are are Hume saas to lene diijiye rani saihiba
A: hum kya bahar kareh rehenge ya phir and andaar bhi aane bhi denge app. ( coming in the house)
Pata hai tumhari di to Pura duniya lekar ayi hai is bag mien Jaise yeh voh shayad jungle mien rehne jaa ra hi hai .
M: kya jiju app bhi na abhi bhi same to same ho
Manvi suddenly starts screaming everyone's name and they all come and see Arnav and khushi and they also welcome them the same way manvi did.

Sceneshift ------

Manvi and jeevika have two bathrooms in one room. They go take a shower. After the shower they come back in the room with towels on and hair loose.

They look at each other anddd we all know what ( they sing a song )
The song piya piya from har dil Jo pyaar karega.

Then they yelled at to go and change as they had to do their mehndis.

Sorry guys bohot short tha but I promise kal update zaroorkarungi and lamba nahi medium size update karunga .

Love Sharon 😉

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

nice update...
like the jeeman craziness ...
update next part soon

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manvilover18

@manvilover18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

nice

update soon and pm me...

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Sharon

@viratnmanvi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Zaroorkarungi update but kuch doh theen din bad. And readers if u r reading n want Pam's please buddy me then only I can pm. Thank for the lovely comments and this time I decided the next chapter will be hopefully the long and the others too

Teaser:

Taarey enter. Virman having a hot mehndi scene in the morning . At night many songs and taarey, virman, arshi, and virika romantic couple dance.

Love Sharon 😉

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nida

@mystery75

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

cont soon love different enteries in the story❤️

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Sharon

@viratnmanvi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

hey sorry agar late hagaya toh.

Evening-----

the mehndi ceremony had started. manvi and jeevika were brought down by khushi.

they were wearing :

khushi:

jeevika:

manvi:

just as they sat down to do there mehndi. they hear da voice they have been longing to hear. and guess who it was the one and only hottest eve reyansh singhania.

R: YEH MEHNDI MERE BINA KAISE SHURU HOSAKTA HAI.(he said in a loud mocking voice to scare everybody.

M;KYUNKI APNE YE NAHI BATAYA KI AAPP APNE GIRLFRIEND YANI MERI HONE WALE BHBAHI KI SAATH AYAENGR.she said in the same tone. bhabhi kaise hai app pata hai appko maine bohot miss kiya.

T: maine bhi mere pyaari si bhabhi. aur applogon ne mere bina mehndi shuru kardi yeh kaise nainsafi hain.

J: toh bhabhi jaldi se tayaar hojayi kyunki tumhari ani tak hum mehndi nahi lagangye.

T: aa toh jaongi but pehnu kya tumhar khadoos bhai ne mujhe shooping dene ki samay nahi di bus raat ko utakhar kich ke lekar ataa.

R: tum karo apne shikayate aur mein jata hun baaki ladko ki paas bachelor party ke liye .bye ladies. ye taani. he said dreamingly,.

T: bye rey. she said blushingly.

t goes aup and come down wearing one of manvis outfit which was brand new.

taani:

the mehndi ceremony was done and they had an 2 hour gap between the mehndi and sangeet so people can get prepared.jeevika was with T and K in another room. meanwhile our manvi was alone in the room.

suddenly virat came from the balcony and saw her sitting on the bed lost in her thoughts.

vrat jups on the bed quietly and hugs her from behind. he starts giving her soft feather like kisses on her neck and in between he kept saying how beautiful and sexy she was looking. suddenly V bit her shoulder neck and kissed hard and rough. later he started soothing it. in between manvi had moaned alot. V made M turn around.M looked at V with a lot of passion and desires full of love.virat couldnt resist any more he automatically took both of manvis legs and wrapped it around his waist.and he kissed her on the lips passionatley . they kept kissing each other so hard that manvi hadnt realise that virat had put her on the bed and then pulled her sarre above her waist he coudnt take it anymore he took off all her clothes while kissing her everywhere. the scene was really hot. manvi kept moaning. virat couldnt resist seeing her undressed and went straight ahead to her sensative part which mad eher moan like crazy. virat was about to make a move so he can eneter her and then suddenly the room dooor knocked.

J,K,T: manvi darwaza kholo tumhe kapre nahi badalni.

M: nahi maine already change karna shuru kardia mein tumhe baad mein bulaongi fir make up and hairk.

J,K,T: ok.

M; whisperng. virat ummm i think tumhe janaa chaiye kyunki mehndi kiliye bhi ready hona hai. k.

main change karke aati hoon.

M goes towards the bathroom with a blanket aorund her.V holds her wrists.and says

V: hey manvi kya tunhe patchtava horahihai.

m: v YEH TUM KAISE BAAT KAR RAHI HO. main tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon aur tust bhi bohot karti hoon.

then they both leave to get dressed for sangeet.

phewww that was the longest updat so far for me.

hope you liked it.

precap- Sangeet. alot of romantic duet dances and songs. sweet romantic moment between all couples.

Love Sharon😉

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

nice update ...😊
and the dress selections were too good loved them...
and virman romance was woowww par got disturbed...
and why did virat think that she will regret ???

excited for the romantic numbers in the next update...
update soon