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misaki

@misaki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

continue...!

it was so good!

nd pm me wn u do pls

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princess369

@princess369

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Update next part soon and plz pm me

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dspandana

@dspandana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Hey nice fic...a small doubt...how does maanvi and virat know each other...I mean he came after 20yrs so...

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imsid

@imsid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awsum ya. Plz pm me next part

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Sharon

@viratnmanvi

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Hey nice fic...a small doubt...how does maanvi and virat know each other...I mean he came after 20yrs so...

well sorry if i hadnt mentioned it both their fathers are childhood best friend and also are neighboors.

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chirpy-bird

@chirpy-bird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Yes pls do continue and PM me when u do... pls...

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Aww amazing concept cant wait til virman meet continue continue soon and pm me when u update

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Simran

@mannat.urwish

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

nyc concept...continue soon n pm me if possible..:-)

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Sharon

@viratnmanvi

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

part 2:

the door opens and jeevika and manvi enter the vadhera house cuz thats where prem told them to come. everybody had a smile on their face seeing the two sisters laughing and coming in meanwhile virat was confused in wondering which one was manvi.

as soon as manvi and jeev(short 4 jeevika) entered the house they saw virat manvi was thinking to herself that her chep look so hot.jeev nugded manvi and said

j: wow tera boyfriend yani mera devar kitna cute and handsome lagraha hain.

m: toh mein kya karoon

jeev was about o say some thing until prem called jeev n manvi over.

p:virat beta shahid tum soch rahi hogi in dono mein se manvi or jeevika hain

prem was about to say something until jeev opened her mouth and introduced herself

j; hi virat shahid tumhe yaad nahi magar mein tumhare jeevika bhabhi hoon well honewala

v: hi mein tumhara honewala devarji hoon aur tumhari baju mein kaun hain

j: tumhe nahi pata chalo mein nahi voh khud hi batayega ke voh hain kaun

m:di agar tum apna mu band rakogi tab mein kuch bol paongi. vaise tum toh shahid samajhgaye honge ke mein kaun hoon. aaur agar nahi pata toh mein manvi hoon tumhara bandariya.

virat felt really relieved knowing who is manvi and that after ages he heard her sweet voice.

v: vaise mein virat hoon aur agar naam acha nahi laga toh joh naam tumne mujhe pehle dedi thi voh bhi chalega tumhara chep.

everybody kept on talking for a while and in between virman kept txtn each other and sometimes when ppl r not looking they would share an ilock. every body left and preet and prem went to go n talk about some important issue leaving manvi to go n escort viraat to his room.

meanwhile in the study room

pr:prem mujhe tujhse kuch baath karne hain

p: haan bol kya hua

pr:mein chatein hu ke meri bari aur chote bete tumhare bari aur choti bete shadi kare.

p: kya mein kuch samjha nahi

pr:matlab ke ye bachpaan ke dosti rishtidaryion mein badal jaye.

kya kyaal hain.

p: meri tarah se haan hain

virats room:

they entered the room and manvi was about to leave suddenly virat twisted her around and hugged her from the back

v: kaha jah rai hon itni salo ki baad tumse baat kari aye hoon aur chooh bhi nahi saka ab toh mein tume mujhse ek paal ke liye bhi nahi chorunga aur i luv u.

pr: aur tumhe usse chorna bhi nahi hoga

kyunki tum dono ke shadi teh ho chuki hain.

they turned around n let go of each other and were shocked to see and hear the words their fathers said.

precap:

engaement party

sharon