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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi07

Part 1:

First of all, oooh a different setup- a office setup! Me likey very much :D!

Kushi is the SRK :O! Interesting :D! N loved how you preserved the character sketch of everybody even in a different setup! Seriously commendable!
Loved ASR's intro :D! So ASR-y(sorry am short of adjectives right now :P)! N Kushi going on and on about his features- loved it :D !

Part 2:
Aww i loved that!! Loved the doughnut session! N Kushi's imitation of Akash-apt :D! So loving the bossy Kushi here :D!
So Arnav does feel affected by her :D! Loved the cute scene in the end!
And my mind's racing with possibilities of what's in the sketch book :D!




I'm a big fan of the office set up! I thought it was such a shame that they never used it properly in the show but then again it might have just turned derivative where Khushi solves every problem despite not being trained or anything.

Glad you liked it :DD
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... arnav s waitin for her coffee, like everyday.. nice yaar.. update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey its so nice n lovely update.. i liked khushi's first move for plan.. ignoring payal.. thts grt idea.. n liked khushi's sentence she dont work 45 mins earlier.. wow so much good one.. liked khushi n arnav in last coffee covo.. thnks for pm n pls continue soon can't wait for next update..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Psychedelic

Awww! Laad Governor and his Pagal. Well well well what do we have here.. Was it me or did jealousy just whiz past Arnav and Khushi without making a long enough pitstop? :)

I would have thought Khushi would be jealous thinking of Arnav's extracurricular activities with Lavanya, not feeling sorry for her desk! Arnav though seemed a lil more annoyed with the donuts!

Speaking of which Chocolate filled donuts sound heavenly! I want! :D

Khushi's impersonation of Akash's stutter. Brilliant! :D

Thanks for the PM! :)



Yeah this is a light breezy rom-com type of SS so even their jealousy and anger and stuff is never going to be intense! Plus they're so used to each other in this SS that it doesn't properly occur to them to be jealous.

Glad you liked it :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww Arnav Khushi are adorable!! both of them secretly smiling about each other's pagalpan 😊😊

n Akash - loved his reactions to the plan and the Khushi-Akash relationship you've shown here is really cute! She is so comfortable around him and is even bossing him around :D :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vish94

buhahaha!! dis FF is actually a nice break. all other FFs on IF are usually super romantic or i-just-realisd-i-love-u type cuz dats d way v fans wanna c arshi. this is a fun one. but its AWESUM!! nayika, keep it up!



As much as I like intense Arnav-Khushi love stories (because they hated each other with so much intensity on the show) generally I prefer to read more funny and comfortable relationships where they're basically like friends first partners later.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am in love with this SS ALREADY. Its so good to see Khushi and Akash bonding with each other. Its as if they are friends and not employee and employer. I like the way Khushi answers Arnav. Is our Arnie baby feeling ignored? Will whatevr Khushi plans for Akash and Payal accidently happen with her and Arnav? Come give us all the six parts. After your previous SS reading this one makes me think are they written by the same person in the span of three days?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

I am in love with this SS ALREADY. Its so good to see Khushi and Akash bonding with each other. Its as if they are friends and not employee and employer. I like the way Khushi answers Arnav. Is our Arnie baby feeling ignored? Will whatevr Khushi plans for Akash and Payal accidently happen with her and Arnav? Come give us all the six parts. After your previous SS reading this one makes me think are they written by the same person in the span of three days?



Thank you so much!

Glad you liked it. I always wanted Akash and Khushi to be friends on the show because I think they'd balance each other out well but it never properly materialised :(

Aww that's such a compliment, because I think all writers want to be versatile :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
This was super adorable<3
A feeling that Arnav was jealous:P

'Every day for a year, she brings me coffee but today she forgets. Stupid doughnuts,' Arnav said under his breath as he turned to walk back to his office.


'Sorry sir? Did you need something else?'


He turned around and said no but Khushi was sure she'd seen the ghost of a smile cross his lips as he did.


'Stupid Laad Governor,' she muttered affectionately as she skipped down the stairs.


She'd only gotten a few steps when she thought she heard Arnav mutter something that sounded suspiciously like 'pagal'.

This part was freaking adorable<3

Loved the way you wrote<3

Thaanks for the PM<3

Cont soon<3

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nayika



Thank you so much!

Glad you liked it. I always wanted Akash and Khushi to be friends on the show because I think they'd balance each other out well but it never properly materialised :(

Aww that's such a compliment, because I think all writers want to be versatile :)



You truly are versatile. They just showed a minor bonding between them during the PayAsh track and like everything else this was also sidelined :(

I just realised this was my 420th post :D
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