ArSha SS- Indore Calling- Part 5,pg 36,The End - Page 8

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Beautiful Tish !! :D
luvlyyy conceptt !! hayeee !sooo swweeettt re!!
i could also imagine Amar playing cricket !!lolxzzz !!
reaaalllyyy !! an shakti in Indoree !!
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Tish update plz.. Cant wait anymore.. Do pm me
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TISHHH !!! *HUGSSS* !!! That was AWESOMEEE !!!!! Ab jaldi jaldi update kariyo !!!! Andd SS yaa FF hii rakhna !! MUAHZ !!
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OMG tish what a update!!!!
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I am losta nd over blown by this OS !!! or SS or ff...whatever you say !!
But it was a treat to me !! I was just going through my Pms...for a nice pack of ArSha story and i got this !!! Yay !! :D And OMG !!! I loved it like hell... it was sweet,cute,adorable and all the =tive adjectives in the world... Continue ...and do PM me !!! Will be waiting for it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank y'all for your lovely comments!!😃 I'm so glad you'll enjoyed it and now want me to turn this into a SS.😳 With pleasure my girlies. 😉

Part 2

"Boys concentrate!!"

Amar roared at ten young, hormone-driven-good-for-nothing teenage lads gawking at a flock of their counter parts who had come to pose as cheerleaders for their cricket match.

"Amar Bhaiyya!!" wailed one of the boys, "it's only once in a year because of you that we get some attention here. Don't spoil our fun"

Rolling his eyes, Amar walked up to the boy. He grabbed the cricket bat from the boy's hands. "Thanks to you we have already lost a wicket. Now go sit with those girls and watch me play."

The boy flashed him a big grin before running to take his place next to some pretty gal.

"Gosh, these useless guys!! Where am I stuck?" Amar muttered to himself.

Amar took his place at the crease. He hit the bat on the ground, harder than necessary hoping to catch the attention of the bowler who had his eyes laterally. "if we have your permission, can we continue with the game?"

"Y…. Yes. So…..Sorry." the boy stuttered, embarrassed.

Furrowing his brows Amar concentrated on the little chap's run-up to prepare for his shot. Six or four? He was still contemplating over it when he heard her.

"Mr. Kunwar Amarjeet Singh!!"

He froze mid-swing, eyes wide, while the ball went past him to hit the middle stump.

The boys yelled, "You're out!" and ran towards each other for high fives.

Amar slowly turned around to the direction of his interest. The bat still held in the same position and his mouth wide open in an 'O'.

"No you're not!!" she stepped ahead and with full swing of her arm, punched him right in the gut.

"Ouuu Faakkk!!" he dropped down on his knees holding his stomach, leaning on the cricket bat which he now used for support.

"Now you're out!!" Shakti snarled.

Amar's head snapped up. Was he seeing right? Was that really her? That punch seemed quite real though.

"What….." he winced still holding his belly. Damn, she did live by her name. "Shaks, what are you doing here? And….. what the hell was that for?"

He looked around to notice that they were the center of attraction of every eye on the ground. Correction. She was the center of attraction of every eye on the ground.

There were no hopes from any of the boys to come and help him stand on his own two feet. Except for his loyal bat that still supported him. He finally managed to get up.

"Shaks?" he tried again. But all he got was an angry scowl.

"That Mister, was for lying to me" she gnarled.

If it wasn't for her serious glower, he would have burst out laughing. She was here because he had lied to her about some girl.

"I don't believe this!" he said shaking his head. It was still hard to take it.

"If you've had your fun, I'm going back home."

She turned to leave.

"Shaks wait!!" he followed her. He dint want her to leave. Not like this at least.

"I'm sorry. I…. I was pulling your leg yesterday. It was just a silly joke. Remember fun?" he teased.

She came to an abrupt stop making him almost bump into her. She turned around and pointed her finger at him.

"It was not funny Amar!"

Crap. She was pissed. She called him Amar only when she was really mad at him.

"Shaks, I said I'm sorry. What can I do to make it up to you?"

He wanted to ask her a million questions. For starters, why was she here in? But that could wait. He had to let her cool off first.

She thought over his offer for a minute. Then bending down and snatched the cricket bat from his hand. "I want a match"

Her twinkling mischievous eyes, that he always longed to see was back. So she wasn't that pissed after all. He wanted to toss that stupid bat from her hands and gather her up in his arms. But that would have to wait too.

"You're on" he grinned. "go pick your team."

Shakti raised her brows at his challenging tone. She walked past him and stood in front of the young boys whose eyes were still out of their sockets gaping at her.

"So boys? Who wants to be in my team?" she asked.

"Me!!" raising their hands all the boys yelped unanimously.

She turned around with smirk on her beautiful face and shrugged. "Looks like you don't have a team, Indore boy."

Those little traitors!! He'd have to get his hands on every single one of them later. Right now he had to make his own team.

Turning around he walked up to his audience. "Girls? Anyone wants to challenge those boys?"

"Yes!" his young ladies shot up to come and stand next to him.

Now it was his turn for that smirk. He turned around crossing his arms across his chest and raised his chin.

Shakti rolled her eyes and gave him a thumbs-down before turning around to make a circle with her team.

His eyes lingering at her backside as she bent over her little league.

Concentrate boy. Concentrate! He scolded himself.

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Ps-

Short? I know!!😆

I'll make it up for it the next time.😊

Let me apologize in advance. Next update will take some time. I just hope it won't be that long that you completely lose interest.🤢

Till then…. Take care.😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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unres!!

Yay! First one to comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 😃
The part was really short, but quite enjoyable..!
I loved how Shakti punched him! 😆 and the way he was defending himself with a bat!
Adorable! 😊
and how he wanted to hug her and ask her a million questions, but that had to wait since she was pissed off and he didn't want her to leave like that..! so sweet!
and the cricket match and how all the boys jumped up to join her team!
"Looks like you don't have a team Indore boy!" that was the best dialogue! loved it!
at the end Kunwar wants to concentrate but we are sure he'll lose..! 😉

Well penned!
plz update asap!
Edited by surbhi_d3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update Tish !!!! Mein toh teri Fan hoon 😃 !!!!
The way Amar scolded the boys hahhahahaha 🤣🤣🤣 !!! That was hilarious !!!
🤣
And fir Shakti kii dhamakedaar entry🤣 🤣 , Shakti is SHAKTISHAALI 😃
I love ArSha fights as well !!! They are just too adorable to handle !!!!! Muahz !!!!
And ArSha ke beech cricket match !!! OMG !!!!!! Tish jaldi update karr !!!!!!!!
love yaa always !!
Edited by kriyansh117 - 13 years ago

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