ArSha SS- Indore Calling- Part 5,pg 36,The End - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Hate it???? U gotta be kidding me. I LOVE IT

Ur FFs are just a treat. Just love it. The moment I get a PM from u Im like jumping for joy

And my Arsha, hayyyeee tooo adorable
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
loved it tish... do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
wow that was an awesome os loved it as always n its super cool
loved shaks n amars mother relation..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Continue re...loved it to the core...
Again shifted to arshaland... 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
thanks a lot ur back!!!
it was really different one... ur writing never disappoints me!!
amazing as usual!!
plzzz continue soon!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
bloody hell...luvd it mahn...awesome...😃
jealous shaks...lovely 2 see...plz plz plz do continue...i wud luv 2 read it...
waise b i wait desperately 2 read ur wrks...😍dey r simply fab...plz do cntinue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Tish, I am extremely sorry for late comments!
Exams are on..so..!

Coming to the OS..! I loved it a lot..!
What actually made me glued to the screen was how naturally you were able to portray the bond between ArSha!
It was truly a delight to see how Kunwar had been giving her millions of hints that she is something more than a friend and that she is bothered and it disturbs her whenever he goes out with a girl, but Shakti being Shakti takes her own sweet time, failing to realize her true emotions for this Indore boy!

Their phone conversation was really cute and adorable and I loved Kunwar's mom's role in the OS, more of sweet and lovable.

The end was well thought and perfectly written! It was a way different moment to see how Kunwar's mom wanted to inform her son about how he'll be literally bashed by Shakti..! Adorable..!

Please make it a SS!
I love the conept, amazing story..! and the major factor being that it was quite natural which made it a treat for us!

Thanks for giving us this beautiful OS!

Thanks for the pm
update asap!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
it was amazing yaar 👏 do i really need to say 😆 continue it and i m sure it gonna be awesome ❤️ like the first one . do continue and update the next part soon , really yaar can't wait 😃

Edited by roshnithediva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Dats just out off the world ...
i mean .. its just ... not fab ... its FAB ...
LUved it to the core
no words to describe it ..
n yup plz update soon
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
it was amazing yr👏👏

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