ArSha SS- Indore Calling- Part 5,pg 36,The End - Page 4

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

So this post is exclusively for Anky di...

pehle se hi sorry bol rhi hun...

So... Yahooo... and Yippeee...🥳


i commented first...

okay so luck factor pehli baar ki aise hi main forums khola and i found this par usmein bhi it took hell lot of time o load so just history se kaise bhi post reply ka layout nikala to reserve just hoping ki time pe ho jaaye...

fir second box bhi res ho gaya...

okay i know i cheated as u must be in office now ( and when u read this uske liye tab office mein the)

but fir bhi saam daam dand bhed...

i commented first😃

so dancing around crazy

am totally gone🤪

and maaf kar dena bacche ko agar bura laga ( kaan pakad ke cutely pout karke chhollli)

but still am very happy

Feeling really great to read ur OS on ArSha.

I like this new concept of yours a lot. Amar in this hometown Indore. And Shaks interaction with Amar's mother. I like it a lot. Have never read it before.

Shaks flown all z way to Indore to check out whether Amar was going to meet that girl. Ab amar ki to watt lagne wali hain since shaks now knows that it was only his prank. Plz do continue this story.

IU know whar, I like the way when Shaks teases Amar all the time about the diction of words his pronunciation n all just the way we saw in their recent telly chakkar interview. Amar was also teasing her about her bengali accent. It would be great if u could include some of these teasing sessions in one of your future updates.

Tish your writing style is really unique. I like it a lot. Will wait for ur next update.

Originally posted by: aria009hera

vaishu meri jaan.. sacchi naa, ab mujhe nahi lagta mai kahi bhi first to comment hone wali hu.. i literally come home, read the FF updates of my fav authors, have dinner and doze off.. and after the 30th i dont even know whether i will get an internet connection or not.. as i may be posted somewhere else.. ufff...

mere khud ke likhne ke din toh pata nahi kahaan chale gaye aisa lagta hai..

but me iijjj super happy ki ur d first to comment shweetoo pie!! chal now me ijj off to see IPKKND!!