FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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Rabba-Ve-Delena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

Thoroughly enjoyed reading that! Full of angst Nisha!
Brilliance!

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Izza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Really liked it..Please PM me when u update
Sent u a buddy request 😊

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Hammi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

amazing luv all the parts thanxs for PM cont soon

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Honkytonk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#324

Arnav seems to be truely repenting for his past behaviour, but Khushi will not forgive so easily!!! As well she shouldn't!!!!! He will need to work dam hard to win her trust back and I hope she gives him chance to do that at least.

Thanks for PM

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rhearuhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#325

Loved how arnav apologises to khushi very sweetly done!

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Paramjit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#326

Amazing update loved Arnav asking for forgiveness and the repentance track. Arnav now wooing his first love Khushi. I hope to read the next update when it comes dying to read it.

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Shreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#327

read it in one go...

and loved it...

aww arnav was such a meanie..before

good khushi is giving him a hard time...;)

though would love to see how her arnavji will win her heart back!...:D

plss update soon...and also PM me the next part..;)

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Swetyz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#328

Read all the parts in one go
Very nice ff
Please add me to ur budy list

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Kiaaraa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#329

Amazing work.. gr8 storyline & very very interesting to read.. keep up the good job.

Kiaaraa

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Sara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#330

First thank you for pm me in evry time you update that was realy a nice and sweet gesture of you my friend

2/ sorry for not be abel to comment befors even when a read you story i didn't do soo forgive me because thos last monthe a was soo busy withe my study

3/The Thin Line/Their Child/Breathe For Me and Red Desire I read them they wondifulll for every stences it make me feel the power of love not false hate that it's just a way to break the wall between the heart and warm feelings of Arhi I think in each relationship there's times like this after that we have fear and wrong thinking toward the other partner but I wish in your story that wins their love and solve all their wrong thoughts to each other

4 / for your other stories I have not had time for read them yet but I promise I will do so soon as I find a little time because I'm too occupy to prepare for my big exam in economics & management I need prayers too many for succeed I want to tell you this before finishing my little comment you're a very nice person with a beautiful talent you show us in every word for my point of view I love your writing as your way of expressing the feeling of the characters in each story or whatever it it is unfortunately love or stress or joy or happiness to see each other for giving us this present of different feelings in a single piece I believe that the real writer is one who can manage all forms of character in the story so I congratulate you for the good and happy when you give me each time it is a plaisire great for me which gives me great satisfaction just a quick note I notice that you repeat the paragraph so before publir the story tries to read in.DON'T be mad at me ok!!

Thank you again and I wish you a happy day kiss