New OS : In His Veins MATURE

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

honey don't get me wrong, but both khushi & arnav dying in the end didn't sit well with me...i know its your story & i shouldn't be dictating my terms here, but i atleast expected khushi to survive..in that way she would have also known what ever arnav did was part of his attempt to save her from the clutches of snake...but anyways, brilliantly written as always...BTW, do update your other works soon..dying to read them...luv ya...😊

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

ur writing is amazing,excellent 👏

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

shyam is so sick...good one...

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

M stunned!!😲 i hv nthn to say..! I seriously cnt believe u wrote smthn like dis..n i cnt evn praise u cz m at a loss 4 words..
bt hats off to u 4 using such a topic to cnvey emotions dat cnt b said in a nrmal setup..i felt 4 both of them..sadistic,bt really moving..

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velangini

@velangini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

omg shyam is a sick psycopath😡

that was brilliant

well written part

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Great OS!
Very intense & gripping till end.Emotions were beautifully describd..Beautiful piece of work!

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arhi10

@arhi10

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

that was heart-wrenchin...

thnxz for de pm!!!

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-BarunKiMeera-

@-BarunKiMeera-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

I m crying, very heart touching.

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

wow dear...it was lovely...loved it n thnx 4da pm...

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meera

@jblueday

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

amazing! i have no words...😭 it was just brilliant!! poor arnav he is so desperate to fall for shyam's evil plans😡 to save his khushi but fooled as always, you have brilliantly portrayed arnav's pain for khushi- for her heartbreak and for her death😭 please give happy endings to your stories i cant bear this much pain and OMG arnav killed himself to reunite with his love..i cant even imagine!!!😲

thanks for the pm👏👏👏👏👏