New Maaneet FF Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na#4 LINK#5 pg147 - Page 49

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I feel blessed to have found each one of u. It is just a matter of 2 updates guys and Geet's new journey will begin I am sure u will love the twist that I am going to introduce😳 There would 2 more characters that would be entering this FF and its a surprise I am sure u gonna love them
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PART 27

Adi and Prem were now careful they did not leave Geet alone

They allowed her to cry as they knew it was important for her to remove her pain completely so that the next morning can bring the message of a new start for their princess

Next Day

Geet was still sleeping

Prem and Adi were busy discussing this issue

Adi: Main uss Maan ko zinda nahi chodunga usne meri Geet ka dil toda hai usse kya laga k humari Geet akeli hai? Abhi uska bhai zinda hai aur uske iss bhai k rehthe hue wo Geet ka kuch nahi bigaad saktha [I will kill that Maan how dare he to break the heart of my Geet. What did he feel that Geet is alone? No he is wrong we r there with her and as long as his brother is there he won't be able to touch her shadow also]

Prem: Usse jo karna tha usne kar diya ab hume sochna hai hume kya karna hai [Whatever he wanted to do he has already done it now we need to think what we r supposed to do]

Adi: Karna kya hai chal uske ghar jaakar usse achha sabak seekhathe hai [What else lets go to his house and teach him a good lesson]

Prem: Nahi [no]

Adi: Kyat u nahi chahtha k MSK ko saza mile? Kya tu Geet k aasuyon ko nazarandaaz kar dega? [Don't u want to punish that MSK? Have u forgotten Geet's tears?]

Prem: Geet k aasuyon ka chun chun kar hissaab lunga main par humara tareeka alag hoga [He will pay a heavy price for this sin but we will use a different way to accomplish this task]

Adi: Kya matlab? [what do u mean?]

Prem: MSK ko uski kismat par chod de Adi hume bus Geet ki taakat bane rehna hai aur usse uss bulandiyon tak pauchana hai jiske baare mein kabhi MSK sapne mein bhi nahi soch saktha [Let destiny decide the fate of MSK Adi we just have to take care of Geet and we have to ensure that she touches the sky of success which MSK can't even imagine of touching in his dreams]

Prem: Geet ko thukrakar MSK ne waise bhi apne batkismati ka darwaza khud khol diya hai aur jo bachi kuchi kasar hai wo toh Naintara puri kar hi degi uski kismat mein toh bus barbaadi hi likhi hai [By rejecting Geet he hass himself opened the doors of his downfall and whatever little part is remaining that will be taken care by that evil Naintara from both the sides he is going to suffer]

Prem:Hume bus Geet ka dhyan rakhna hai; faisle wo legi; manzile wo tai karegi hum bus diya jalaye usse raasta dhikhayenge [We just need to take care of Geet; the decisions would be hers; she would be the one who will find her destination we will only act as a lamp and show her the right path]

Adi: haan aur Geet ko aisi bulandiyon tak pauchayege jaha MSK ka kaala badal galti se bhi mandara na sake [Yes we will take Geet to such a top level that the dark cloud called MSK will never be able to touch her]

Prem: MAINE KUCH SOCHA HAI ADI AGAR MERI YE SOCH SACH HO GAYI TOH GEET RAATO RAAT ITNI MASHOOR HO JAAYEGI K USKI PARCHAYI KA BHI KOI MUKABLA NAHI KAR PAAYEGA [I HAVE THOUGHT OF SOMETHING ADI IF MY IDEA IS SUCCESSFUL THEN WITHIN A FORTNIGHT GEET WILL BECOME SO FAMOUS THAT THERE WOULD BE NO ANSWER TO HER SHADOW ALSO]

Adi: Kya socha hai tune? [What's the idea?]

But before Prem could disclose his idea they heard a movement from Geet's room and both of them rushed in that direction immediately

Adi: Good Morning Geet

Geet was feeling guilty as she was aware that her behaviour might have caused loads of trouble to both of them

Geet: Adi bhaiya wo..[Adi Bro actually]

But before she could say something Prem entered her room with a cup of tea

Prem: Ye lijiye Madam aapki bed tea [Here is your bed tea Madam]

Adi: Haan peeke bata kaisi bani hai kyunki..[ Yes taste it and tell me how is it as']

Prem: Kyunki maine isse banaya hai [As I am the one who has prepared it]

He bows down in a filmy style

Prem: Always at your service Madam

Adi: Kya? Prem tujhe sharam nahi aati jhooth bolthe hue ye chai tune nahi maine banayi hai [What? U shameless liar; I am the one who has prepared this tea and not u]

Prem: Dekh Adi agar tune iss chai ka credit lene ki koshish kina toh humare beech jhadda ho jaayega [Look Adi if u try to take the credit of this tea then I am warning u will will end up in a fight]

Geet was confused here she was feeling guilty for troubling both of them and instead of listenting to her they were busy with their silly fights

Adi: Achha bol agar ye chai tune banayi hai toh chai ki patti kitne chammach dali tune? [Oh really if u have prepared this tea can u tell me how many spoonful of tea powder have u included in this?]

Prem gave a confused look

ADI: Dekha chori pakdi gayi agar ye chai tune banayi hothi toh tujhe iss sawal ka jawab sochna nahi padtha [Look caught u if u were the one who had prepared this tea then why r u thinking so much on my question?]

Prem: Issmein sochne ki kya baat hai jitna paani aur dudh daala hai uske hisaab se hi chai ki patti daali hogi [It's simple on the basis of the amount of water and milk that I had used accordingly I had added the tea powder]

Adi: Yeah koi jawab nahi hua [This is not an answer]

Prem: Jawab tu badmein dhund pehle ye bata tune shakar kitne chamach daali hai [U search ur answers later on first tell me how many spoon of sugar did u add in this tea]

Adi: 5 chammach [5 spoonfuls]

Geet gave a shocking expression to Adi

Adi: Mera matlab hai 3 chammach [I mean 3 spoonfuls]

Prem: Dekha dekha answer badal diya iska matlab ye jhooth bol raha hai maine tumhe batatha hoon Geet maine issmein 2 chammach shakar daala hai [Look he changed his answer that means I am the one who is telling the truth I have added only 2 spoonfuls of sugar in your tea]

Prem gives the tea to Geet

Prem: Ab yakeen ho gaya na tumhara ye chashmish bahi kitna kaamchor hai [Now u have understood na your brother who wears specks is so lazy]

Adi: Tune mujhe chasmish bulaya? [U r making fun of me?]

Prem: Haan wo bhi Dadajiwala chashma pehnewala bilkul style nahi hai tujhmein [Yes and that too the one who wears old fashioned specks u don't have any fashion sense dude]

Adi: Ab toh tu ye chai dene se raha [Now let me see how will u give this tea to Geet]

Adi holds the cup from the other end

Geet was enjoying their Tom and Jerry fight

Adi: Ye chai maine banayi hai [I have made this tea]

Prem: Nahi maine banayi hai [No I have made this]

Adi: Maine [I am the one]

Prem: Maine [I am the one]

Suraj: (servant) Ye chai aap dono mein se koi bana hi nahi saktha Sir kyunki ye chai nahi balki gud (jaggery) ka paani hai jise Prem Sir chai samaj k le aaye [None of u can preparethis tea Sir as this is jaggery water and not tea; Prem Sir got this accidently]

Prem: Par ye toh chai k flask mein rakha tha [but this was kept in the tea jar]

Suraj: Wo kya haina Sir mujhe koi aur dabba nahi mil raha tha issliye maine isse use kar liya [Actually I was not getting any other jar hence I used this one]

He takes the cup from Adi and Prem's hand and walks out of the room

Geet was looking at both of them intently

Prem and Adi hold their ears and bow down in front of her

Together: Shehzadiji apne inn doh bewakoof gulamo ko maafi baksh dijiye [Princess pls forgive ur two stupid slaves]

Geet started laughing; a lone tear rolled down from Prem and Adi's cheek as this was what they were dying to see

They had promised one another that from today they won't allow Geet to cry and her musical laughter was a winning sign for both of them

Meanwhile,

Khurana Mansion

Naintara: Nakul Maan kaha hai? [Nakul where is Maan?]

Nakul: Wo so rahe hai [he is sleeping]

Naintara: Kya? Thik hai tum jau [What? Okay u can leave]

Naintara : Agar ye aise hi sotha raha toh najaane kitna nuksaan ho jaayega [If he continues to sleep like this then it will lead to a tremendous loss]

Naintara: Bevakoof aadmi ab nahi samaj paaya k har ek minute kitna keemti hai agar hum chahe toh ek minute mein karodo ki movie sign kar sakthe hai par ye gadha yaha so raha hai disgusting [Foolish Man he does not understand the importance of time if we wish we can earn crores of rupees in a minute by just signing a movie and this stupid is sleeping over here disgusting]

She entered his room and was shocked to see Maan sleeping on the floor

The whole room was a mess but the thing that caught her attention was the divorce papers

She immediately picked up the papera and with an evil smirk on her face she uttered

Naintara: Bechare Maan Geet ki judayine inhe Devdaas banadiya hai [Poor Maan Geet's separation has made him Devdas]

Naintara: Sach kehthe hai Maan hume tumpar bada taras aa raha hai par kya kare hume toh humara fayda pyara hai [To be frank enough Maan I really feel pity to see u in this condition but what can I do I treasure my benefit above anything else]

She scanned the divorce papers once again

Naintara: Hmm' toh abhi tak dil koshish kar raha hai iss tute hue rishte ko bandhe rakhne ki par hum haina aapke bache hue rishte ko jalane k liye hum aag ka kirdaar bakhubi nibhayenge [Hmm' so ur heart is still trying to hold the ends of ur broken bond but I am there na I will take up the role of fire and will burn all the traces of your relationship]

Naintara: Maan uthiye [Maan wake up]

Maan opened his eyes with great difficulty

Maan: Kaun Geet? [Geet?]

Naintara makes an irritating face

Naintara: Hum hai Maan aapki Tara [it's me Maan ur Tara]

Maan: Wo I am sorry tara najaane kaise maine uss..[I am sorry Tara I don't know why I took her']

Naintara stops him

Naintara: Ab dubara uss chudail ka naam mat lijiyega aur waise bhi hum jaante hai aapne unhe yaad kyun kiya? [Pls don't take the name of that witch and I know why u still remember her]

Maan: (worried) Kyun? [Why?]

Naintara: Kyunki aapne abhi tak puri tarah se unse rishta nahi toda [U have still not thrown her out of ur life completely]

Maan: Aisa nahi hai Tara [No this is not the case]

Naintara: Aisa hi hai Maan par hum ab aur nahi sahenge aap sirf humare hai aur aapko humse koi nahi cheen saktha [This is the truth Maan but now I won't tolerate this any further u r mine and no one can snatch u away from me]

Maan did not give any reply

Naintara: Ye lijiye Maan inn divorce papers par sign karke mujhe galat saabit kar dijiye [Here sign on these divorce papers and prove me wrong]

She forcefully placed a pen in his hand but Maan was still reluctant

Naintara: Lagta hai Geet ka dhoka humare sachhe pyar se zyada anmol hai aapko [It seems Geet's deceit is more precious to u as compared to my love]

She had hit the bull's eye with this statement of hers

Maan signed the divorce papers within a matter of seconds

Naintara: (thinking) Isse kehthe hai khud ki barbadi khud k haatho se likhna [This is what is termed as to write ur own downfall with ur own hands]

She took the papers from his hand and hugged him tightly

Naintara: Oh Maan hum bata nahi sakthe aapko dubara paakar hum kitne khush hai [Oh Maan I can't express my happiness after finding u back]

Maan gave a weak smile

Naintara: Chaliye Maan ab jaldi se taiyaar ho jaayiye aapke liye ek aur surprise hai [Commom Maan get ready fast there is another surprise for u]

Maan nods his head in approval

Naintara: Ab hum jo karne jaa rahe hai wo aapke aur Geet k rishte ko deadline tak paucha dega [This surprise of mine will ensure that your relationship with Geet reaches a deadline]

Naintara and Maan arrive at a particular place

Maan: Ye toh Press conference ki tarah lag raha hai [It seems there is a press conference over here]

Naintara: Ji Maan humi ne bulaya hai aap bus humare saath chaliye hum sab samal lenge [Yes Maan I have called this press conference u just come with me I will take charge of this event]

PRECAP 1: Maan gulped his saliva. Everyone was waiting for an answer. Prem felt like breaking the TV set; he was going to switch of the television when Geet held his hand firmly and informed him that she needs to know the answer that this man would be giving

PRECAP 2: Geet wipes all the traces of Maan from her memories to start a new and happy life

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Part 28: Page 112

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
adi prem thinking of something for geet prem have a idea for making geet popular love the way prem adi trying to make geet laugh chai scene mast nt and maan scene hate them so finally maan signed the diavorce paper and p[ress confrence do next soon



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the wonderful update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww piya... loved the cute scene between adi n prem...
arghhh...that NT made Maan sign divorce papers... what is she upto now...I hope she along with Maan don't end up humiliating Geet publically...seems like she is gonna announce that Maan is single again..n the precap seems interesting...
So geet will eventually decide to move on in her life...
wanna see Maan craving for her...
n plz plz I wanna her to be stone hearted...she shouldn't melt seeing Maan's pain..

can't wait for the next part...
update soon
Edited by namita25 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sahi mein...maan ne khud ki badbadi khud k haatho se likha hai... waiting fr his punishment...lets wait n watch...kab isse akal ate hai...kash jaldi ajaye...kyunki hum uske badbadi dekhne k liye tadap rahe hai...aur geet k abadi k liye taras rahe hai...zaldi se dukh k badal hat jaye aur geet k zindagi mein sunhera subah k suraj k kirne bikhre...plz zaldi se...

awesome n wonderful update...


loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update dear... loved it😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm updt...
wtng for maans reply
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Posted: 13 years ago
welcome back n keep up t good job...lov ur writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am glad that adi and prem are standing beside G as a pillar of support...these are the ppl who r with her thru thick and thin...
now what is this NT upto...

maan is an epitome of foolishness, blind anger, arrogance, pride and selfishness...and these very same things are going to bring his downfall and take him far away from NT...
i have got no sympathy for this man..

curious to see what was that press conference for...and waiting to see the emrgence of strong G😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for continuing the story.
It is a great story😊

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