Her Pregnancy-Part two *part 3 updated*

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@Fazila~

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

wow, its beautiful...plz do conti n pm me thanks :)

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craziefan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

loved it!!! please continue!!! thanks a lot for the pm

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sweetysaran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

loved it...

awesome...

the way arnav and kushi loved each other was really awesome...

loved both the parts very much...

nicely written...

add me to ur buddy list... i have sent a request...

waiting for the next update...

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RazRazee

@RazRazee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Wow it's a lovely story so emotional please do continue!

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Shreya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

aaah shit miscarriage!...:|

that was so sad!..but i am glad that she did not have any further complications..:)

anyways do continue...its very nice!

and PM me also the next part..

and dont worry i will send you a buddy request..:)

update soon

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Loved it very well written
Thanks for the pm, the dialogues between arshi were awesome
I'm eager to read more

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Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

I am so glad you have started writing again. I just caught up with both parts. Loving it. Disappointment is really worse than anger. I know what you were trying to say there through Khushi. The affection was really cute. It is hard to write, I know, but you did a great job. I wish I could write in affection as well. Another good thing was that you avoided too much background, I always get caught up in that and what I plan as an OS turns out to be an SS haha. Great job!

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Sanchari

@.hea.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Aww..That was cute!

And logical that is. No illogical stuff I loved it.

And yeah, do you know when someone gets sick and people start blaming her I get annoyed? Ofc she needs rest, she surely won;t do that on purpose will she? Therefore, I loved it again when he controlled his anger and hugged her. That was beyond beautiful ❤️!!..