Her Pregnancy-Part two *part 3 updated*

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SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Really loved this two shot!!! Very well written and beautiful do u have other ffs?

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

And please continue it :DDD I'm really loving it so far and u should make it a short story!!

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Superb!

I will love to read more of your writing.

Plz make me your buddy and send me PM as well.

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•Jessie/Jessica•

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Aww, so sad 😭

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Shalini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

nice :) do pm me for the next part

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priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

so emotional yaar...arnav is so caring

continue soon

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tejeswigodavari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

s i liked it plz continue

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bakula_gandhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

awesome...loved it
how do you write so well.

khushi and arnav both need each other to get through this time.

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arshia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

This was such an AWWW one, Hiru.I felt like hugging Arnav , Khushi and the best hug for you.

I am not coming out of the AWWWness.

Very well written...all the emotions a couple would feel after this kind of a tender tragedy.Well, it did take me back to the one I had...was shattered then...as if it was the end of me and my baby making tubes.And Just like Dr.Segal, my doc had given me similar instructions.Well, enough of my story.

This was beautiful! Thank You...yes! yes! Another part...that would be a Treat!

Ash.

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Samiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

He stared at her wife, his shoulders slumped, hands balled tightly into fists. He was doing it again wasn't he? The one thing he would regret for the rest of his life; the one thing he had nightmares almost every night- misunderstanding and judging her without listening to the entire story. He felt like hurting himself for hurting his already fragile wife with his unkind words. There she was trying her best to help him and he was reprimanding her when what she needed the most were his kind words.

amazing lines dear...I loved this part so much... it shows arnav and khushi's emotions so beautifully... nice job dear... do write a third part