Her Pregnancy-Part two *part 3 updated* - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I could seriously visualize the who the whole thing in my mind!!

Could you please, pretty please turn it into an SS. Just a little more of how they coped up with this whole miscarriage!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What nice writing. Yes, miscarriages are so sad and they do happen spontaneously and usually not due to a fall from stairs as you said and other such things. Yes, when there is a tragedy, you always want to blame someone, most times yourself. So I thought your portrayal of everyone's reactions was excellent. Glad that Arnav and Khushi are in it together though. And most definitely when a woman suffers a miscarriage, she often feels she has disappointed everyone. We always take on the world's pain on our own shoulders as women, don't we? Again, beautiful writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Enjoyed reading part two! please continue with part three!
it was so touching and i loved the way you wrote the whole thing!
once again your an amazing writer!


Edited by .Jiya. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is such a sweet story, Hiru. Really felt sorry for both of them, each trying to do the best for the other.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww.
So much of hurt but they both are trying to come out of it together! So sweet!

I love how you wrote about both their self doubts and their need for each other! Strong love!

Very well written!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was amazing and so close to reality. Will love to know how they get past this phase together. I hope you continue maybe until they do eventually a baby😃. Loved the update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW i didn't feel i was reading i was vishuvalizing thn whole part..superb..continue it yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AwesOme Writing!!!!
So Loving And Caring...Beautiful...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AMAZING! Just.. simply... I'm speechless...

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