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Posted: 13 years ago

after a long hot bath she came out of room and saw maan waiting on couch with their breakfast...so now are you ready to tell me the truth or i still have to be oblivion..geet said with a small smile...i think now you should know where are we...so... so come with me...he took her hand and started to walk near balcony...the morning incident was still fresh in her mind...and his hold sent a jittery feeling in her stomach...she slowly removed her hand from his hand to not to make it obvious feeling shy..but maan saw it and ignored thinking her another childish act...he opened the big glass doors leading to a huge balcony...the scene there was so splendid...mountains surrounded them from all directions and the morning sunlight falling on the snow making them shine...she was awed by the beauty...it's beautiful...that's the only word escaped her mouth...


Geet we are in mussoorie...what... she turned facing him now...yes jaan...we are here the place called the queen of mountains...why does this sudden trip...ab now i have to manaofy my mishti to kuch special to karna padega na...her cheek instantly turned in a shade of pink...when do we left home and how do we reach here...at around three we left home and boarded our flight and reached dehradun by 6 then we came here by a cab...and all the while you carried me around...he gave one of his sweetest smile..haw you carried me in front of thousand people on airport...it's so embarrassing...people will be giving disapproving look maan how can you do this...she said in a low voice...he cupped her face and made her face him...do you think jaan that i can embarrass you...we came here from our private jet and thus no one saw us...pakka... do you trust me na..Hmm...ok now give me your big smile...geet smiled..Chalo get ready we will go out...

First they went to gun hills... At a height of 2122 m, this is the second highest peak of the town. During the colonial era, a gun was placed atop the hill and fired exactly at mid-day to announce the time. Thus, the place derived its name as 'Gun Hill'. One can have stunning views of the landscape and other Himalayan Ranges from the place. A 400 m ropeway connects the Mall to this place. Walking is another alternative.

They were exhausted with so much walking and finally decided to have a break to fill their hungry stomach...maan tried to hold her hand or her waist but each time she will move away...maan tried to ignore it but somewhere it started hurting her aloofness...

Then they went to municipal garden...

Located about 3 km from Mussoorie, this beautiful picnic spot is easily accessible by a pony, rickshaw or car. Housed amidst bamboo and deodar trees, it was earlier known as the 'Company Garden'. The place has an artificial lake that provides boating facilities. Varieties of exotic flowers are also found in the gardens. One can also reach the place on foot, via Waverly Convent Road...they opted to do boating in the lake...it was a good experience...both enjoyed their togetherness still geet was busy analyzing her feelings for him...sometimes they will have eyelocks but geet will broke them before he go further...sometimes they will steal glances at each other when the other was not noticing or sometimes their hand will brush each other and she will quickly pull back fidgeting with her top...he tried to talk to her but she will ignore the topic...

Edited by neha512 - 13 years ago
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it was evening and the sun was setting down...they were on the peak enjoying the sunset..

.geet was near the end standing with her hand folded across her chest watching the beautiful color spreading across the sky...sky was covered with red yellow green orange and many other colors ...it was a scene to watch...maan came and hug her from back to warm her body as the temperature was really down...geet stiffened in his hold...and tried to move away...her leg slipped due to the sudden movement and she fell down ...maan cached her in a niche of time otherwise she would have fell in a deep valley... he immediately pulled her back hugging her tight... she felt her bone got crushed... he kept showering her face with numerous kisses ensuring she is alright...he checked her whole body and again hugged her tight...it was so sudden...he was scared to lose his life again...he was angry on her carelessness...god knows what would have happened today...he checked her again and again ensuring himself that she is safe with him...his eyes were spitting fire...she had for the first time saw him such angry...she was scared of him first time...he didn't shouted on her and that was adding to her miseries...he just asked slowly can we please go back to room...in a cold voice...she just follow him silently...she had expected him to shout on her to be angry on her but this was not at all expected...and the way he requested her just shivered her insides...they had stopped being formal and it was just giving her bad vibes...


he steered the car with full speed...it was dangerous in hilly areas and especially at night it could be risky..she tried to stop him by placing her hand on his...he just increased speed more...as they reach the hotel he just went inside without waiting for her...he opened their room...took out their bag and started packing them again...she was just standing as a mute spectator... he packed her bag and was just packing his bag...geet slowly went near him and held his hand...am sorry maan please... maan just pulled back his hand not letting her touch him...geet why are you saying sorry...his voice was cold devoid of any emotion not showing his internal turmoil...please maan don't be angry at me..geet how can i be angry on you its only your right...maan why are you saying like this...she was literally crying saying this...maan just hated her tears...they were making him weak...he so much wanted to hold her in his arms but the fear of losing her forever broke his rationality...he just turned and punched nearby wall breaking his knuckles...geet tried to hold his hand but he just didn't let her touch me...she hold her ears...maan please i am really sorry...you can shout on me even hit me but please don't hurt yourself...why do you care geet?? why?... it pains me to see you hurt...oh here to its you...geet for once did you thought about us...it was always u in our relation..your hurt your anger your happiness your feelings...where was i or at least we...geet was shocked with his outburst...geet tried to cup his face...maan just moved away...she was feeling rejected with his denial...don't you dare touch me...maan it was a mistake i don't know how i slipped...ha it was just a mistake...did you did a single thing that was not a mistake for you...his heart was on fire today...and her indifference from morning just acted as a fuel to it...maan please just listen to me once...that's what i am doing since we are together..But there is a limit for everything...i tried to understand you...your emotions...your feelings...but for once did you thought about me...do you know what i felt at that moment when i saw you slipping from my hand...my world crashed that very second...if i would have been a late in holding you just a nanosecond..do you have any idea what could have happen...

i said you that you are my life but you always played with it...geet was just getting numbed hearing his confession...his each act each word just made her realize how much important she is for me...she just looked away..she noticed he was not touching her...he not for once touched her after the accident neither let her touch him...geet just leave me alone i don't want to talk to you...please maan don't be angry from me god knows what i will do...actually geet that's the problem... i don't have any right to be even angry on you warna you will try another suicide attempt ha...geet i don't even know now are we even friends or not...what relation do we share ha...geet was trying to talk to him but he was in his own world... he was fed up with her... she tried to again touch him..he just left to living room...geet hugged him from back...maan please i m sorry it was an accident...please i won't be able to bear your indifference please don't go away from me...oh i m showing indifference ha and what was you doing since morning..weren't you opposing me ...my touches my hugs were suffocating you right then why you want me to hold you now ha...no it was not like that maan you are misunderstanding...ha its only me who misunderstands everything ha...nai maan i was not avoiding you wo to i ...ha tell me what were you doing..WO maan...geet just blurt out he roared in angry voice...wo i was feeling shy see said in a single breath feeling scared and closed her eyes...oh so you thought its better to go away from me na.. then go i am not stopping you...he just left her in living room and went to another room to calm himself...

Precap: geet manaofying maan and first date...

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imp: aww thanx for those likes...thanku thanku

so it was an unexpected update right guys...and again a cliff hanger...

so to get next update complete the thread and i want 170 likes ...
i am on a devil mode nowadays...


Edited by neha512 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
HUM FIRST AA GAYE ...🥳... CHALO PARTY KARTEY HAI
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED THE UPDATES ... MAAN BILKUL SAHI BOLA... NEXT PART ROCKING HONE WALA HAI
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RESERVE FOR THIRD POST OF MINE ...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
WAITING!!!!!😃
Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
maan is really angry this time
what is this yaar u increased ur quota to 170 likes
this is nt fair😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant update dear..👏👏
this was really unexpected..😲
maan arranged for a trip to manofy his mishty...so sweet...
ho maan in full angry mod...but maan's outburst was really required...
loved the update dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
so a veryyy

niceee

and amazing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb updates..
maan itna gussa.. and geet trying to make him understand..
and he is right it was always her and not him or they

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