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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved da concept...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice intro
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awesome
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awesome start
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will read and comment...
sent the buddy invite...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing start...sent to request do accept it...waiting fr more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2


AT 10:10PM
RESTRAUNT

ARMAAN:So guys aj ka kya plan h
which disco theque are we gonna rock
DEV:me and annie going home its late bhai must hav come
ANNIE:ya bhai lets go bro must be waiting for us
GEET(little irritated):i just dont understand ye kaun si century ka tera bhai h jo tm logo ko enjoy bhi nhi karne deta jab dekho bhai ye kahenge bhai wo kar rhe honge agar mera ko 1 baar mil gya to uski to mai jaaan hi lelu,,,is he sum horny devil dusht danav types jo tm log itna darte ho usse
Dev:geet mind ur tounge(lttle angry) aj k baad u ever said a wrong word about our bhai dont know what i will do
Annie:calm down dev bhai she doesnt know maan bro kaise insaan h
geet maan bhai is not some horny devil he is a prince charming i bet the day you will see him you will lose ur heart jise aj tak koi nhi chura paya
Geet;u must be kidding me tjhe pata h i hate this type of man jo dusro ko control karna chahta h
Dev:geet he is a man of culture and words wo kabhi hme kuch nhi kahte wo hmse sirf 2 saal bade h but phir bhi he had taken care of our family like a father,,,,pata h jab bhi mom and dad business tour ke liye bahaar hote h hi takes care singlehandedly of dadi ,me,annie and even our business here aur rhi late night parties ki to he would hav neven been angry its just we jo jante h ki he wont like it and be tensed till the time we are out
GEET:umm tu to senti ho gya lagta h ab t tere bhai se milna hi padega
Dev;hmm chal now we are going,byee every1
others;byee
suddenly geet's cell rings and she is called home imediately
keh to diya anjaane me ki usse milna hi padega 1 baar par wo kya jane ki uski to duniya hi uske sapno se shuru hoti h and usi k khayalo me khatm hoti h, shayad khuda ko bhi ye duriya ras na ayi aur isiliye uske 2 lafjo ko itni jaldi puri kar di


at khurana mansion

dadi:maan aap dinner karke hamare room me ayiye kuch jaruri baat karni hai
Maan; ji dadi aap chaliye hum abi aye
Dadi :hmm jaldi ayega am waiting
saying dis dadi went away

in dadi's room
Maan;dadi kya kaam tha
Dadi:maan aap ayiye baithiye hmare paas thode samay hmare saath bhi bitaiye
maan:ji dadi to apki tabiyat kaisi h
Dadi: maan hum thik h hme aapse kuch baat kehni thi
Maan: ji dadfi boliye
Dadi:maan humari ab umar ho gyi h koi bharosa nhi kab hume kuch ho jae
Maan;dadi aap ye kya bol rhe ho apko kuch nhi hoga
Dadi: maan ye aap bh jante h hum kuch galat nhi bol rhe h accha ab hamari baat suniye ab aap ki shadi karne ki umar ho gyi h hum bhi apki biwi ko dekhna chahte h aap btayiye kya aap ko koi ladki pasand h
Maan st:dadi aap ko kaise btau ki ye dil to kabhi mera tha hi nhi jab se use dkhe h usi ko chaha h usi k liye jiya h but mai ye bhi janta hu ki wo mujhse pyaar nhi karti aur mai use apne aap se bandh nhi sakta shayad ab wo sirf mera khwab hi ban kar rhe sakti h hamesha k liye
Maan;nhi dadi mai kisi se pyaar nhi karta
Dadi : maan apko pata h jab aap chote the to humne and apke dadaji ne apki shadi hmare khas friend ki poti se tay kardi thi, hum chahte h aap unse mile aur btaye ki aapko is rishte se kuch aitraaz to nhi
Maan:hmm
Dadi: maan hme pata h aap soch rhe honge itni jaldi kya h but aaj kal na hmare health thk reahti h na hmare dost ki hum dono aap dono bacho ko ek sath dekhne ki aas me hi ji rhe h hme wishwas h aapko wo bhut psand ayeng
Maan;ji dadi ab i m going to my room,,,gud nyt aap aram kariye
Dadi:ji beta gud nyt



Handa Mansion

geet:mumma kya hua why do u calles me immediately i was with me friends
MOM:geet dadu ki tabiyat bhut kharab h he had an mild heartattack and wanted to meet you(said little crying)
Geet(with tears) : wo theek to h na mai abhi unko jake mil tu

in dadu's room
geet ran and hug her dadu who was resting on bed
geet:dadu aap theek to ho na you knw u are so precious to me aap phir apni princess k liye apna khya kyu nhi rakhte aap ko kuch ho jata to said with tears
Dadu:are mera acha mujhe kuch nhi hua mai theek hu gudia
geeet maine tujhse aaj huch mangne ke liye bulaya will you give me that
Geet;dadu maine aapko kab kuch mana kia tell me what you want
Dadu;geet aaj mujhe 1 mild stroke aya but doctors said ki is age me kabhi kuch ho sakta h and u knw its right to tu mujhe aaj 1 promise kar
Geet;aapki geet aapko kuch nhi hone degi and aapko jo maangna h mango mai apko wo dungi promise
Dadu:geet my last wish is i wanna see you married humne ek ladka dekha h bhut acche ghar ka h smart bhi h and cultured bhi he will prove to be the best life partner tu usse ek baar mil ke shadi kar le geet aur mai chahta hu ye shadi isi hafte ho
Geet: dadu itni jaldi meri studies bhi complete nhi hui
and i still enjoying my life abhi kaise

Dadu:beta wo kabhi tujhe nhi rokenge enjoy karne se and rhi baat studies ki you can complete it after mariage ad waise tujhe kab se itna studies me interest aa gya and you promised me now so you cant back of girl
Geet:ji dadu thik h as you say mai shadi ke liye tayaar hu
Geet st:aur mr dulha just wait and watch how do i make your life hell mai tujhe jine nhi dungi
Geet; acha dadu aap araam karo am going gud nyt

precap:so kaun kisse shadi karega 😉
so guys how was it i know less maaneet but its an important part i hope you like it
plz like and comment its motivate me😊

Edited by neha512 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
i lyk it
it will be interesting
naughty geet n hotie cutie maan
do continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start..

Pls add me in ur pm list...

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