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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#431

Sorry sorry. . . .
M realy sorry 4 the late comnt. . . . . .
Waise it was superb update. . . . . .
Start bohut emotional tha.0. . .
Bt,thank god emotional part jaldi khatam ho gaya. . , .
Lovd the update. . . .
Bt,m sad. . . .
Dis time deetha di,
u dnt pm me.. . .*sobs*
itz ok. . .
Bt jab nxt part update karoge toh paka pm krna. . .
Egarly waitng 4 ur update. . . .

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#432

Wildcat 90+ likes khatam ho gaye i m waiting for frndshp vala spcl update nd haa check ur inbox

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Shreya

@krasforever

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#433

awesome awesome awesome...

ur ff is like a medicine for every Kriyanshian to heal their pain...

hats off to u n to ur writing skills...

through ur writings u seems to be a vry emotional n romantic person, so i'll call ur update a very deethalacious update means very emotional n romantic😉

update soon...😃

Edited by krasforever - 13 years ago

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Rucha

@rock_ruvi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#434

awesome update dear...

next update soon...

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khushboo

@khusbooluvarsha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#435

loved it ...cute and romantic update

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.Harshita.

@.Harshita.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#436

Heyya...am reading ur FF for first tym...

Its Awesome... <3 <3

Kriyaansh Rockzz!!!!

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esha

@ArShaAngels

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#437

Sorry for commenting late...

coming back to the updte...

it was really Awesome...

nice song selection...

thnx for the pm...

waiting for the nxt prt...

Edited by eshachawla26 - 13 years ago

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#438

*friendship special*

dedicated to all my frnds here...

i dedicate this to my dearest frnd...whom i can share my every second...

shaffy!!!!!

i know laila...majnu ...waisi naatak toh bohut karti hun mai...and i know at some tyms im hell irritating...and annooying...i hurt some tym and may make u happy...but one thing is sure...

i feel very connected to u ...thats the only reason i open up myself before u...u know what i have never spoken this heartily to anyone any tym...

thanks for coming into my life dear!!!!!!

and tumhe mujhe denekeliye...

THANKS ARSHA!!!!!!!!

chalo apna bhak bhakhogaya...actually according to the theme i wanna write in yellow par u know pdne mei probs hoga so in orange enjoy guys...

part: 32

they led downstairs talking abt where and what to do...

k: rey bolo na kaha jaa rahe hai...

r: baby its surprise...

sh: dekho ...ab swayam mujhe batadega...

sharon whispered in her eyes...

k: acha...kriya looked at her raising her eyebrow...

sharon gave attitude and went to him...

sh: swayam...

(reyam gng front and krisha at back ...)

sw: haa bolo sharon...

sh: hum jaa kaha rahe hai baby...

she asked sweetly...

sw: baby ...just wait ...kk...ab chalo breakfast karni hai...

k: psshhh!!!!! hawa ud gayi madam ki...hahaha...🤣

she sat on the stairs and started laughing hard...sharon glared at her and bet her...reyam as they were unaware they looked at them confused..

r: shar kya hua???

rey asked catching her from beating kriya...

sh: huh...i hate her...

sw: kya hua baby...

sh: dnt call me that...i hate u too...chalo rey..

she said...rey nodded and went with her telling swayam to be with kriya with eyes to which he blinked and repeated the msg...

the bro's smiled at eachother thinking how fools they were to tell to care of their besties...and sharey went away..swayam kneeled beside her who was still laughing and asked...

sw: kya hua kriya??? he asked laughing slightly...

(ps: laughing is contagious)

k: wo...haha...wo ...

she explained him...he just couldnt help from laughing...after few mins...

sw: ab bas...jaldi chal warna roasted bread ke beech mei roast karke rakhke khayegi...

k: haa...chalo😆

they went to the canteen and found sharey with them...looking at them they got to know that rey by know knew what happened and she sat pouting as he was laughing...

sh: *pout*

r: *controlled his laugh* shar...chalo chodo na..we will enjoy...

she rubbed her nose and looked away...

r: sharon...plzz na...idhar dekho..

sh: huh...she said still looking away...

he went before her and did situps...he did 5 but she didnt notice...

r: acha chalo ..mai tumhe kriya ki ek baat bolun???????

this tym she turned to him excitedly and asked...

sh: kya kya??????

r: acha toh meri sorry nahi ..sirf wo important hai...jao mai nahi baat karta tujhse...

he turned...now its his turn...

its gonna be fun😉

she bit her lip ...

offo kya kardiya maine...

she went before him ...

sh: rey aisa nahi hai...

r: aisa hi hai..go shar...jao apni behan ke paas.

sh: rey...shut up...u know it...

she said...

rey with a naughty smile turned and looked at her...

she looked at him with a pouut...

he smiled wide and hugged her...she too hugged him...while hugging she said...

sh: tumhe pata hai rey jab shona has rahi thi tab mujhe bhi hasi aayi par meri image ki rep keliye gussa karna pada...

rey made a "o "shape and pulled back and looked at her ...

she made a cute face and bit her toungue...

and both looked at each other for secs and burst out laughing...

then kriyam enterd...all smiled at each other and sat on a round table for breakfast

rey and swayam facing each other and same with krisha...

they had breakfast laughing and talking...reyam said them their plans abt the work...

finally they led to the taxi and took their places...rey sat front and swayam b/w krisha

kriya looked out swaying her fingers in the wind...

sharon was looking out...a strand fell on her face...swayam took it away...she smiled at him placed her head on his shoulder looking out and he took her hand in his and both looked out as his right arm went around her pulling her into a hug...she moved close and placed her ri8 hand on his and both were just looking out enjoying it...

here kriya like a kid was playing out ...they were on city outskirts so she spread her hand out and played...suddenly it struck...hehe...no he caught it...he turned sidewards towards the window and took her hand in his...and kissed it...she smiled...she moved forward for more comfort...she placed her head on back of his seat and looked out...

he too placed his head on the seat and played with her fingers...his view just struck at her hand and she looked out...finally swayam and rey came to senses...they looked aroung...

r: just stop at the right end and u can take off...we will call when needed...

he said...

driver: okay sir...

he said and stopped the carkrisha got down and btoh caught their hands and ran here and there admiring the beauty lik small kids...reyam spoke with the driver and finally he took back track...they looked and smiled at them...

sw: oye ...apsarayein .chale??

he shouted to have some fun...but to his badluck he was irritated ...

r: ap...wat???

he got pissed...

sw: argghhh!!!!! abey apsarayein matlab beauties...

krisha laughed slightly at him...

sw: hogaya??/toh chale?????

he asked sternly...

k: swayam...

she went to him as if having a doubt...

sw: haa...

he asked casually...

k: tum khadoos ho????? ya fir sadu???

sw: what????😡

sh: arey ye toh sadu hi hoga..khadoos toh rey haina...

r: kya?????😲

reyam: u...

they ran back of their bff's...it was a deserted road...so they were enjoying their best...

finally rey lifted sharon off her feet from back and was turning her when kriya stopped and swayam caught her ear

kriya was pating hard...sharey too joined them soon and laughed heartily...

k: phew...aur nahi hota..

she said panting hard and laughing...

"mee too" mee too sw said follwed by sh and rey...

sh: par guys hum yaha kyun aaye ?????yaha hai kya???/

r: chalo mere saath...he caught her by shoulders and took her to the edge...she looked down the cliff/...

sh: wow!!!!! she said screaming.
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she jumped and rey smiled...

k"kya hai?/ kriya asked curiously...

sw: chalo...

soon kriya too jumped out of excitement...

k: guys look!!!!!!!!!!

reyam &sh: wat...

k: neeche beech shore...

shareyam: pata hai hame...sea hogi toh sea shore hogi na..

they said sarcastically...

k: ohh shut up...poora toh suno...neeche beech shore mei party!!!!

shareyam: wat?/

they looked down...and yeah there was going a cocktail party...they grinned wide...

sh: lets go n rock guys...

k: yeah...diva's are gonna take that place...

she said with attitude...

reyam raised their their eyebrows and nodded lyk

"aaha???"

krisha were gng front and reyam at back...

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in middle krisha sat down...

krisha: aur nahi hota...

rey went forward and stood before kriya ...she blushed at what he was gonna do...he smiled back and turned and lifted sharon in his arms and chuckled...her mouth fell open...

swayam too swaron too chuckled...sharon made herself comfortable adjusting her hands around his neck...

swayam nodded his head and stood before kriya...and gave her his hand...she too and stood up...he turned and took her on his back...they walked down to the shore where it was taking place...

but all were just standing bored...

krisha got down and went to them

sw: excuse me...whats the problem???? its supposed to a cocktail party ri8??/

man: yeah but the DJ is ill...he left 10 mis back...

reyam: hmm...

looked at each other and winked...they just ran to the DJ setups...swayam pulled his iphone and played his tracks...

for a change they played hindi songs...soon the party took the charge...krisha were dancing slowly tapping their feet slowly...reyam were just examining the setup to know a little bit and make the party rocking

krisha were dancing when something took their focus...they ran to them and gulped the two shots which are pretty enough to get on their heads...

fially reyam set a rocking music and got down...but no they didnt find the girls...they were looking aroung when the music stopped...

refresh the page!!!!!!!!!

all looked around at the dj stage...but no ...no one...suddenly four hands came up on the table as the song started playing...

and then krisha with their tougues at the end out their mouths looking cutely came up and grinned like kids
reyam looked at thm confused as if what had gotten into them???

and krisha looked at each and hugged each other and started moving their heads enjoying the beats...all looked at them and soon started swaying...reyam got that they wer drunk...they beat their heads...

krisha jumped down and sharon was dancing when kriya lipsed the song...she went to swayam and hugged him...

next sharon too did the same and hugged rey/...

reyam sighed. and hugged back looking at each other and thinking ..."girls"

krisha pulled back...

sh: : jab yar kare parwa meri...

she turned...

k: mujhe kya parwa is duniya ki...

she fell back when swayam caught her by back of her neck and walked forward dragging her and she was grinning lyk fool folding her hands...sharon fell on rey facing her back towards him when rey caught her by his arms unders hers as she spread them.....

imagine it more crazily kk...and he pulled her out of crowd

they stood straight and were swaying to the music...reyam saw their besties opening their heart...and their loves...so they did some locking and lyrical hip hop moves together...all stopped and looked at them at that tym...

sh: dil ki takteen par hun likh thi

ishqan ishqan
jag kya jaan e dil ko mere rishta kiska...

she sang...and looked at swayam lovingly...

k:dil ki takteen par hun likh thi

ishqan ishqan
jag kya jaan e dil ko mere rishta kiska...

wrapped her arms around sharons neck from backa nd sang looking at rey...

reyam stood there looking at them all smily smily,,,rey his hands on hips and swayam folding his hands...

they smiled at them...and soon all started dancing together...

sudenly kriya pushed swayam down...he fell down ...she laughed...and sharon too did the same...boys chased them and finally they caught them...

they danced sang and enjoyed a lot...finally they bid bye and moved to some free space on the shore...

kriyam were sitting as rey went onto the rocks to look at the sea followed by sharon...both the girls were till now on talli mode...kriya went on her knees before sw and started making a small pony...swayam was just lost in sharon that he didnt notice what kriya is doing...she took a band and finally made a pony (lyk kishan has)

se looked at him and started laughing...

thats when he came out of his dreams and knew the situation...he glared at her making her laugh more...he started chasing her...

here sharon was trying to grab his attention but rey was lost in his own thoughts...

(ab thoughts bataun kya????/ nahi yaar u know ri8...ab mai bolungi toh mood kharab hojayega)

so sharon pressed his musles and then hers seeing how much they were.(talli mode)...rey sensed someone continuosly pressing his muscles...

he looked back...there she stood checking her muscles and then his...when she saw him seeing at her he grinned lyk fool and gave poses luk a bodybuilder...

rey always used to pose before her shirtless showing her his muscles...now she was teasing him...he too chased her...finally the boys lifted the girls in arms and reached each other...gave a evil smile...took them to some deep waters and dropped them...

thats it...

khatam...baaki next update...

hope u liked it...

precap: im loving u tonight!!!!!!!!!!😉

like and review...

love u all/...

-deetha

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#439

unres... Yyyaaayyy... Finallyyy... Tune to Aadha update bola tha ye to pura he aa gya... 😃 ... Thank god tune update kar diya... And... Morover... I'm the 1st one to commenttt... Wwwooopppiiieee... 😃 ... I just loved lovvveeeddd your this 1st half... Was litrely laughing lyk hell at the start wherw kria said... "sharon ki ho hawa nikal gayi" ... And sharon aur gr8... She also wantedvto laugh bt attitude karke she didnt... Hey bhagwan... Bt dis whole moment i was lirelly having tears in my eyes has has k... 🤣 🤣 ... Stil cant stop laughinh... 🤣 🤣 ... Nd cocktail party... Yyyaaayyy... Just like cocktail movie... N d song sequenceee... Wow... Awesooommmeee... 😃 ... Nd thanx fir not mentioning rey's thoughts in dis update atleast... Nd last mei reyam threw kisha in water... Hahahahaa... Rofl... Awesommmeee update re... Waise i dnt think my edit really made any diff on ur update .. 😛

Edited by akanksha_arsha - 13 years ago