IPKKND FF | Broken Strings (ON HOLD) - Page 25

Originally posted by: shay1990

Can we share him?? I don't think I'm willing to fully let him go LOOOL

Even though the forum is going through hard times... I hope we all carry on updating our work, because i love coming on here and bantering with you guys! It's like a whole other alternate friend circle 😭

(I had to get a bit emosh there what with all this commotion right now lol)

And i stand up tall and give you a hug then?? Because you make me smile.. Lots.
You know that you are also f**king amazing right?? Because you are

🤗

Originally posted by: dreamyshadows

You mean...threesomes?

GUTTER DIMAAGGG.

*clears throat* Deviated off topic

I dont know yaara. Kinda losing inspiration here. Hopefully I wont stop completely. 😕

Im glad I do! You're too adorable and it makes me happy that I make you smile 😃

Lol, thank you :)

Originally posted by: MsIPKKNDManic

Hey, I've just finished reading this and I must say ... I'm absolutely blown me away.

I love the plot, the characters, writing style, just everything!

You have a new phangirl!! 😆

I feel so sorry for all the shit Khushi has had to go through all these years ... living her life thinking that her best friend was dead? Just ... wow. And the way you've written it all is also completely commendable - all the pain and hurt is immensely palpable and so real...

But regardless, she's come out of all of this as strong, independent and furious. I'm glad she hasn't forgiven Arnav so easily yet. And why should she? He led her to believe he wasn't even alive all this time and distanced himself from her, so why shouldn't she reciprocate?

And Arnav ... I kind of understand where he's coming from - life hadn't quite dealt him roses in the past, but what he failed to realise is that the hard times only pass quicker when you've got your loved one beside you at all times. And by pushing away those same people, you'll find the pain a lot more unbearable.

And Akash!! Oh, Akash! I love this guy! He's all set to play Cupid to the couple ... and rightly so! Our favourite stubborn-headed mules are so perfect for each other, but seeing as they don't quite realise it yet, they'll need a push (or hundred 😆 ) in the right direction and it looks like Akash will do just the job! :D

Anjali, I'm not too sure about :S

I mean, I understand that Arnav had explicitly told her that Khushi was not to know of his presence, but still. For someone she considered her "little sister", she's a bit ... well, I don't know if I could classify her as selfish, but it's still wrong. I understand that she now feels remorse for her actions, but ... I don't know :/

Overall, an impressive concept and an impeccable writing style! :D

Absolutely loved all the chapters and I can't wait to read more!!

Please PM me the next time you update, if it's not too much bother! :D

And lastly, thank you to Avi for the link! :D

Originally posted by: shay1990

AHHH!!!!

I already love you lol... Thank you SO much! You're words mean the world to me... And I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

A word of warning however - I'm lousy when it comes to updates, so i wouldn't get too comfy just yet but on the plus side, i have the lovely Avi to keep prodding at me till i do... So you can make yourself a little bit comfy i guess 😆

Your comment has made my night I'm telling you... So i shall comment back with equal amounts of enthusiasm!

Khushi's character is one of the strongest in this story, even more so then Arnav... So I'm so glad you've commended her character, because this is how I've always wanted Khushi to be. She shouldn't have to take all the bullshit Arnav throws her way. Yes, she's the sweetest thing ever - but if you hurt her, then... 'KALII MAA' (OK so maybe not that extreme... But along those lines lol)

Arnav right now is coming off as a complete and utter dick, i know... Because he basically is right now. Yes, he had his reasons for distancing himself, but in typical Arnav style - those reasons were stupid. I've made him so selfish and un-remourseful because he needs to be like this in order for the full effect to BAM, hit him when he finally understands/realises what his selfishness has caused.

And Akash!!! Akash is my ultimate favourite in this... So once again, I'm so glad you like him as well!!! He's my guilty pleasure 😆
The guys a bit of an idiot... But such a DON! Sly guy lol.

Don't worry... not a lot of people are too sure about Anjali. Yes she's equally to blame as Arnav.. But she was forgiven easily i think purely to help with Arnavs part in the story. He claims he wants nothing to do with Khushi... Yet he so blatantly does. Did that even make sense? Either way, Anjali is acting as a catalyst in our favourite jodi's relationship. 👏


Ok so i think I'm done now lol.
Once again, I thank you a million times for your wonderful comments!! 🤗
And PMs will definitely be heading your way in future 😉
(And i do hope i shall be receiving some from you as well now now that we're 'buddies' 😉... because i know for a FACT that your writing is perfect to the T)

Lots of love to you chuckles! (And to you to Avi if you're reading this😛)
Shay X

Originally posted by: dreamyshadows

I AM! BECAUSE I IS A STALKER AND I ADMIT IT 😆 Total besharam. But that's why she's so adorable! xD

But Isnt she brilliant Shay? I love Anissa'a writing [thats MsIPKKNDManic if you're wondering] 😆

And you are too! :*

Thank you, Sweetcheeks :*

Yes, Shay [may I call you that? :D] IS extremely brilliant!! :')

UDPATE SOONWA OKAYZ? <- - - - I concur - do update soon, please! :D

Originally posted by: shay1990

LOOOL... Avi, i knew you would be 😉

(I didn't 'quote' the previous comments because i get confused 👎🏼)
And YES!!! I remember reading risen from the ashes and it was so amazingly depicted - it was stunning!! I can't believe how much talent you have!

Anissa Anissa Anissa... I just stalked lol. I feel an odd sense of closeness to you knowing that you are also from the UK. If i have scared you... Then this was my aim (Joking-NotJoking)

And Avi... I have already started with the next update 😃 However I'm not going to put a time frame on it... Because as you know, i never stick to them

'Dammit'

Originally posted by: MsIPKKNDManic

Originally posted by: MsIPKKNDManic

I had a feeling that by the time my slowpoke self would finish quoting and commenting, there'd be another comment here already 😆

Thank you, Shay - you've made the ickle heart of a 17 year old nearly burst with joy! 😆

LOOL nah, it's cool - I don't mind xD Plus. I've seen a lot worse, so you're cool xD

Whooop!! Tell me about it!! Where in the UK? (if you don't mind me asking - I'm from London, btw xD)

haha! Hi-5 sister!! Deadlines and me? We're worse than a bickering old on-the-verge-of-a-divorce couple! 😆