IPKKND FF | Broken Strings (ON HOLD) - Page 23

Sorry, babe ... read the update in the morning, but couldn't reply for fear of getting slaughtered by Mom. She's on a "study only" rampage these days 😆 Awesome update, as always, loved it! She's perfect as she is, and he will bow down ... we'll make you Mr. Raizada, don't you worry 😈 Still dreaming of certain off limit things, so, and I know this may not be possible, so my mind is filling in the blanks, ahem, but any possible "moments" between our couple? Since he seems to be grinning with a lot of confidence 😉

Love ya! 🤗

Soho 😊

Originally posted by: dreamyshadows

Res* Edited*

I am so so sorry for not UnResing sooner, but this f**ked up shit in the Forum has made me angry, tense and worried. All at the same time. 😡

Anyhoo,

I absolutely just adored it Shay. Oh well, whats new in that? I always love what you write 😳

Hmm, I guess Naani is right in her own way. Playing with someone's feelings and their lives isn't the best thing to do. Especially when Khushi is already so hurt and broken.

Lol, Akaash is just mindblowing. Manipulator kahin ka 😛 Kitni jaldi manaa liya Anjali ko 😆

I just love Arnav's anger. Its a confession, but I just find it unbearably hot when he's angry. Within reason of course 😃 But that was just brilliant. The way you described it, I felt his rage, confusion and hurt. Marvelous job!

NK and La, <3 So cute 😊 Lol, they're playing cards? 😆 AHHH, here comes our angry young man.

NK is so protective 😳 It makes feel so nice 😊

But Arnav isnt going to give up anytime soon though, is he? But I really do feel like smacking a brick against his head sometimes -.- What an absolutely idiot he is. Talking like a total gadhaa. -.-

Hmm, what are the reasons Shay? I SPOT SOME MYSTERY.

Lol, no duh. 😆

GO KHUSHI! This girl is brilliant and I just feel like high fiving her and giving her this hugeass jhappi 😳 She's trying so hard to keep her cool and go with it, that is absolutely admirable 👏

Aww, poor Arnie! 😭 But I guess this is necessary for him to see sense. Warna kuch banega nahi. Chalo lets see aage hota hai kya. *thinking face*

IM FIRST. HOLY MOLY *_*

Love you :*

Avi

Originally posted by: Madafterarhi

Okay, that. was powerful.

I loved it, khushis unwavering decision and Arnav's resolve to get her back...

I cant believe he thinks he is doing her a favour by "breaking his rules"!!

Such audacity...and the strain in their relationship and so beautifully portrayed...

Really enjoyed it!

Disha x

Originally posted by: seeta_naips

Just read all 8 parts in one go, a totally different concept, I LOVED IT!!!!

Arnav is such an A**, he let Khushi think he was dead for 6 years

Because he couldn't deal with her being close to him and he losing her like his parents

Stupid moron he is so damn selfish and he expects Khushi to forgive him

Khushi should not forgive him anytime soon, he hurt her so bad

She thought she had lost the only person who could understand her fully, her best friend,
her confidante, her everything.

Please PM me with updates

Originally posted by: DropofDew

Aah I don't even know why I res tbh 😛, guess just to let you know that I have read your mail and not ignored it but will comment when I can think coherently 😛.

Omg omg omg omg! Shay! You have got Arnav's character perfect to the T! My love for this FF just grows with each update!

So yes mwaha! His resolve has finally broken but he's stupid and egoistic and well just pretty blind to his own emotions and Khushis of course so I can see this taking a bit of time. Oh dear Arnav this is going to be painful for you now isn't it? He's going to have such a hard time actually realising the true repercussions of what he's done. But it's a good first step at least he isn't completely dumb and stubborn, at least he's gone to meet her.

I love how you made him quite rude in the way in which he just wanted her to talk to him. "Khushi talk to me for f**ks sake," errr no! Mind f**king off! lol urgh! If only I was Khushi and I could take my shoe off and beat him repeatedly with it because well frankly that's what he really deserves for being such an ass!

Again I do feel sorry for him though, maybe it's just me and my weird sympathy for stubborn men -_-. But it's just he's so set in his ways that it's almost as if he fears to understand what he has truly lost through his actions. From what you have written he's given up his life to rectify a moment in his life that he truly cannot. His parents died of an accident and that he couldn't take back but in order to correct that incident or move on from it he has pushed away everything that would have a meaning in his life.

I think after his parents death he should have just been given counseling coz he clearly needed it 😆. Even now actually, some counselling would do him good 😛.

"Khush" omg it's like the cutest nickname ever and their reasons behind it! Awww I ❤️!

Okay NK! Yes you tell him! I love NK! Just him! Even in a negative role I probably would still love NK! 😛

And omg! "he's whipped" haahahahahaha! 😆 I loved that! Is it bad that I say this to my friend on a daily basis lol. Bechara NK, he's sooo La's bitch! 😛

Aakash!!! Aaahhh my love for him has increased! I send him fictional hugs! He is just such a cutie pie! And I love how he is so unaffected by things most of the time, he just seems like this awesome happy go lucky creature!! Aaahhh! I love him! And I love you for creating this amazing character!

I still feel sorry for Anjali, she really wants to rectify her mistake and I'm glad that she's interfering but I feel she shouldn't on one hand as well. Arnav's already taken away so many years of Khushi's life and it's wrong for her to assume that they complete each other. I know they do, you know they do but as a character Anjali doesn't know that and after all that has happened Khushi has the right to just forget and move on and Anjali should know to just stop interfering. She didn't interfere when it was required so now she should just step back and look at it more from Khushi's perspective.

Okay so finally! Khushi! I'm so happy that you have created her so strong! I love this strong Khushi that quite clearly just told Arnav to piss off! Haha! In your face Raizada! That's what you get for playing f**king mind games! On you go, go back into your little hole and have a good old think about what you've actually done! You actual ass!

Okay lol I'll stop there I could rant about this Arnav for days! 😆

But yes I love how you've written him out, his conflicting thoughts and emotions, how he's just now at a complete loss. I loved how you had written his confusion when Khushi asked him what he actually wanted her to say, how he was at a complete loss for words. It wrapped up perfectly the foundations of his character, his erratic temper fuelled decisions and how now he just doesn't know how to fix things. I love how he demanded she talk to him, because that's just it! He knows he's committed a mistake but doesn't know how to show it! And the full effect of what he has done, Khushis pain has still to hit him in its entirety and man oh man I cannot wait for that to happen!

Now I can't wait to find out what his plan is (which I'm guessing will inevitably flop or will it?) and see how exactly he woos Khushi back!

So yes going to finish off by of course saying again how much of an amazing writer you are! I just love the flow of this FF! The banter, the anger, the frustration, the little snippets of conversation, his actions, her actions, how I just completely lose myself in the story and continue to stare at the screen for another five minutes even after the last word processing it all! I love your writing Shay! And of course I love you! Keep up this amazing amazing work!

Do update soon if you can! Sorry if my comment isn't as good as usual but I'm sort of drowning in a pile of work whilst my mind continues to be assaulted with new fanfic ideas :( lol.

Lotsa love and hugs for this mega quick awesome update! 🤗 🤗 ❤️

xx