IPKKND FF | Broken Strings (ON HOLD) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

thank you for the pm... sorry for not commenting earlier as have been extremely busy with the silver jubilee celebrations of my school, so couldn't visit IF for the past three days!

a truly beautiful update with well-chosen words and expressions that bring the story to life... poor khushi, the pain and confusion were tangible things... loved seeing arnav thrown for a loop though he is totally to blame for this fiasco... whatever his reasons and however much in pain he might be at present didn't give him the right to nearly destroy khushi in such a way... that flashback at the beginning shows that arnav was in the habit of acting in a certain way without taking into consideration the impact that might have on khushi... maybe future updates will give us greater insight into the workings of arnav's mind and make us believe he is less of a jerk than he appears!

loved that despite the heart-wrenching pain that khushi feels, she still gathers herself to face the interview and breaks down only in the privacy of her room [now if her door was locked, how did the family entrer her room?] loved how the family felt angry in her behalf... was anjali present at the gupta house or were they yelling at her on the phone? has arnav decided to grace khushi's house with his presence? would be interesting to know, in the next update, if I'm right!