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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: star_2012
nice start!!!!!!!!!!
please cont.soon😊

sure i do ... thanks

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

nice concept...loved it

please do continue and please pm me

and i think that gye is swayam

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Tanishtha

@JugHo786

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

nyc start aru...
swayam.. m damn sure its swayam!
continue n pm/scrap me...

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Hey . . . Nice work . . . . Shayad rey hoga . . . . But as u mentioned above abt swayam - to vo bhi ho sakta hai 😉
update soon & pm me...

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Heyyy nice concept

relle lykd

plzzz continue nd pm me😊

Edited by luvcookie - 13 years ago

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719483

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Wonderful wonderful..

Plz continue..

Really liking it...

It is awesome. Just great.

When will we get the next part?

Please write soon.

Please PM me. 😳

Thank you so much. 😊

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

nice concept... continue and do pm me...

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Awesome..

Really happy to see ur work..

But sorry I was very late to comment..

I dint come online yesterday since i had xam today...really sorry.

N I loved it..

Do continue n pm me.

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Aroma its amazing one.

Lovely one.

the guy is swayam.

Do continue and pm me.

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

today update karne ki koi planning nahi thi kyu ki kuj decide hi nahi kiya tha ... but sab ne itna bola is liye aaj update kar rahi hoo ... jaldi jaldi jo likh ski wo update kar rahi hu ... gussa mat hona ... shravni this is for u ... tumhari wish thi to here tha update ... sorry bohat bolti hoo main ...

chapter 2 :

( sab ne guess kar liya yes its swayam ) : rey b kitna badal chuka hey ... kriya ka naam sunne k liye b tyaar nahi hey ... but main janta hoo ki vo aaj b tumse kitna pyaar karta hey ... par kehte hey na waqt sab ko badal deta hey ... vo apna dard sab se chupa rha hey ... or tum to chor ke hi chali gyi ...

kriya in india ( sorry agar airport k bare main likhti to bore ho jate tum log )

at home ...

smriti : tum log fresh ho jao main dinner lgati hoo ...

aroma : no aunty main sone ja rahi hoo ... bohat thak gyi ...

smriti : but ...

kriya : mom jane do i know her ... poori alsi hey ...

aroma : kriya how mean ... jao main tumse baat nahi karti ...

kriya : ok ok sorry ...

aroma : jao maaf kiya ...

kriya : very funny ...

aroma leave ... ( guys aroma or kriya k alag alag rooms hey so confuse mat hona ) ...

suddenly phone bell ring ...

boy : hello ...

girl : hey jaan ...

boy : taani tum ...

taAni : kya kar rahe ho ...

boy : nothing ... kuj college work kar rha hoo ...

taani : kya rey jab dekho tum busy rehte hoo ..

rey : please taani tumne j bolne k liye call ki kya ... and doosri baat i'm Gs of college .. main free nahi hoo tumhari trha ...( rey full on gussa ha )

taani : gussa kyu ho rhe hoo ... (rey cut the call) ... meri baat ... cut kar diya ...kal dekh loogi college main ...

at kriya home :

after dinner ...kriya and smriti talking ...

smriti : kriya beta apko kya lagta hey jo aap karne jaa rahe ho vo thik hey ...

kriya : mom i don't know ... per or koi option nahi hey ... nd believe me kuj nahi hoga ...

smriti : i believe u beta ... ok tum so jao bohat thak gyi hogi ...

kriya : gud night mom ...

kriya's room

jo color pasan hey khud select kaar lena ...

now rey in his room ...

j swayam subha se kha hey .. usne na to message kia hey or na hi call ... busy hoga main hi kar leta hoo ...

rey call swayam ...

sw : ha bol ...

rey : kha hey tu morning se , college b nahi aya ...

sw : rey tuje kya uski kabi jaad nahi ati ...

rey : kiski ... ( kya acting hey rey )

sw : please rey tuje pta hey main kiski baat kar rha hoo ...

rey : please main kriya k bare koi baat nahi karna chahta ... and muje sirf itna bolna hey ki kal college main bohat kaam hey so b there ...

sw : mere baat to sun ...

rey : by swayam ...

sw : * self talk * tu chahe kitna b chupa le but i know u still love her ... or ab kriya ko main kisi b trha doon do ga ... or kriyaansh ko milwau ga ...

guys bohat confused hoo relax ... kal ki update k baad clear ho jaye ga ...

precap : kriyaansh k dil ka hall u still in my heart ... and two song ... ( sari duniya dekh li par nain tumhe tarse ) ... ok isse jaada nai ...

snigdha ... thanks to u ...

neeti missing u ...

bas itna hi agar comment ashe mile to kal update karugi ... sorry itni ashi nahi hey ... apni friend se bohat sari fight karne k baad ... j likha ... kyu ki next update mein ek song hey jo mane or meri friend ne likha ... usme time lag gya ... now j tum logo pe hey ki kal updat chahiye j nahi ... chahiye to like and comment please ...

thank u all...

chapter 3 : page 9

Edited by aromakriyaansh - 13 years ago

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