SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Enigma of Fate~ chp 21 pg 142

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zk456789

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1011

Dhaasu update
Love the update
Swaron love moments were so good

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BilluKiBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1012

Yay, you updated! :D

Firstly, you HAVE to know that you write so damn well. i absolutely loved the update!

Sharon is just SO hurt to think anything beyond that and SO scared to ever let any of them back in her life!

I loved how Swayam and Sharon became their old-selves for sometime!

Thanks for updating! C:

Love,

Shagun

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1013

U knw m ur write up addict nw kitni bar b pad lu na maan ni bharta ..
A fab update lyk always ..
The emotions d flow sharon's pain everything can be feel..
Everyline has a great impect just loved it..

Edited by Twinkle_d3 - 12 years ago

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1014

I like the way Swayam showed Sharon that if he wants to, he will do it and the sweetest part was that he still vowed to make their first kiss special. Even though the end part was so sorrow, it was somehow my favourite part of this update. The way you wrote about Sharon's pain and how her dancing is co related to Swayam was beautiful. The end moment when she shout that I won't dance really left an impact on me. Do update soon !!

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Radioactive.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1015

Edited my comment on the previous page.

I'm on a roll aren't I! 😆

Edited by Srishti_TanHa - 12 years ago

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1016

Baz!!!
You write so well!!
Sharon s pain was unbearable ! You have penned this chapter very well!!
This was a brilliant long chapter indeed.
Thanks for the pm nd do update soon.
Ps thanks for writing on tanha wala swaron.

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@DaShInG_DeViL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1017

Originally posted by: Srishti_TanHa
Edited my comment on the previous page.

I'm on a roll aren't I! 😆

Did Srishti just edited her comment and gave two back to back comments😲!!! let me give myself a reality check...hahaha am being too dramatic nonetheless u sure r on a roll and am lovin' it :D

The comment as always was mature and amazing and needless to say I loved it :)...thanks so much for the comment...was glad to read as the response has been low for some time now :/

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1018

Nice update!!!

I like the way swayam is taking things in his hands!! taking the right path :) ... he isnt hesitating !!!!

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Radioactive.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1019

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL
Did Srishti just edited her comment and gave two back to back comments😲!!! let me give myself a reality check...hahaha am being too dramatic nonetheless u sure r on a roll and am lovin' it :D
The comment as always was mature and amazing and needless to say I loved it :)...thanks so much for the comment...was glad to read as the response has been low for some time now :/

Bwahaha! I'm just way too awesome, aren't I?! 😆

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abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1020

The update made me so emotional... Sharon's confused mind and mixed emotions are portrayed so well... Hope Swayam brings her out of this reverie soon with his pure love..