SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Enigma of Fate~ chp 21 pg 142

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Neha Singh

@Dazzlerdiva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1021

The update is fantabulous. Every emotion is written beautifully. Plz update soon

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Megha

@megsy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1022

WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow wow wow...

the story had soo much pain that i can still feel my heart wrenching...

the ways you've portrayed your characters is mindblowing...no doubt this is one of my favourite reads and i eagerly await its update...

you've got a great talent as a story teller...👏

i wish your story could be turned into visuals!

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1023

it started out so jollly and then it became so sad!!!

seriously amazing writing!!!

The end touched my heart deeply..

the way you showed her remembering the past and her thoughts was amazing..

I luved the little Swaron scenes with the sari..

those were really cute!!!

the best part about the update is how changed the mood of it from happy to grief...

really great job!!!

CONTINUE SOON!!!!

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1024

Dude,the flow of u'r story is perfectly amazing..And this time u'r update was so so nice..i really loved it to read...Its so long update it means more enjoyfull for me..and i enjoyed a beautifull and emotional read..

I just loved the way u bring all emotions,hesitations in this update...The way u potraits the character of sharon and swayam is amazingly mindblowing for me..So the begining part was emotional..sharon was feeling pain..and scared to loose swayam..but at the same time,she was little bit happy to have him once again in her life..Its true..sharon pain was unbearable..

Then i liked whole saari wearing part...Swayam want to make their first kiss special...Great...I really waiting for this...

Then loved the way u created dinner and dance part..But last one was really sorrow...Sharon was remembering her past...and the way u potraits sharon dance is corelated with swayam and her love..is beautifull...And she was shouting that i would not dance was really shoking..So update soon..

So at last,its beautifully emotional update..Each factor is amazingly described...and i really loved to read..Great..

Thanx for PM..

Prateek

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1025

Finally u updated Baz 😊

Sharon's pain in unbearable..i want to give her a tight hug. Happy that Swayam is trying his best to break the ice. Love how he managed to make Sharon wear Saree..finally his wish was fulfilled. Love how in bathroom he intertwined his fingers with hers and asked her to look at dere reflection in mirror.

Sharon's emotional turmoil is so beautifully written by you specially during the end when she shouts. Hats off to you Baz the flow of your FF is fabulous. Thoroughly enjoyed the update Baz 😊 Thnx for the PM. Update soon.

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1026

Oops i forgot to say

update soon..

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Rabina

@raveena2807

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1027

Beautiful update!!! The way it began and all Swaron moments were all beautiful. But Sharon's wounds are still deep. She has suffered alone, suffered lot and suffered for long. It will take more than few months to heal them. I want to see her happy, embracing life, happiness, love and moreover, Swayam. Having said that I did not mean to say that everything should go back to normal at the earliest. I understand that too much happening too soon just ruins everything. The story is going on in perfect pace. Take your time, because at the end, you will do full justice to everything.