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Priya Das

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Posted: 13 years ago

"Khushi.." he whispered.

He took a final step and stepped into nothing.He didn't feel anything. He had his eyes closed...then he jumped...

The moment I read these lines, my heart literally clenched. It was Beautiful. The pain he felt was so well expressed. You truly are an awesome writer.

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aakriti

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Posted: 13 years ago

heya..

really emotional...

but beautifully written..

many thanks for the pm..:)

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arshieverlastng

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice written ritu...his pain,love the way u expresed is good..bt i too dnt like sad endings ritu im realy feelng aftr readng ths..so i cnt say anythng

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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Posted: 13 years ago

rituuu... that was truly beautiful...

loved it... sad that arnav decided end his life as a punishment for khushi's sufferings...

painfully beautiful dear...

~~~ sam

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varshini karthik

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Posted: 13 years ago

So Sad... But he could have instead confessed and fought for her and made his life jannat on earth!

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rkapoor1382

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ritu tht was nt creepy at all.

Very well written.

Nice flashbacks.

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sanaroxx

@sanaroxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

ITS NOT AT ALL CREEPY BUT A BEST ONE RITU !!!

But NOO I DIDNT WANT THAT CLIMAX !!!

Beautifully You have explained his feelings and the picturisation of his life as a movie !! superb write up but NOO death please !!!

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Maria

@x.titli.x

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Posted: 13 years ago

it's not creepy it's beautifully written 😳 but so sad 😭

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magss24

@magss24

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Posted: 13 years ago

oh no arnav is dead...

tat was so sad...but beautifully written...

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sheethal

@sheethal

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Posted: 13 years ago

hai ritu,,,,,,,,,,,,

it was so imotional

you made me cry😭

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