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rainy987

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Hey thete ur ff is great but i dont get pms for it pm me next tym plz !!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: rainy987
Hey thete ur ff is great but i dont get pms for it pm me next tym plz !!!

add pari_jyothika to ur buddy list to recieve pms

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fffan123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Just discovered your ff.

Loved it. Please pm me for next update

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Umna S.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Love it plzz update soon...!!!

Kushi thinking geet as arnav wife hahaha...!!!

she don't soon she will herself be his wife...!!!

maan in tears ohhh...!!!

can't wait plzzz update soon love it...!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Chapter 6

@KM

K:bhai...bhai...kaha hai aap?

Nakul:kya baat hai khushi beta?

K:kaka...bhai kaha hai?

Nakul:saab to apne study mein hai...

Khushi rushes leaving a confused Nakul

@the study

maan was on his laptop...

but he felt something was going to happen today...wat was it(he wondered)...the he remembered the angel of his life...

"Aaa...
Aa bhi ja sanam yun na kar sitam
Teri baahon mein...
Aa bhi ja sanam yun na kar sitam
Teri baahon mein marr mitenge hum
Aa bhi ja sanam yun na kar sitam
Teri baahon mein, marr mitenge... hum

Baahon mein koi chehra hoga
Chehre pe mera pehra hoga
Aawarapan kahe hai mujhse
Sach ho jaaye ga tera mera jo hai ye saara sapna

Aa bhi ja sanam yun na kar sitam
Teri baahon mein marr mitenge hum
Aa bhi ja sanam yun na kar sitam
Teri baahon mein, marr mitenge... hum'

he came out his trance when khushi stormed inside yelling his name puffing and panting

K:bhai mil gayi...mil gayi...

M:kya baat hai choti...tujhe kya hua...aur tumhe yeh chot kaisi lagi(worried)

K:woh sab chodo bhai...(she started doing bhangra...and singing)

"oy...oy..oy...lejayenge...lejayenge dilwale dulhaniya le jaayenge

leaonge leaonge mere bhai bhabhi ko leaonge...oye..oye..oye..."

M:khushi...zara apne sar dikhao...lagta hai wahape bhi chot lagi hai...tu kya bak bak kar rahe??
K:bak bak nahi bahi...sach...meine bhabhi ko dekha...Geet!!!

M:(shocked)geet??!!??!!?

K:ha bhai...geet...geet singh raizada!!!

aapko vishwas nahi na...yeh lijiye unka photo...

she shows him a pic of her...she had taken on her phone

maan was thrilled!!!

{she tells him all wat happened}

M:choti...woh kaisi thi?aur uske saath kaun thi,,,

K:bhai...manana padega...unse milke tho main ekdam pagal ho gayi..

maan keeps staring and admiring the photo..

he suddenly notices Khushi lost..

M:kya baat hai khushi...

K:woh lard governor or unki sirname ek hi the..kahin dono husband wife tho nahi...

maan heard a creaking sound inside him...his heartbroke...😭

"kya hum kuch madad kare"came a voice...it was dadima and their parents

Dadi:khushi...tu ek dham jhalli hai...yeh RAIZADA's ko hum kabse jaante hai...

aur Geet unki beti hai...ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA ke twin!!!

K+M:kya!!!!

Rj:maaji aur unki dadi saheliyaan hai

Dadi:lekin maine unse(geet) kabhi nahi mili...

Pratap:lekin aaj raat ko zaroor milenge!!

ALL:WHaat????Kaise???

Pratap:aaj unke ghar main party hai...aaj anjali yaduvanshi yani ki ranveer yaduvanshi ki wife ki birthday hai.woh raizadas kii badi beti hai!!

K:hey devimaiyaa...mujhe mei bhabhi laade

K(st)aap logon ko kuch nahi pata...lekin maine sab poochtach kar chuke hai...bhabhi ko aaj tak koi pyaar nahi hua hai and she is a gem of a person

M:chup khushi...yeh baat zarror nahi kii woh bhi mujhe pasand karde...

K:kyon nahi...bas aap jaakar teyaar ho jaatiye..aur ha aapko aaj ek dham rockstar rajkumar lagni chahiye teek hai!!

the aal go to get ready except dadi...rj

Dadi:kitni badal gayi ha na khushi..

Rj:ha ma..2 saal pehle.uske saath jo kuch bhi hua uske baad bhi...ab uski ek hi maksat hai...maan ki ghar basana!!

maan walks in

Maan:maa...dadi aap logo se maine ktni baar kaha hai atheet main hue baaton ke baare main kuch na kahe...

woh aage bad chuki hai...aur hum uski sahara banenge..(he hugs both of them)

Khushi was hiding and seeing all this tearfully*

precap:the party

maaneet finally meet.

ps.i dont know if you already seen this pic,,,,its epic

Edited by pari_jyothika - 13 years ago

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meettu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

awsome update

sooo cute

loved it

finally maaneet going to meet

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Hey Jyothika.. I have to agree Maaneet and Arhi are magical couples. Honestly, I love them to core and happy to come across your fiction.

Title itself is different and bold. Signature you have display is very attractive and the introduction is very different (than what I've read so far). Let's see how things shape up between the characters.

Love Misti

PS: I'll reply soon on the characters and part one to six... Currently in class..listening and typing on my iPad.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Hey it's me again!

Maan's family:

Always Maaneet is very bold in his characteristic and his protection toward Khushi (might be problem between Arhi). Khushi is incomplete without her tag "Khumari" and impossible to have her likes in "jalebis"

Mother of Maan and Khushi is very simple and nice to know Maan is connected with her. Their father is very nice just like their mother... It's going to be fun and enjoyable chemistry between Khushi and her father.

Wow, Dadi's a lawyer. Wicked!

Having Nakul and Adi... Maan's life is incomplete.

Wonder of sketch of Maan and Khushi family. Let see the Arnav and Geet family.

Something different about Arnav and him being Geet's twin. Wow, I am surprise to know that Arnav enjoy pulling people's leg and pranks. This is going to be fun. Geet always have been cheerful person. Amazing to know that Geet's dream to become interior designer (leading to Maan's path)...

Anjali always have been prefect and love that you use her real life partner as her husband instead of Shyam in the fiction. I know Anajli going to be great mother toward her siblings and her daughter Siya.

Wow...Kunal is apart of it. Anajli, Arnav and Khushi are lucky to have him and his wife... support.

So Jeevika is cousin of Anjali and her siblings. Wow, Arnav's family is filled with lawyers from Chachu to Viren Jiju.

No Nani, but Dadi's. Cool so Abhay is related to both Khurana and Raizada and he might bright them together.

Love Misti

PS: Sorry for long reply on the characters...

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Part One...

I am loving Maan's entry and his Chemistry with Khushi. Khushi is very much like me... heavy sleeper. What! Maan pour bucket of water on Khushi to wake her up inside the bathroom.

So who is the person in the photo... It's must Geet or someone else.

Part Two...

Surprise to know about Maan and Khushi interaction with their father. Maan is in love with a person and doesn't know anything about her.

Part Three...

Geet's crush on Salman Khan... wicked. I am loving her character. Mature than I thought.

Arnav's anger too good. Loving it. His protection toward his twin...out standing. Awesome chemistry between the twins.

Love Misti

Edited by MistiofMistz - 13 years ago