Teri Yaad Part-8(Pg-14)

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mebearynice

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Posted: 19 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: khushi19

i hope you are happy now

mein bahut khush hoon 😃

thanks a lot😃

pls do cont soon👏

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Pooja

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Posted: 19 years ago

#22

hey khushi that was brilliant and wow special surprise? what can that be? continue soon

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Khushi

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pooja922
hey khushi that was brilliant and wow special surprise? what can that be? continue soon

hey thanks i will write the next part in 2 hrs😉

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Pooja

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: khushi19

hey thanks i will write the next part in 2 hrs😉

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great....cant wait khushi ..im soo excited😉

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muqualp

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Posted: 19 years ago

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wow just caught up its great do cont soon!

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Khushi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#26

Part-4

Recape-Nishant and Kanan meet

You see a plane landing and a girl comming out of the plane and you guessed it it's none other then KRIPA!!!!

she catches a texi.while we see angad's car right beside kripa's texi.just because of red light they stop at the traffic light.angad was looking around when his eyes suddenley fall on kripa.ahe was the most beautiful girl he has ever seen.he thought he just saw an angel.soon the light turned green and kripa's texi goes away while angad's still in his dreamworld.he comes out of the dreamworld when he hears horns from the back.

we see surbayan,gayatri and kanan having lunch.kripa slowly comes from the back and hugs his dad.

Kripa-suprise!!!!!!!!!

Suryaban-kripa beta tum????

se also hugs her.then she hugs gayatri and then kanan.

Gayatri-beta agar tune bata diya hota tho hum tumhe lene a jate.

Kripa-mama agar ap logo ko bata deti tho suprise kaise dati.

Kanan-lakin tumhari studies.

Kripa-di vo baat yeh hain ke meri studies tho puri hogaye hain aur phir unhone india mainak camp rakha hain,lakin maine yaha tranfer liya hain tho main thoda waqt k liye hospital main kaam karungi aur phir camp pe jaoungi.

Kanan-great itka matlab hain ab tum yaha rahogi?

Kripa-yeh kya kare abapko mujhe jalne tho padega.

Kanan-kya kare.

they all laugh at this.they eat dinner and talk the whole day.while on the other hand angad coudn't concentrat on anything,everytime he did somehting kripa's face would come in front of him.

at night in angad's house angad's thinking about kripa,when nishant came in.

Nishant-angad yeh file ek baar phirse phad lena.

angad who was not listening to this,nihsant noticed this.

Nishant-angad....angad.(now scraming)ANGAD!!!!

angad-(comeing out of his dreamworld)kya hua?

Nishant-yehi tho main jan na chahta hun tumhe kya hua?kabse tumhe bularaha hun lakin tum sunhi nahin rahe

Angad-pata nahin lakin aj maine ek ladki ko dekha tha aur jabse use dekha hain uske siva sur kuch dikhae nahin deta.

Nishant-angad tumhe pyaar hogaya haina?

Angad-pata nahin.use sirf ek baar mila hun aur ab pata nahin vo kaha hogi.

Nishant-angad agar vo ladki tumhere naseeb nain hain tho phir chahe kuch bhi hojaye vo tumhe dubara zarur milegi.

Saying this nishant went to his room

Angad(thinking)-agar yeh ladki dubara mujhe miljaye tho phir kone ka mauka hi nahin dunga.

Saying this he smiles to himself and goes to sleep.

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NEXT DAY
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next day we see kripa getting ready when kanan comes in.

Kanan-kripa kaha ja rahi ho tum?

Kripa-di apko yaad hainmujhe parctice k liye thode din city hospital main kaam karna hoga.

kripa gets ready after a while when downstairs she sees josh.she runs to him and hugs him.

Kripa-so hows my big brother?

Josh-i am perfect and you look more then perfect dakhona kitne mote hogaye ho?

Kripa-josh!!!!

and she starts running after him.after some times she asks josh to drop her of at the hospital.so josh drops her there.

at angad's house we see angad getting ready when naina calls him.

Naina-angad beta zara yaha ana?

Angad-kya baat hain mama?

Naina-vo mujhe tumse kuch kaam hain.

Angad-tho kahona.

Naina-kya tum yeh check city hospital main de sakte ho.actually yeh anath(orphan)bacho k liye maine banaya tha.

Angad-ofcouse mama.

So angad goes to city hospital he was outside parknig the car.he give the check and was comming back whrn he sees mataji's idle in a corner.

Angad-(thinking)-aptho sab janti haina.jase maine meri angel ko dakha hain uske siwa aur muhjhe luch dekhaye nahin deta.apse zingadi main pehli baar kuch mang raha hun.muhje ek baar us angel se mela do.aur muhe kuch nahin chahiye.

After praying he walks in the halway when he sees his angel everywhere,fianlly andgad see his angel talknig to someone and thought he was imagning so he looked way when he looked back he still saw her there.

Angad(thinking)-ANGEL!!!!!

A person was walknig down when angad calles him.

Angad(to the guy)-pinch me

Person-what????

Angad-pinch me!!!

so the persone pinches him.

Angad-ouch...thanks iska matlab main sapne nahin dekh raha.

He was running to her angel alot of crowd gathered around and by the time the crowd was gone,his angel was gone.

He goes out of the hospital and was walking on the road while thinking about he incedent.Just then a car comes near angad and he get's hit by a car and everything goes black.

Preview-Angad-meri angel ko ab main apni nazaro ke samne se dur nahin jane dunge.

Hope you liked the part

Edited by khushi19 - 19 years ago

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mebearynice

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Posted: 19 years ago

#27

arre khushi thanks a lot for posting. 😃
you made my day. 👏
aisi hi post karti rehna 😳
mera ashirwad tumhare saath hai 👍🏼 😉

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Khushi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: jyotsna13
arre khushi thanks a lot for posting. 😃
you made my day. 👏
aisi hi post karti rehna 😳
mera ashirwad tumhare saath hai 👍🏼 😉

thank you so much apka ashirwad milne k baad main dhanya ho gaye😉