Teri Yaad Part-8(Pg-14)

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Khushi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: shahidlover24
Awesome job! Awe...that's so cute how Angad calls Kripa 'his angel' 😳...hmm....seems like Kripa will be Angad's doctor or something 😃

thanks and you will know if your prediction true or not tomm

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Raksha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#32

cute part!
angadz angel! 😳

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kriti mehera

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Posted: 19 years ago

#33

just caugt up with ur fan fic khushi.
its gr8
peheli nazar ka pyaar 😆

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mebearynice

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Posted: 19 years ago

#34

khushi ji 😃
aur bhi aashirwad milega but.............. 😛
you have 2 update 😉 😉

jaldi kar naa

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Pooja

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Posted: 19 years ago

#35

khushi!!!!! cotninue soon yaar...that last part was amazing 😉

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Khushi

@khushi19

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Posted: 19 years ago

#36

sorry guyz i know it's been long time since i have not cont because it was last week of my school( 😆 )so i was abit busy but anyways since today was my last day of school i am free for two whole monthes and i promise i will write a bit part tonight.sorry one again

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mebearynice

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Posted: 19 years ago

#37

khushu ji 😃
raat se subah ho gaye 😆
pls jaldi 😭

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Khushi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#38

guyz i am so sorry you had to wait a long time but i had to go to a party last night so here's the next part.

Part-5

Angad opnes his eyed and finds himself in a hospital room.just then a nurse comes in.

Nurse-ab apki tabiyaat kaise hain mr.khanna?

Angad-(still upset about missing kripa)ji main thik hun 😒

Nurse-good maine apke family ko contact karchuke hain...vo abhi ate hi hoge.ap aram kijiye main abhi doctor ko bula ti hun.

Nurse goes away while angad is thinking of all the times he saw kripa.just then kripa walks in.angad doesn't notice.since he has his back towards him.

Kripa-excuse me mr.khanna? 😕

Angad turnes around and is suprised to see kripa he just coudn't say anything.

Kripa-exquse me? 😛

Angad-...... 😲

Kripa-mr khanna? 😕

Angad-........ 😲

Kripa 😡 is now getting iritaded and shakes him.finally angad comes out of his dream.and finally belives kripa is there in front of him.

Angad-(wispering)Angel!!

Kripa-ab apki tabiyat kaise hain Mr.khanna?

Angad-Much better

Kripa-anyways ab ap aram kijiye 😛

Angad-waise ap ka naam kya hain. 😉

Kripa-ji mera naam....

just then a nurse comes in.

Nurse-doctor apka liye phone hain.

Kripa-thik hain main abhi aye.

and kripa goes away angad is angry that he coudn't get the name.

Angad-is nurse ko bhi abhi ana tha? 😡 😡 (itna gussa 😆 )

After some times angad's family comes.

Naina-beta ab tum kaise ho? 😭

Angad-mom main thik hun 😎

Dilip-hume pata hain k tumhe hospital main rehna pasand nahi isi liye maine doctor ko kaha hain aur vo tumhe aj hi dicharge kar denge.(oh how caring)

Angad-(thinking)-lakin agar main chala gaya tho main meri angel se nahin mil paunga.

Angad-lakin papa main abhi tik nahin hun.

Dilip-don't worry hum tumhara khayal rakhunge.

Naina-tum aram karo hum tumse baad main baat karte hain.

Angad(thinkin)-mujhe finally apni angel mili hain aur is baar main use khone nahin dunga.

will write some more tomm.hope you like it.

Edited by khushi19 - 19 years ago