TUJKO JO PAYA:KRIYAANSH SS...FINAL JAM ON PG 18 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Amazing suprise.
thanks for pm.
y did u stop der?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
i m already in ur buddylist but u didn't pm me not fare yar make sure u pm me next time plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
t-totally loved ur SS harshu !!!!

jaldi se continue kr...aur mat tadpa...

pleaseee jaldi update kr next part nd PM me as soon as possible !!

Waiting eagerly for ur work dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys i m srry late hogaya... okh so here's the update... i was out of town so...

"2"
kria n Smirti reached mumbai wid the doctor...after the week got over...
Shivam n grup ki convo... Shivam ne jan much ka... he didnt tel dem nythin... wat he did wid Kria!!!
One day Kria was joggin near a park.. wid the doc... She saw Shivam wid sme ne tlkin she was sure dat smethin is wrng...
She makin a excuse went near the tree... n hided herself n was listenin...

Shivam:aab aaga maja... dazzlers aur weaklings ek dusra ka samne hoga par jeeta ga KR college...
Stranger:wah Shivam u rock..!!! bt wat abt that girl Tanni..??
Shivam:Tanni... rememberin her beauty... Tanni use kuch nae hona duga mai...
They leaves...
Kria was sure that sme thing was wrng.. she had made an decision...

Doc:tum khud ko stress nae de sakti... pls Kria...
Kria:pls doc its abt my frnds pls only one day pls...😭
Doc:okh...

Nxt day... Kria Ghai was bck in college... after talkin to princi.. on phne... she had entered ST.LOUIS... her college... her frnds... her life... her love...her Rey... Her Dance...
Kria was sufferin wid much pain in her body.. as she was undergoin her exercise...
She directly went to Rehresal hall were everyne was der...!!!
Swayam saw her n was shocked... to see her...
Swayam:Kria????😲
Everyne turns: Kria???😲
Rey was shocked.. he was smilin bt had the same time he hates her fr usin her so badly...

Rey:so Ms.WANNABE... tume ander aana kisne diya..??
Kria was shocked bt straighten herself... she was in much pain...
Shivam entered.. n was shocked to see Kria...

Shivam:Kria...OMG tum...??
Kria:ha Shivam mai..!!!
Everyne was shocked to see Kria talkin to hm...
Sharon:OH goD kRIA r u nuts tum pagal ho kya...
Neha:kisi kah rahi ho u r Sharon... Kria ko... huh..!!
Vishaka:kya hoga hai tum he Kria...???
Rey:guys chil wats new..!!! Kria ko enemies se baat karta dekh y u guys r shocked Kria toh aisahi hai Losers se baat karna ki uski aadat hai...rather useki hobby...

Kria was torn inside in pain bt she thought she deserves it...
Shivam was enjyin it ... n was abt to leave wen...
Kria ons her phne n then the voice recorder... wich says...
" Weaklin n Dazzlers dono haarage aur jeeta ga KR college... Shivamm jo chahta hai voh use milta hai... " n the whole convo btw that stranger n Shivam... everyne was shocked... wat was dat again Shivam was gng to hurt them ...
Vice-princi... too heard everything... n was shocked...😲 Shivam was too shocked..😲
Kria:aare Shivam kya hua..???! shocked... ka mai yaha kaise.. n yeh video ...aaahhh audio too yaha kaise... Shivam i warn u tat tim tooo... n this tim too... par tume samj nae aaya... stay away frm Louisans get that straight in ur head... n u n ur team is OUT of FOOTLOSE...😈

Everyne was shocked... Shivam was stunned... Kria was nw feelin gud.. actually grt ..
Kria was movin suddenly she was nt feelin gud wat happened... to her.. she was faints bt REY caught her up... Kria smiles...😊
Doc entered...
Doc:i tld her nt to cme here... she never listened to me...
Swayam:who r u??
Doc: i m Aditya ... her doctor...
Everyne was shocked...
REY THE MST...😲


PRE-CAPS: TRUTH TO CME OUT ???
KRIYAANSH HOGA SAATH????
pms on the way...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update plz continue n pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Wow this was a amazing part.
Thanks for the pm.
It was lovely one.
Finally they got to knoe Something abt her.
Interesting precap.
Update soon plz.



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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome and thnxs fr the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Nyc update sweets ...
thnx fr da pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
amazing at least they will find out the truth and that kriya is very ill
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
awesome update...loved it vwery much
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon

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