D3 FF-Its To Late Too...(ff name changed)note pg31 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Awesome !! CS is great. Continue soon<33
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
pplsss jaldi jaldi cntinue kr
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
loved the concept...continue soon
waiting eagerly for 1st part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Akshu new ff n i m luving it...i mean after reading cs sketch i thnk it gonna be fun as u hv changed all the characters like swayam nt liking dazzaling n all...update soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
interesting CS...plz continue...wud luv 2 read it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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akshara, wen r u going to update the update????
pls m waiting
jaldi update karo
plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
CONTINUE ... and do PM me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys thanx for such a nice response well m continuing hope youl like it
P.S=REY IS NOT THE G.S IN THIS FF FOR NOW N SWARON ARE C.S N AC.S WHERE HERE SHARON IS C.S N SWAYAM AC.S
CHAP 1
a girl wearing a dress a simple one enters the coll the famous n no 1 coll of mumbai ST LOUIS
girl:he universe ji i hope main yaha adjust kar pao she was kria ghainew to st louis
she starts walking n in her mind:par kria tujhe yaad rakhna padega ki kisi ko bhi pane itne pass mat ane dena ki woh tujhe hurt karke chala gaje
she walks in to the basket ball court she loved it she sees many boys playing BB
one of the guy ho kria ditn see passes the ball to another guy but he mises it n it was gng to hit kria's face
tht guy who pases the ball screms:watch out
kria puts her hand over her face n the ball dosent hit her
tht guy was relaxed
kria turns without seeing the guy's face screams:cant u see are u mad are u blind she stops
tht guy walks towards her n says:are u mad court jke beech kadi rahogi toh ball lagegi hi na
kria:app...
guy:just shut up aur jao yaha se nahi toh aur lagegi n leaves from the court
the guy who mises the ball call out the guy who was fihgitng wth kria:rey rukh sun
the guy who was fihgting wid kria was rey reyaansh singhania n the person running behind him was vicky rey's chuddy buddy
kria is just standing there silent
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a girl walkes itno the colleage with a sweet smile on her face with little attittude on her face the diva of the colleage
SHARON RAIPRAKASH
as she was walking she sees a guy a sweet n cute boy tall with a cute hair cut she was just smiling at him as he was with his team enjoying himself
sharon had always liked him from the day she had talked to him he was so cute sharon wasjust looking at him wen rey n vicky get in there
vic:rey sun yaar listen to me
the guy n his team turn n they see sharon was staring at them n vicky was gng behind rey
tth guy walkes to sharon:sharon any prob tum hame aise kyu dekh rahi hoon
sha:woh swayam im wanted to talk to u abt a event as u are the AC.S
swa:event par ab toh koi eevnt nahi araha hai
sha:swayam woh princi ne tumhe aur humhe bulaya hai
swa:kkk
he turns but sharon says
sha:bye swayam
swayam turns towards sharon he dint wanna respond as he dosent like the dazzlers but he smiles n goes
sharon was happy
swayam goes to his team n says they have to go to princi n thinks in his mind:yeh sharon abhout weird hai sharon hi nahi woh pura team rey,vicy,nilesh,simmi,rinni sab i just dnt knw i dnt like them god kab peecha chutega in dazzlers se mera
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DAZZLERS N WEAKLINGS TEAM IN PRINCI'S OFFICE
princi:as youl noe ki tum dono teams footloose main st luis ko represnt kar rahe ho par weklings team ko ek 6th dancer ani ek girl ko apne team main lena hoga warna tum log part nahi le paoge
vishaka:par sir we dnt need one
neha:ya sir hum mange kar lenge
pr9inci:par u need to have one its compulsory sorry guys
swa:chill sir hum kar lenge
bharat whipsers to swayam:abe tera dimaag kharab hogaya hai kya 6th dancer???????
swa:tu pagal ho gaya hai agar 6th dancer anhi kayi toh hum footloose se out joh main nahi chahtha looking at the dazzlers
amar:pal swayam tu janta hai ki hamale col main koi acha dance anhi kalta
princi hears tht n says":amar sayd nahi hogi but ek baar dundo toh sahi
princi:n dazzlers tab tak app apne rehershals shru kar sakthe hai but weaklings jab tak apko apni 6th danxcer nahi milthi app practice nahi karenge
weaklings:wht???????
sha:but sir thts not rite
dazzlers are just staring at her
vicky tells nil:sharon pagal ho gayi hai kya
simmi n rinni tell sharon:stop it sharon
sharon shuts up
n swayam is just staring at dazzlers swayam in his mind:oh god main jitna chatha hoon ki inke sath acha raho yeh log mujhe utna hi majboor karte hai inhe hate karne ke liye
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kria was roaming around the coll wen he bangs into rey
rey:ohhh tum
kria:ha main
rey:coll main nayi ho na
kria:ha main woh...
rey:toh tumhe pata hai yaharagging bhi hoti hai
kria:wht?????
rey:ha u heard it rite ragging
everyone gather around to see kria get ragged by rey
rey:DANCE KARO
kria:wht????no main
rey:imaine pucha nahi tumse main tumhe bol raah hoon dance item no nahi cahiye hip hop
kria:wht????dekhiye meri baat
rey:itna respect aww s sad ki tum mujhe jitna respect de rahi hoon main tumhe utna nahi de sakta ab dance karo
everyone were ready with their phones to reord this one but for their suprise kria dance preety well
rey was shokced as everyone were staring at him n rey was dam angry
rey:yeh dance kar sakthi hai
everyone just go from there
rey:stop it he screams
he walks towrads her n syas:tum dance kar sakthi hoon??????par aj subah toh tumne kaha tha ki tu he dance nahi ata
kria:main woh...
rey:tum itna acha jhoot bhi bol leti hoon pehele mere ghar par rehkar mera ghar infect kar rahi hoon aur ab coll main era mazak
kria:wht do u mean ki main apka ghar infect kar rahi hoon
dekhiye mujhe koi shok nahi hai apke ghar par rehne ka agar meri mom n apke dad best friends anhi hote na bachpan se toh rehthi bhi nahi par sayad aopp bhool gaye hai appke dad ke force karne ke wajhses hi main apke ghar par reh rahi hoon
vicky cumes n says kya hua rey
rey:she is the girl joh mere ghar main reh rahi hai arey woh dad ki best freind ki beti mere ghar ko infect kar rahi hai
kria:heloo ji pure duniya ko batane ki jaroorat nahi hai
rey:kyu na batao main yeh best friend hai mera mera chddy buddy main bataunga use kya kar logi tum
vic:rey forget it yaar chal
he tajkes rey n rey is turning at her n glaring kria too turns n glare at him
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this was chap 1
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swaron toghther in rehershal hall
viha talking for the first tym in lifeπŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first of ol me first one to comment yey !!! me will edit my comment aftr reading it meri rasmalai !!πŸ€—
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aakshu jaan dat wad soo sweet update meri jaan !!
ur sweetness was so evident in it !! i just loved the bb court scene !!
jaan u roacked it !!
now update soon ! samjhi !!





Edited by upasna_mishti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I luvd th chapter ... KR ka intro was dhamaka & th ragging bit too- u stunned me with Swaron but I like ur attitudewala Swayam & sweet wali Sharon - so Kriya Swayam ke team ki 6th dancer - nice turn of events - I'm sure ur fff will rock( 😊

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