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anumber1

@anumber1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#911

I am 100% ok with this being long as long as the story goes where you want it to go. Lol, that was mighty awkward with Aman walking in on them and all. And yeah, they are definitely ready to take their relationship to the next level. The conversation about criminals and religion was great. I always get excited when main characters have real conversations. Great work!

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#912

Intense chapter! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#913

wow! what an amazing chapter! thanks for the PM, im always commenting on your work becuase it's always fantastic and never lets me down.. continue whenever you can i'll always be stalking your FF lol.. take care :)

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#914

nice update !! loved it !!

well Arnav should tell her the thuth now after he saw her helping that criminal !! he should trust her, because I don't want her to learn about Arnav from someone else !!

Aman I do understand him but I feel so sad because Arnav really trusts him and he'll be broken when he'll learn Aman betrayed him !!

thank you 🤗🤗

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#915

Great update love how comfortable and close Arnav and Khushi are getting hope he trust her soon enough to tell her the truth about him especially after the incident with the criminal.

I really feel for Aman as much as i dont want him to betray Arnav and put Khushi or Arnav in any danger, you have to sympathise with him especially when it is his families lives at risk.

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#916

Oh god aman is so selffish.
Well khushi can digest truth if arnav asap tell her abt his life.

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#917

i somehow feel horrible for aman.. because the state he is in.. i would not want my worst enemy to be in..

beautiful parts.. i am enjoying the story the way it is going..

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ssaaaa

@ssaaaa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#918

Ohhh shooot no way is Aman gonna harm Khushi?? Poor Arnav!

Your note in the last chapter scared me that Arhi would split, but after see khushi's reaction I see a little hope still. Hope the don't split for too long.

Love this FF. Thanks for the PM

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#919

progress so far has been good...

arnav -khushj have spent considerable time with each other ...thevrelations now stronger. Lot of instances and words said by khushi has now given hopes to arnav to lead a normal life. In fact I feel the child in arnav is so strong that he lives it fully with khushi. I liked the last few chapters and as you said needed for the storm to come.

aman coming back has given a new lead to the story as the news would spread easily. I feel the last line said by aman won't hold for long as khushi has the ability to make a place in his life too... Where he would maybe respect n care for...

thanks 4 the updates...hopefully your not too stressed as mentioned in previous chapter and your doing ok...

take care

sri.