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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

Loved it ... would really miss it if you left it incomplete 😕

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NILOUFER

@BARUN-myladdu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

no wayz hun... U R NT GOING ANYWHERE!!
v love u here...n ur ffs so take as much time as u want...bt jst keep writing..v r ready 4 an update once a week...bt u r staying...dtz it!!!

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kaymail

@kaymail

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Posted: 13 years ago

#863

Nice, waiting for next update.

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DhwaniKS

@DhwaniKS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#864

It was just superb...as gud as it cud b...

Waiting for d next part...

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#865

That was a wonderful chapter!:)

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#866

sorry for not commenting for long actually i had been out of stsation and busy with my exms so finally i m back to IF

the updates are amazing!

thnx for the pm dear!

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#867

oh that was a great update dear

so she shifted into his house they had their first official fight and then they maked it up beautifully

i loved the whole part

and me just waiting to see when his control snaps

but i want all the truth out btw them before and intimacy happens

continue soon👏

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umama shahid

@umamashahid

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#868

wowww!!!!!! that was really a nice update...as expected she went all by herself to his bed...she is actually bcuming mischievous day by day...arnav really meant what he said about the morning routine...bt i dont know exactly why m i having a feeling that aman will use khushi against arnav's dear life...hope its not so...well continue soon

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dhahi

@dhahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#869

Superb updates...

Poor Arnav n poor Khushi...

feelin sorry for both of them...

Bur Arnav took Khushi to his home? Is it safer?

What ll he answer to Aman n all other ppl who might be visitin him?

tak care...

dont stress urself too much...

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#870

Hi,

it's a wonderful FF ! You have stolen my sleep !!

Really I can't praise you enough, it's well written, and very interesting writing style : writing in every character's pov !!

I love your characters, all quite different from the serial but they're realistic ! you write their emotions so well, that I do understand them especially Aman and Aakash !!

And of course Khushi and Arnav their chemistry is awesome !!

But I feel sad for them because I guess their love affair is going to be quite difficult when Khushi will come to know about Arnav's real face !

suspense, thrill, action, romance there is everything in this FF !

I know you don't want to do career in writing but you should propose it in a production house, I'd love to see you FF on screen ! I'm sincere !

I always love predicting, so my prediction is that Lavanya is going to MU Khushi because of that file, Khushi'll learn about Arnav either by Aakash or by Lavanya revealing that he's rishab !

I guess that Aakash is Arnav's relative by his mother's side and Abbas is Arnav's dad

Shyam is the one who's actually treathening Aman !

Well sorry for my english, actually I'm french so not that good in english 😕

Anyway thank you so much for such a wonderful FF,

I really enjoyed reading it

thanks to you I spent this week end without losing it ^^ (seriously I didn't think about the show at all ^^ I was only thinking about your FF)

that's for you 🤗🤗🤗

btw my name's also Rachele ^^