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Shreya

@-MKB-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#851

ohhh! finally an update filled with only arshi..

and no other characters...or any step leading to the truth...

poor khushi i understand her insecurities...

but glad that she understood him...and came and slept with him

loved it...

and poor arnav boy you sure have hell amount of self control...:P...

lets see till when will this resolve last?...

all in all a fantastic update...perfect be it her insecurities, his care, the first fight, the kiss, his inner demons, her understanding, the position in which they slept...

everything was just superb...

and shit it is sad to read that this FF will be ending soon..and that you will leaving IF...i understand ...hope what ever it is...it ends soon...

so that you will be able to join us if possible...:)

till then take care...and update when ever you get time...:)

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#852

hey...
it was just a wayyy too brilliant update...

khushi's confusion n then realization about the fact about arnav's silence was beautifully written...

loved the update...

n i felt sad about hearing u leaving the IF...

i know its completely ur decision but will pls give it a second thought...

looking forward for next part...:)

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#853

A SUPERB Update😍
Continue soonnn,pls😊
Pls dnt say that u are leaving IF,pls😔
I love to read ur ff's, os's & i dnt want them to b stooped😔
Moreover I dnt wat u to leave us,pls😔
Plss dnt go-its a request 4rm a frnd 😔

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#854

Wow that was a brilliant update! I feel really sorry for arnav!

His life is totally messed up!

I hope khushi stands by him when he is going through the worst phase of his life!

Great update! :) Just loved it!

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#855

dat was an awesome update..👏
i loved it..
do continue soon..😊

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#856

Great update! Can' t wait to read more!

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Saniya

@saniya.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#857

You're leaving IF? Aw, I wish you all the very best in your life!🤗

Well I'm glad you'll finish the FF, I think I would've gone insane if you left it incomplete since this is such a good and addictive FF! I loved this chapter, Arnav's life is a mess right now! I found it really cute how Khushi snuggled up next to him after their little fight! Fab chapter, continue soon! :)

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mysterious_maze

@mysterious_maze

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#858

Brilliant that is all I can say for the last update. You are super amazing at describing the emotions of Arnav and Khushi.

Khushi knew he loves her but part of her telling her that she was rejected.She knew he is a man of less words but she still wants him to express his feeling for her and confess his love. That's so natural but being a selfless soul she always find a way to blame herself for everything. Awe she could not sleep after a fight with him.

Arnav you are not a coward man, you are just deeply and irrevocably in love with our Khushi. You just can't bear her pain that your truth will cause her. But hiding the truth will lead to more risk in your life so spit out the truth. You are worried for her and having nightmares about her leaving you that shows your helplessness.

All in all a mind-blowing update and I can read it again and again. Thank you so very much for entertaining us with your amazing work despite of all your domestic problems.

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#859

Awww.

Cute update, first fight, and then they made up just like that!

Of course they still need to talk, but their love and need for each other is so strong that they can't stay away from each other!

This was an awesome update, I like how you detailed both their thought processes and feelings.

Thank you!

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#860

I love ARHI filled updates... they warm my heart!

I don't know after all these moments will I be able to take the heartbreak that will and should follow!

Her living in his house... .I was thinking maybe he would marry her but I see their relationship is stronger and doesn't need an excuse. I am interested to see how this works with Aman and what will follow when others discover her role in his life...

I feel a storm brewing and I don't like it!