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mysterious_maze

@mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

i was like 😍 after reading enjoy the fluffy romance!😛 so i just skip the first part and jumped to the next which was all about arhi 🤪😳

but i read it 😃 and as i start reading i was like OMG some more characters 😭 some more names to remember 😡 and i was expecting that it was Aman who came to visit that Ramcharan Das , but nah he was some other guy. well tell us who many people are working for Khalid bhai and how many of them are betrayer???? well i must say you are really messing with our brains with all these names and am really bad in rememebring names so i have to pay extra attention to understand what is actually happening in the story 😭😭😭

and i just read your few OS and am loving your writing style you are gifted man really, keep it up and for me reading your stories is a treat 😃

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#762

That was a fabulous update!

I just loved arnav and khushi's moments! Not sure how much sweet moments will they get together in the future! But these are the moments to be cherished!

Loved it totally!

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#763

Everything Seems SO Perfect Before The Storm :| * Sighh *

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anu

@anu17

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#764

really all five updates took some time and imagine it also..

wow can't wait for the next part...waiting

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#765

Wow, dis is one amazing ff!!!
Luv it!!!
Every character, every emotion is so beautifully portrayed!!
I just love it!
I just love Arnav is this FF, he is so mysterious, and his childhood is so sad, I nearly cried!!!
Love ur FF, keep up with the good updates hun :)

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#766

aww amazing

but i m scared of reality

how khushi will react to reality

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Saniya

@saniya.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#767

The light moments between ArHi made me go all aww! I loved how he's there for her! I'm just really scared for Arnav, once they find out about Khushi then that's it! Fab chapter, continue soon! :)

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#768

OMG. A betrayer. But this is so common in this goons world!

So much love between them..

How much pressure would it bear when it faces the reality?

thanks for the pm..

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Salsa

@coldy07

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#769

Update Yayy!!!🥳

I loved it. This was a perfect blend of suspense, drama and love! 😃

First of all, loved the way you described the whole dirty place..I could actually visualise.

And yeah, so this is one man from Khalid Bhai, who is threatening Aman. Could be Shyam..Perfect example of a person who could be after money and women😈

Loved Das Bhai's dialogues after the traitor left. Once a traitor, always a traitor. Nice thought process .😆

And yeah, I loved the ArHi bonding here. They are so caring to each other. It's like, he's living the life he's wanted all these years. If only he could shut off the underworld. Till now, no one from that world knows about Khushi except Abbas, and Akash. Let's see how the dynamics change once Khushi comes into the picture. Das Bhai specifically asked for anyone close to Arnav. he's trying to find his weak spot. 😲

I loved that Khushi confessed her feelings..😳 SO subtle, yet beautiful. This is gonna go a long way! And I'm loving it. Looking forward to the next update!😃