New Maaneet FF Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na#3 link#4 pg140 - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago
shocking n scary teaser
plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next update I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it.I dedicate this update to my dear friend Monali.
love-Piya
PART 21

She was waiting for his arrival desperately as she was sure that from today the most memorable and divine love story is going to start 'but she had forgotten THAT AFTER EVERY BEAUTIFUL MORNING THERE IS A HORRIFIC NIGHT'

It was almost 5 hours since Maan's departure Geet was getting desperate now finally she decided to call him and find out the reason for his delay

She dials his number

Maan: Hello

Geet: Maan aap kaha ho main kabse aapka intezaar kar rahi hoon aap kab lautoge bataiyena Maan ab aapse ek pal ki duri bhi bardash nahi ho paa rahi hai [Maan where r u? I am waiting for u since so long pls come back soon as I can't bear even a moment's distance from u]

Maan: Geet main ek ghante mein ghar aa raha hoon aur waise bhi mujhe humare rishte ko lekar tumse bahut zaruri baat karni hai [Geet Iwill be back in an hour as it is I ned to discuss something important regarding our relationship]

Geet (started blushing) Geet ki aakhon ko toh humesha aaphi ka intezaar rehtha hai Maan [Geet's eyes are always waiting for ur arrival Maan]

Maan: Thik hai Geet ab main phone raktha hoon baaki ki baate ghar pe aane k baad karenge aur suno kahi jaana nahi jo baat main tumse kehna chahtha hoon wo HUMARE RISHTE k liye bahut important hai [Okay Geet I am ending the call but yes don't go anywhere as the discussion that I need to do with u is really important for OUR RELATIONSHIP]

He emphasized of OUR RELATIONSHIP and immediately ended the call'

Geet: Humara rishta 'main jaanti hoon Maan aap mujhse yahi kahoge k Geet ab ye rishta koi publicity k liye nahi hai balki hum dono milkar iss rishte ko iss duniya ka sabse khoobsurat aur paak rishta banaeyge 'main jaanti hoon aap aaj khud mujhe apni ardhangani ka haq doge [Our relationship'. I know Maan u will confess that now r relationship is no longer a publicity stunt we will decorate our relation with the beautiful folds of love so that it will bcm the most pure and divine bond of this world'I am sure today u will accept me as your wife and your soulmate by confessing your feelings]

Geet: Main aapka intezaar kar rahi hoon Maan jaldi aayiye [I am waiting for ur arrival Maan come soon]

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aFpZb4T1MnQ

Music

She kissed the handset of the phone and placed it near her heart as if reliving those precious words of Maan'Our Relationship yes our realtionship

Oh tora saajan aayo tere desh

Badli badra badla saawan

Badla jag ne bhes re

Tora saawan aayo tere desh'

She felt like dancing yes today was the most blessed morning of her life'her Maan was going to confess his feelings'oh she felt so special oh she started blushing just by thinking the different ways through which Maan will propose her

Soyi soyi palko pe chalke mere sapno k khidki pe aa gaya

Aate jaate phir mere dil k in haatho mein wo khath pakda gaya

She took his photo and started admiring it; oh she felt so proud that the most handsome man of this earth was her possession yes he was only hers'

Pyar ka'lafzo mein rang hai pyar ka'

But then once again she started missing him'she started loking here and there how should she pass her time till her love arrives

Bahara bahara hua dil pehli baar re

Bahara bahara k chain toh hua faraar re

Bahara bahara hua dil pehli pehli baar re'

She got an idea and rushed towards their bedroom'she closed the door and within a matter of few minutes she changed her clothes and dressed up herself in Maan's shirt and started dancing in joy as she could feel him within her yes she could sense his fragrance in her breaths

Oh tora saajan aayo tere desh

Badli badra badla saawan

Badla jag ne bhes re

Tora saawan aayo tere desh'

Suddenly an idea struck her mind'she thought when Maan was doing some special arrangements for her it is also her duty to make him feel special'yes she will also arrange a surprise for him

Music

She got up immediately and started the preparations. She took fresh rose flowers and started decorating the living room with the colors of her love

Once this was done she started making cute and loving gifts for Maan on every gift she had written I love u'

She arranged all the gifts and cards on the table beautifully'She gave a romantic feel to the entire room by decorating it with beautiful red color curtains; she placed red and white colored heart shaped ballons on the floor'Oh everything was looking so perfect

Finally she placed wine glasses on the table'

Wo..o..o.. kabhi dhike zameen pe kabhi wo chand pe

Yeh..e.ee'ee.. nazar kahe usse yaha main rakhloo band ke

She decided to dress up perfectly for Maan; she rushed to their bedroom and removed all her beautiful attires and started dressing up'she selected a green anarkali outfit and went and stood in front of the mirror'she felt as if Maan was admiring her

Ek saas mein dhadkano k paas mein

Haan paas mein ghar banaye haan bhule ye jahah

Maan was gesturing that she was looking beautiful but her beauty was priceless and hence she should try some other dresses as well'Geet started trying different outfits and everytime she would come and stand in front of the mirror to know Maan's choice

Bahara bahara hua dil pehli baar re

Bahara bahara k chain toh hua faraar re

Bahara bahara hua dil pehli pehli baar re'

A naughty thought crossed her mind and she decided to seduce her husband' she got into a sexy blue color saree and with killer and seducing expressions she stood in front of the mirror 'she blushed as she imagined Maan's reaction

Preet mein tori o re sawariyaan

Payal jaise chance bhijuriyaan

Her attention got diverted as the sky started pouring its blessing in the form of rain she immediately rushed outside to enjoy and celebrate the occasion of her love

Cham cham naache tan pe badariyaan oh oh oh'

Baadaliya tu barse ghano'bharse ghano bharse ghano'

She was dancing like a peacock as the heavely pearls were redefining her beauty

She looked so innocent yet so adorable

Aa aa'.aaa aa aa'AA aa..aa..aa'

All of a sudden a shiver ran through her body as she felt Maan's warm breath on her skin 'which in a matter of seconds got converted into hot sensous passionate kisses

She turned around with Maan's possessive touch and she saw him dressed as a bridegroom and with his one touch he had dressed her up as a beautiful bride

Sargam'

Their eyes meet and she relived the memories of the last night'

Jo..oo..oo. ye badaliyaan wo ched de toh chalke baarishein'

Wo ..oo'oo.. de aahathe kareeb se toh bole khwaishe he aaj kal

There was a lightening in the sky which brought her back to her senses'she smiled at her innocent and naughty thoughts and herself took her duppata and placed it on her head as if declaring to the universe that she is the luckiest girl as she is the bride of her Maan

Zindagi har ek pal'har ek pal usse chahe haan jiska dil hua

She continued dancing in the tunes of his love but then realized that she was completely drenched and she has to look perfect when her Maan arrives'she once again gets back to her room and takes a quick shower and comes out in a towel and starts looking for the perfect outfit that will go with the liking of Maan

Bahara bahara hua dil pehli baar re

Bahara bahara k chain toh hua faraar re

Bahara bahara hua dil pehli pehli baar re'

Finally she knew what she had to wear 'she dried herself and selected a black saree as she knew Black was the favourite color of her Maan' She looked so beautiful that the night sky would also die in shame in front of her majestic beauty

Soyi soyi palko pe chalke mere sapno k khidki pea a gaya

Aate jaate phir mere dil k in haatho mein wo khath pakda gaya

She started doing the touch up of her face to add that extra glow to her beauty

Pyar ka'lafzo mein rang hai pyar ka'

She was now decorating herself like a beautiful bride who was awaiting the arrival of her hubby dearest

Bahara bahara hua dil pehli baar re

Bahara bahara k chain toh hua faraar re

Bahara bahara hua dil pehli pehli baar re'

She was finally satisfied yes she was now looking like Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana'beautiful, elegant and Maan's most valuable possesion

Oh tora saajan aayo tere desh

Badli badra badla saawan

Badla jag ne bhes re

Tora saawan aayo tere desh'

She took a joint photograph of both of them and placed it in a beautiful way right at the centre of the room announcing to the world that they r made for each other and no one can separate them

Her crazy heart was thinking that the entire universe was joining in her happiness but poor soul she was totally unaware that this shower of rain was participating in her grief as they knew it was just a matter of seconds before she would face the harshest reality of her life'and her aspirations would be crushed in such a way that she will never ever think of dreaming'FROM TODAY SHE WOULD PREFER LIVING A NIGHTMARE RATHER THAN WEAVING A DREAM

Precap: TWIST: - The sindoor slipped from her hand as her entire world collapsed in a matter of seconds' it seemed that she had constructed a house from a pile of cards and today a gust of wind was enough to destroy the existence of her house'

OKAY GUYS LET ME CLEAR ONE THING HERE ITSELF MAAN IS ALIVE SECONDLY THERE IS NO STUPID DRAMA OF MEMORY LOSS THIRDLY GEET IS NOT GOING TO BE PREGNANT whatever twist is going to take place would be for the betterment of the story GEET'S STRONG CHARACTER WILL COME OUT SHE WILL NEVER BE A WEAKLING SHE WILL B A TIGRESS'

I had already mentioned that this FF is different from rest of my FFs it is an emotional story and once again let me tell u MAAN WILL HAVE TO PROVE HIS LOVE TO REWIN GEET

It's a humble request be with the story and I promise u will love the end as I will gift u with an unforgettable story of Maaneet which will remain in your memories forever

PLS PRESS D LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT

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Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part.
Waiting for next part di.
Edited by SONU_29 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
sioerb
oh god wht is happebing to msk
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow me come 1st who commented.
Edited by SONU_29 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
don't know
let see what happend after 2/3 part 😕

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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
i think nt is backkk😉
Edited by maaniqra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
well ab maan ko kya hua 😲
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update👏
Liked the song.⭐️.Geet imagination with maan amazing..
Last part scary..😲Poor geet😭
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
Edited by srirad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
iam really scred with the teaser.piya di dont seperate our maneet.god know why everyone wnt maneet to be seperated for a while first in mels ff then in urs.
i dunno why this like button isnt wrking.seems like i should report ht e problem.but i dunno to whom

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