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aashshhs

@aashshhs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Loving this SS it is so very different. thanks a lot for the pm, keep them coming :) :) :)

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Aiyo ASR part 2 aynu is so cuye like his father
For wooing samara aw he had to be like dat
N I like Akashu a lot too
Great SS continue soon

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Just read Unbelievable, then this! Beautiful! BTW, i love the names Ayaan and Amara. They are both very eloquent and beautiful! Please continue soon, and PM me when you do! :)

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Neha

@melovemayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

"Chupaya kyon, Ayaan?"
But I guess he wl hav an explanation for dat too!! after all he is Ayaan Singh Raizada!!

Btw I lovd Ayaan - Samara love story!!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Aveiro
I just read unbelievable, little girl and this!!

Love it!

It's soo cutee

Awww! Thank You for reading all three! You are a very good reader! :D

Glad you liked them all! :)

Originally posted by: ArhiAbhiya
omg read from the beginning and both o them parts were fabulous...thanks for the pm:D...and omg siblings...*phtt*

-Simran-

Thank You! :)

Glad you are liking it! :)

And yep siblings...they are one naughty lot! ;) :D

Originally posted by: anumber1
O man, he went all ASR on her to finally get her to admit she loves him. And that last question! I def would not want to be Arnav Singh Raizada's child. I would be like...uhhh, I love you Daddy?

The last line made me laugh so hard! HAHAHAHAHA!

And yep, the ASR touch was deliberate...people were calling him too much like Khushi...the Arnav part took offence. ;) :D

But unlike his father, he finished the kiss and started the second one too! ;) :D

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: virman_4_ever
poor aayan

Arnav is making him scared

wonderful update awesome

loved it

Hahahahaha! Yep he is.

Thank You! :)

Glad you are liking it.

Originally posted by: crazy44
aww. ayaan. he is just like his father !!
and akashays descriptn was brilliant rae !!
the love story was really realLy cuTe :)
and the last line, i gues arnav is hurt! they were close na?
now i cant wait to c ayans reaction !
beauTiful rae!
i LOVEEED it :D
thanks 4 the pm !!

Just before this chapter, everyone was saying he is just like his mother! ;) :D

Lets just say he is a perfect amalgam! ;) :D

Yep, Arnav is hurt...lets see what happens now! ;)

Thank You so much! :)

Originally posted by: MairaKhan1180
Thank you so much for updating quickly
Needless to say its great:)

Hahahaha! Thank You! :)

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Rae...I really enjoyed the first 2 updates. Loved Arnav's question..."Chupaya kyon, Ayaan?" Is it the Pot calling the Kettle black? 😛 Like ASR was so forthcoming with info with his family on all o his relationships. Arnav possibly recognizes that the Apple doesn't fall far from the Tree!!😉

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels
omg i love this Raizada faimily!
too cute!

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: flowers4u
yes ayaan why hide ...lol hope shes not related to shaym lol

Hahahaha! Ewww! No Shyamu in my fic and besides if there was one, this would be a FF not a SS. :p

Originally posted by: sylviee
Eagerly waiting for the next part! :D

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: psarada
Unbelievable girl. Too good. Really loved reading this part. I could completely visualize the dialogues, the masti and Arnav and Khushi's concern. Looking forward to the whole story. You really made my day. Would be stalking this post for the next update.

Ah...I did not miss the play of words! 'Unbelievable', hain? ;) :D

Thank You so much! Glad you liked it! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: ridizzz
Wonderful work...really like it.
I can imagine the whole setting...

You are one fab writer

keep it up

and update soon

Thank You so much! :)

Glad you are liking the story and my writing style!

Originally posted by: archielicious
aww.very bad arnav baby gussa ho gaya.:)
ayaan gosh so cute n complete package of his mother and father..
samara seems lovely girl.
waiting for her entry.
thnx for pm

Hahahaha! Yep he is! ;) :D

Samara entry soon.

Thank You so much! :)

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
Lol, after all that Arnav said, "chuppaya kyun?"
well, he's one heck of a protective father after a possessive lover!

great story! i love all your works! they all have a fresh breathe of air in them!

Woh toh hai! ;) :D

Thank You so much! :)

Glad you think so.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Poonam786
Beautiful update.. I loved Arnav and Akshay's relationship.. The man to man talk which no one else was ever privy to.. Very subtle strokes you've used to depict their relationship.. Beautifully done.. And Priyanka coming into his life - his very own Khushi, to break down the walls he'd consciously built around his heart.. Brilliant!

Loved Akshay, Karan and Ayaan's camraderie.. Loved Khushi and Akhsay's relationship..

Ayaan and Samara's story was lovely.. The private memory - very sweet.. The family's joy - wonderful.. And then that last sentence.. Chupaya kyon.. Powerful ending to the chapter.. Made me sit up all of a sudden, thinking, arre haan, chupaya kyon?

You are one hell of a writer, Rae.. Loved it! :)

Thank You so much! :)

Many people wanted more on Akshay, hence gave them a dimension I think ArHi will or should have with Anjali's child. Yep, Priyanka was his very own 'Khushi' :)

Hahahahaha! Yep, chupaya kyon Ayaan bitwa? :D

Thank You so much! :)

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