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Archie

@archielicious

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

aww.very bad arnav baby gussa ho gaya.:)
ayaan gosh so cute n complete package of his mother and father..
samara seems lovely girl.
waiting for her entry.
thnx for pm

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Lol, after all that Arnav said, "chuppaya kyun?"

well, he's one heck of a protective father after a possessive lover!

great story! i love all your works! they all have a fresh breathe of air in them!

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Beautiful update.. I loved Arnav and Akshay's relationship.. The man to man talk which no one else was ever privy to.. Very subtle strokes you've used to depict their relationship.. Beautifully done.. And Priyanka coming into his life - his very own Khushi, to break down the walls he'd consciously built around his heart.. Brilliant!

Loved Akshay, Karan and Ayaan's camraderie.. Loved Khushi and Akhsay's relationship..

Ayaan and Samara's story was lovely.. The private memory - very sweet.. The family's joy - wonderful.. And then that last sentence.. Chupaya kyon.. Powerful ending to the chapter.. Made me sit up all of a sudden, thinking, arre haan, chupaya kyon?

You are one hell of a writer, Rae.. Loved it! :)

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

The way u wrote it rae, it felt like I personally know each and evryon elf the gong raizadas. It was really very beautiful. Akshay's past and the way he stood up with anjali was something that evry parent expect from his/her child.

While reading abt ayaan's love story, abt the way he grabbed sama and kissed her, I thought I was reading abt arnav coz it's his trademark style.

This ficlet is really very sweet, continue soon

Edited by chillygirl - 13 years ago

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shaam91

@shaam91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

this was very cute.. the cozy family scene..the comraderie..i hopw anjali has found her happiness yaar.:\

apart from that akshay reminds me a little of arnav and so does ayaan..:)

cute story!!

and yahan pe bhi payash ke bachchon ko ignore!!..:P..lol!! non happening crowd!

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

A mature Arnav coping with Family, nice.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

:-) what a way to say good morning. Will read and comment in a couple of hrs

Edit:

Awww I love it love it!!

Akshay and Arnav - There was potential there I knew it and you've done so well by it. I loved how you described his focus on his wife even while sitting there amidst his family. A little history into their past was fun. I can imagine that he looks exactly like Arnav.

By the way, as soon as you said Khushi Maami, I almost expected her to say Hello Hi Bye Bye :)

And Ayaan! Sigh...Cute little love story between Ayaan and Samara (love the short Sama!)

And now I cannot wait for the next part. Arnav's "Chupaya kyun?" was so heartfelt.

Time for a father-son conversation, huh?

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Just read unbelievable and I loved it! :)

Lovin the sequel as well!! PM when you update please!!!! 😊

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Great SS...cute story of the next R generation!

-Sona

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

That was beautiful family scene ❤️. Ayaan's love story was cute 😍 , the Farq pada was really cute 😉 . I loved Akshay's relationship with his mama- mami too . This Akshay dude seem More like Arnav than Ayaan .

Arnav just said " Chupaya kyon , Ayaan ? now even I am tensed and anticipating about what his reaction going to be . 😆