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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOTE - There have been issues of plagiarism recently and they worry me like they would worry any writer. So I have two options - either to stop writing on IF or to expect from my readers a sincerity in their thoughts and actions and also a sense of responsibility towards this in the sense that I expect them to inform me if they find this/something starkly similar anywhere...can I do that? :)



Disclaimer - Characters you recognize belong to 4 Lions Production but the ones you dont are original and are mine.



Plot - This is a sequel to 'Unbelievable' (so you should read this if you havent to get a better idea but this can be read separately too).
Ayaan Arnav Singh Raizada has something important to tell to his parents. Lets see what it is and how it goes.


This is a sequel/spin off of sorts to 'Unbelievable' and 'My little girl'. Written basically because I cannot let go off 'Unbelievable' and I want some light moments with ArHi! :p

So you can read those two to get a better idea but this can be read separately too.

This will be a short story (2-3 parts I think) and it is very experimental so whether or not it will be continued will depend solely on the response.


Hope you like it.


I am already writing a proper FF on ArHi but its a completely different genre from this - dark, depressing and full of twists or so I think. Its called 'You're not the only one' if you be interested.




"Finally!"

Part 1



"Papa?"



Arnav Singh Raizada looked up from his file to see his son fidgeting at the doorway of his bedroom, his nervousness shining through making Arnav forget all work and give his undivided attention to his son.



"Kya hua? Andar aao."



Ayaan entered the room that had been his refuge for the many years of his childhood, where he had ran to from his mother as she tried feeding him vegetables and where he had played run and catch with his father and where he had marvelled at his sister as she lay on the bed gurgling and wide eyed, a small little baby.



Behind him came the paltan of youngsters - siblings and cousins and their respective other halves, all trying hard to hide the grin on their faces while a naughty glint shone in their eyes.



Khushi had come by now to stand beside her husband, the nervousness in her son's voiced not missed by her or the teasing glint in the eyes of the others.



"Ayaan, kya hua?" she tried, her motherly protectiveness kicking in.



"Woh...I mean...I..."



His son never stammered and a certain fear crept into Arnav's mind too, getting up he strode across to his son and kept a comforting hand on his shoulder, willing him to go on and shot a warning glance at the rest who were now trying to stifle their laughter into their hands.



"Aynu, office mein kuch hua hai kya?" Khushi asked, now standing directly in front of her flushed with red son, guiding him by the hand to sit on the bed and taking a seat next to him, caressing his arm, giving him the motivation to go on and telling him without words that she would be his support system like always.



Ayaan seemed to be having a conversation with himself, Arnav noticed, with all the shaking of his head, mumblings under his breath and nodding lightly to himself - making arguments like he always did - in his head.



That was the way he had always worked, Arnav knew from observing him not only as his son but also as his employee. Ayaan Arnav Singh Raizada always had both sides of an argument ready in his head before he ventured forward - which made him not only a balanced individual in his personal life but also a successful and smart businessman. Arnav had always admired this trait in his son, so starkly different from how he functioned largely - reaching a conclusion without analysing it as thoroughly as it should have been.



"Papa, Maa?"



"Haan...bolo?" said Khushi, knowing that whatever it was had been analysed enough in her son's mind and he would not continue undeterred.



"I am in love. Uska naam Samara hai, woh ek teacher hai, she is from Dehradoon staying here with her cousin family aur main usse bahut pyaar karta hoon and by some miracle woh bhi mujhe pasand kar ti hai ya actually finally karne lagi hai...Thank God! Main chahta hoon aap sab log usse ek baar mil lein because I plan on proposing to her very soon."



*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.


Part 2 - Page 7
Part 3 - Page 21
Part 4 - Page 34
Part 5 - Page 50
Part 6 - Page 60
Part 7 - Page 67
Part 8 - Page 77
Part 9 - Page 87
Part 10 - Page 98
NOTE - Page 104
Part 11 + Note - Page 124
Part 12 - Page 140

NEW THREAD -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3053692/finally-version-1-blog-reopened-pg142

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PMs for this will only be sent to those who comment. :)


This is a sequel/spin off of sorts to 'Unbelievable' and 'My little girl'. Written basically because I cannot let go off 'Unbelievable' and I want some light moments with ArHi! :p


So you can read those two to get a better idea but this can be read separately too.

This will be a short story (2-3 parts I think) and it is very experimental so whether or not it will be continued will depend solely on the response.


So what do you think...should I continue?


Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago


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meera30 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww

I love, love, love this story!!

And I love Aynu!! Ayaan Arnav Singh Raizada promises to be as much a heart-breaker as his oh-so-awesome father and I love that!

I think I already like Samara. You are going to introduce her in the next part, right? I have a feeling she will be a lot like Arnav because despite everthing I think AYaan is more Khushi :) How did I get that? Description of him as a businessman - weighs the pros and cons, mutters to himself...i concede Khushi is a lot more impulsive but she is the one with the diary isn't she?

The eternal bachelor - ha ha...the children who say that are always the ones with the most dramatic love stories!

Did I mention I love this story?

Btw, I would like a little more insight into Akshay. I have a feeling that boy is probably just like his Mamu :)

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow that was nice! Really loved it!
You should continue! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww this is cute!!! payash took their time didnt they??
slowpokes!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luvd it... plz continue ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I would like to meet Samara, please😉

And what was ASR's reaction to AASR's decision to get engaged?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww..tht was such a lovely start..Little Ayan is all grown up nw and wants to get married :)
Loved the idea for a sequel..will be waiting for d nxt part.
Thanx for d pm. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😆i look forward tot the twist in this one 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it, Can't wait for the next update. Really looking forward to Arnav meeting his future DIL, somehow why do I feel that Arnav is going to be lot more nervous meeting Samara like he is meeting an opponent. Looking forward to the talk between the future father-in-law and daughter-in-law. Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant start...I've got a feeli g that Khushi and samara r gonna be a force to reckon with and both Mr ASR and Mr AASR will have their hands full with their respective wives...can't wait for the next part.

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