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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Beautifully written.

I was choked while reading this.

It is indeed a piece of art.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

That was an amazing, sad, heart breaking and emotional short story. I can't believe poor khushi committed suicide, honestly this story made me cry. Poor Arnav left it too late to repent or say sorry or even confess his love, he just could not take his lonely life that he killed himself as well. But the story had a beautiful ending, they both were finally reunited at the end. Even though the story was sad you wrote it both beautifully and exceptionally well xx

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reshkn

@reshkn

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Ijust loved the ss...

very beautiful and complete...

her confession..his realisation..very well portrayed..I could actually feel the pain they went through..

finally they are together in a different world of their own..just them...

Even if i read it again..I am sure to have tears...

u have a wonderful writing style bringing out the emotions through words..👏

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Smita Gogoi

@Gogoismita

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Had tears in my eyes i think that's enough to say that u r n amazing writer:)

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@..mrinalini..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Okay..no miracle..Nothing...Sad but hauntingly beautiful!!

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Hi.. I read abt this SS and searched for it. And it is Bautiful..

I never ever thought a mere 3 chapters ould make me cry.

I would love to read more of ur wrk. Do u have an index?

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Harshita

@Hanuharshita

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Oh God!!!! You got me crying!!! A heart wrenching story. I just started reading your works and this was the one that i chose first.

You have written it so beautifully.I cried the whole time reading it.My sister couldn't control herself at last and asked me irritated that who died Arnav or Khushi? When i told her that both died at last, she was like are you insane??? If they both didn't got separated then why are you crying.And in reply i only cried more.It is 2 am write now and all my family members are sleeping.Or else they would have been scandalized to see me crying like this!!!

I was so broken at the last that i was praying to God that please spare me the torture!!! I wonder what have you gotten through while writing this?? I don't have the heart to read this story again.Can't go through the same torture again and again!!!

And i feel like i am going to cry for two hours more, then only i will be able to get a little bit of sleep.See the effect of your story!!! Though i have seen the happy ending of the serial but i couldn't stop myself from getting effected this much.

Please,pretty please add me to your block.:) Or else this will be one of the regrets that i would have!! Though i am regretting why i didn't stumble upon you before.

My emai id is harshitahanu@gmail.com

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arshistar

@arshistar

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Hey, I just found this SS n read all the 3 parts in one go...donno what i'm even going to comment...right now i'm with a heavy heart...Just take a bow...thats it! Can't tell anything else...

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namita11

@namita11

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

dat was sooo beautiful, I cried...

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

No one would be able to say that this was your first work.

It had a depth of emotion that is difficult to put into words, and you managed to compress it into three concise updates, kudos for that!

More than anything, I liked the reason you gave for Khushi's decision.

Her Bauji, who had been with her through it all...she could never exist without him.

Also, thank you for giving us a rational Anjali who doesn't hide her head in the sand.

So Arnav repents, and his life is never the same again...

Once again, thank you for that kinda-sorta happy ending. I'm a sucker for those, and I would have cried if you hadn't written that part about them meeting again...

It reminded me of those lines from the Heer-Ranjha play, actually.

Beautifully written, Ridz!

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago