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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

It's a wonderful SS. Found the reference in inspiringstars recommended list of FF, and am very happy to have read it...😊

This was sad, painful... but the emotions were portrayed well... I cried also in some parts...

You mentioned in the start of the SS that this is your first attempt to write, but it seems to me that you have been writing for ages...👏
U r truly blessed with writing power...

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

That was written beautifully!👏

Loved it...very emotional though!

But the ending was soo good...i smiled.
It was the perfect ending.

For me it was a happy ending!😊
(though still feel sad that they are dead!)

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

I usually d0nt read st0ries related t0 death 0f l0ve 0nes because it makes me cry t00 much
Nevertheless I cudnt help reading it cuz it is s0 beautiful
0f c0urse I am crying while typing this but I just cudnt help it
The last part is by far the m0st beautiful and ag0nizing f0r me
0f c0urse I hate this 0S as much as I l0ve it

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

okay simply loved this!! this was amazing, sad, beautifull all of it put together in a big mix! i can't believe this is the first time u wrote 😲 the way you described Khushi's anguish, and arnav's guilt. bash. only if he realized it a bit before, khushi wouldn't have to go through the months of torture. the line about Khushi not caring about wat the f**k shyaam did or said, cus he wasnt important, really got to me! i mean only if arnav' wouldn't be so blind in the beginning and see all of it now.

Seeing the family coming, Shyam made his escape. If Khushi did die, he would have to continue his drama of loving Rani sahiba. Didn't make sense to lose all his ventures.that son of a bitch!! 😡i mean the woman's f**king dieing now. stop being an asshole for once! respect the dead!

gaah this was zoo sad, but yet so beautiful! i nearly had happy tears in my eyes. how arnav evolved. the part with believing in god but her not being there, and being in another world where his only mission was to give her happiness really got to me. i just wanted to go and hug him :) I'm sure khushi's waiting for him and waiting for him to fulfill his promise :')

beautiful story, you made me all blotchy :P humph

Edited by insanelycrazy - 12 years ago

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Part 1

Ok. I started with a dukhi part. Bauji dead :O

She already cut her vein?

*off to read the next part*

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Part 2

She is in coma and on a life support system. It has been three months and she is not awake yet :(

Arnav is talking to her.

He gave the green signal :(

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Part 3:

She is dead :( and so is he :( and finally they are at peace :)

Very sad

I have a lump in my throat :(

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

This was sadly beautiful... Sad for obviously the death but beautiful in the way the emotions are expressed and finally they were together. Finally he was home with her😊

It gave me an acute heartache..

Happy Birthday.. 😊